
The blade 'Anant,' the direct source of a black hole's power, rested in the hands of NebulaWarden, the first incarnation of Ton 618—the largest black hole with 40 billion solar masses. He had harnessed 34% of this immense power, more than any other celestial being.He was fighting the AlternationAce, a demon who achieved radiance by substituting his body with any being he saw. However, even with his powers, he struggled against the mighty NebulaWarden. The incarnation turned his enemy into nothingness with NullVisionary, his special eye. The memories of those dark eyes still brought fear among his predecessors.Hizari Tsukuyomi was a typical 15-year-old living in the village of Myakar, a unique place where inhabitants possessed eye powers granted by celestial objects such as the Sun, Moon, and asteroids. He lived a normal life with his little sister. His father, a farmer, wielded the LifeGaze eyes, enabling him to see the growth of any living being. His mother lay in a coma, her condition a constant shadow over their lives. Hizari, with his short black hair, practiced martial arts and meditation diligently. His best friend was Aya Nakamura, a mysterious girl of the same age who always wore a kimono of either red or black. She had beautiful long black hair and eyes that sparkled like stars, though this was not her power. Aya also attended the same school and dojo as Hizari.The best fighter in the dojo was Ragnar Steelhart, a charming figure with glowing yellow hair. He was the first to awaken his eyes at 15, the Hinotori, gifted by the Sun. His katana 'Adit' contained 4% of the Sun's power, signifying his lack of an innate technique.One dark night, while everyone slept, Hizari ventured into the cave where villagers mined precious minerals like amethyst, gold, and silver. Inside, he discovered a small hole emitting a flow of purple mana. Intrigued, he followed it and found a statue of the Architect and a large, gleaming temple adorned with diamonds and gold. Purple mana streamed from the temple’s gate. As he stepped inside, he saw a man standing amidst a warping aura, bending the very fabric of space and time. The man turned, his purple eyes locking onto Hizari, who collapsed under their gaze. The next day, miners found Hizari asleep, surrounded by amethyst and clutching a katana destined for him alone.When he awoke, he grabbed the katana and, in a commanding voice that wasn’t entirely his own, demanded, "WHERE IS THE NEXT ABYSSAL GATEWAY?!" He collapsed again immediately after. In his unconscious state, he dreamed of an entity speaking to him: "You are the right one; I choose you." Hizari asked, "Who are you?" but the man vanished, and Hizari woke up in the church. The miners, fearing demonic possession, had taken him there. Aya and his father stood nearby as Hizari, still groggy, heard a voice in his mind and repeated it aloud: "Demons will come flying out of the sky tomorrow night!"The following day, Hizari’s ominous prediction came true. Demons swarmed the village, preying on the weak. Hizari and Ragnar rushed to the scene, confronting the demon superintendent Zarax near the cave. Zarax, a tier 100 demon, possessed the terrifying ability to switch bodies with anyone he had known for more than ten years. His true form, if it could be called that, was a swirling mass of shadow and energy. His eyes were deep pools of darkness, reflecting vast knowledge and malevolence. His finely chiseled features, high cheekbones, and sharp jawline exuded an aura of regal superiority.Zarax demanded, "WHO TOOK THE POWER OF GALACTIC GAZER?" Both Hizari and Ragnar, confused, claimed ignorance. Zarax attacked, but Hizari’s innate ability, Amethyst Resonance, activated, shielding them with armor harder than any known. They drew their swords and prepared for battle. Ragnar activated his Hinotori eyes, swiftly incinerating the demon soldiers around him, leaving Zarax isolated. As Ragnar fought Zarax, giving Hizari time to meditate, the tide turned. Emerging from his meditation, Hizari’s eyes snapped open, and Zarax froze in place. Dark matter, reminiscent of NebulaWarden’s power, flowed through Hizari's eyes, rendering the battlefield utterly silent and devoid of life.Zarax tried to flee upon seeing the NullVisionary, but Hizari, now channeling a fraction of Ton 618's power, ended Zarax’s life without emotion. The katana transformed into a vantablack sword, absorbing 98% of light. Exhausted, Hizari collapsed. Just then, a screen appeared in the sky, broadcasting a message from Kyrion, the Lord of the Abyss, a tier 78 demon who had defeated the previous solar incarnation. The message, translated from the demon language, declared: "Your death will come sooner than expected, and your soul shall remain in my abyss!"Confused and alarmed, Hizari and Ragnar sought counsel from the village’s eldest, the church's father. He explained that demons sought the celestial powers granted to the villagers, which were denied to demons because they possessed inherent powers from birth. This revelation clarified much for Hizari and Ragnar, but questions about the mysterious temple remained unanswered.As the celestial powers within the village awakened, even children as young as five began to exhibit abilities. Aya Nakamura discovered her power, granted by Saturn, which allowed her to manipulate energy and launch projectiles from the sky. The size of these asteroids varied, with a slim chance of summoning massive ones.During a training session, Ragnar experienced flashbacks, his right eye bleeding. He found himself momentarily in 2016, encountering a relic that identified him as the chosen one. The relic fused with solar energy during a solar eclipse, resulting in Ragnar’s yellow eyes and his katana. He awoke from the flashback after only ten seconds, feeling as if he had been asleep for much longer.As Hizari touched his voidblade, his eyes turned completely black, showing him a glimpse of the future where he, Ragnar, Aya, and an unknown figure fought a tier 99 demon, Nightmare Seer. Seer, who had foreseen the battle in his dreams, alerted his ally, Shifty Shadekin. However, upon arriving on Earth, Shadekin encountered Raida Takashi, a man with the ability to secure a 100-meter radius of land, making intruders face maximum-powered attacks from within the area.The next wave of enemies attacked, and Hizari needed Raida’s help. When Raida set up his zone, Hizari and Ragnar entered without issue, but Aya’s stones attacked them, indicating Raida did not recognize them as allies. During the battle, Shadekin realized Nightmare Seer had betrayed him and surrendered to Hizari’s group. Meanwhile, Raida prepared to attack Ragnar, coveting his blade.In the forest, Raida set up a large defensive zone, unable to attack directly. Hizari, entering the void dimension, approached Raida from below and reappeared behind him, swiftly cutting his neck. An orb appeared near Raida's body, visible only to Hizari. A familiar voice informed him he could absorb the orb to gain Raida's ability or risk it for a new one. Hizari chose to absorb it, instinctively trusting the voice.With Raida defeated and new powers awakening within him, Hizari knew his journey was just beginning. The battle for their world was far from over, and the darkness within him was both a powerful ally and a constant threat.
Bro, I think you need to space this out a bit. Just for some better comprehension when reading your work
this is just the first chapter. I wrote it like 3 years ago. you can try to read the latest ones. I m still improving tho. thanks for the comment too. you are my first comment. appreciate it❤️