
Adrian slowly opened his eyes, blinking against the soft morning light filtering through the curtains. He found himself in an unfamiliar room, richly adorned with elegant furnishings. The room was spacious, with dark wooden floors and walls lined with intricate tapestries.
A grand four-poster bed, draped in fine silk, dominated the center, while a large ornate wardrobe stood against one wall. A plush armchair and a small writing desk completed the scene, giving the room a sense of noble yet faded grandeur.
As he tried to make sense of his surroundings, the door to his room creaked open. A maid stepped inside, her movements graceful and composed. She was his personal maid who had been assigned to him recently.
She was a stunningly beautiful young woman of 21 years. Her long, luscious blonde hair cascaded down her back in soft waves, shimmering like gold in the light.
Her deep blue eyes sparkled with a mix of innocence and allure, capable of melting anyone's heart with a single glance. Chris possessed a voluptuous figure, with a generously ample chest and a curvaceous butt that complemented her petite waist perfectly.
Her maid outfit, a classic black dress with a crisp white apron, hugged her curves in all the right places, emphasizing her feminine silhouette. The dress had a modest neckline, yet it couldn't entirely hide the fullness of her bosom.
Her ensemble was completed with a pair of white stockings and black shoes, adding to her charm and grace. Every movement she made exuded elegance and poise, making her an irresistible sight to behold.
"Lord Adrian, it is time to wake up," she said gently, her voice soft but insistent.
Adrian rubbed his eyes, still dazed and trying to grasp what was happening. Just as he was about to respond, he heard an unexpected voice in his head.
"Congratulations on being selected as the host for the great Seduction System, host. Binding in progress... successfully bound."
Adrian's eyes widened in shock as the voice continued
"Mission issued: Get a blowjob from the maid.
Reward: A one-time-use Charming Item.
His heart raced as he processed the strange instructions. The maid, oblivious to the turmoil in his mind, stood by the bed, waiting for him to rise.
Adrian took a deep breath and stretched his arms and legs. He couldn't help but notice how good her voice sounded, and it instantly made him feel a little horny.
"Just give me a few minutes," Adrian replied, trying to sound as calm as possible. He knew that the maid was just doing her job, but he couldn't help but feel a little attracted to her.
Adrian got up from his bed and watched as the maid began to perform her duty. She first started cleaning the table, bending, her bountiful ass facing towards Adrian. He could not help but gulp at the sight, making his little brother rise up hard and strong as if aiming for the moon.
"Good morning...," Adrian began, his voice betraying his nerves as he searched for her name.
"Good morning, my lord, I am Chris," Chris replied, while performing her duty, noticing her master trying to remember her name. She was used to this, as the young master in front of her, hardly remembered any servant's name as he only cared about having fun not fulfilling his duties in the process, greatly angering his sister.
Adrian nodded as if he remembered her name. Adrian couldn't help but notice how Chris' uniform hugged her body perfectly, accentuating her curves and making him feel even more horny.
"Chris, I have a favor to ask," Adrian said, trying to sound as innocent as possible.
"What is it, Milord?" Chris asked, turning towards Adrian.
"I was wondering if you could help me with something," Adrian replied, looking deeply into Chris' eyes.
"Of course, Milord, anything you need," Chris replied, getting up from cleaning the table and walking towards Adrian, not knowing what she was getting herself into.
Adrian took a deep breath and then showed her the state of his pants. Chris' eyes widened as she saw Adrian's erection.
"Lord, what are you doing?" Chris asked, blushing at the sight.
"I was hoping you could give me a blowjob," Adrian replied, trying to sound as confident as possible.
Chris looked at Adrian for a few seconds, not knowing what to do. She had never been in this situation before, and she didn't know if she should say yes or no.
"Please, Chris, I really need it," Adrian said, looking at Chris with a pleading look in his eyes.
Chris hesitated for a few seconds before finally nodding her head. "Okay, my lord, I'll do it," she said, looking down at Adrian's dick.
Adrian, with his handsome devilish face was stunned when he heard her reply. He, who had just awaken in a strange world, who had been virgin for all 20 years of his life in his previous life, was about to have his dick sucked by this beautiful maid in front of him.
Adrian couldn't believe what he had just heard. He had never expected Chris to say yes, and now that she had, he couldn't wait to feel her lips around his dick.
Chris slowly got down on her knees and looked up at Adrian. Adrian could see the fear and anticipation in her eyes, but he couldn't help but feel a little turned on by it.
Chris slowly reached out pulled down his pants and took Adrian's dick in her hand. She looked up at Adrian, waiting for his approval.
Adrian nodded his head, giving Chris the green light. Chris first put some spit on his dick and then slowly started to move her hand up and down Adrian's dick, making him feel good.
Adrian couldn't help but grab Chris' boobs while she was giving him a blowjob. He played with her nipples, making her moan softly.
Chris started to move her head up and down Adrian's dick, taking more and more of it in her mouth. Adrian couldn't help but feel good as Chris' lips and tongue worked their magic.
Then Adrian got hold of her head and with increasingly fast paced began to move her head up and down on his dick, feeling extreme pleasure, the like of which, his virgin ass pathetic self had never felt. He regretted that he wasted 20 years of life away from this pleasure.
Adrian knew he wasn't going to last much longer, and he could feel himself getting close to cumming.
"Chris, I'm going to cum," Adrian said, trying to warn her.
Chris didn't say anything, but she started to move her head up and down even faster.
Adrian couldn't hold it in any longer, and he let out a loud moan as he held Chris's head came in Chris' mouth. He held her until she swallowed every last drop of his semen.
Adrian couldn't believe what had just happened. He had never expected Chris to agree to give him a blowjob, and now that she had, he couldn't wait to do it again.
"Thank you, Chris," Adrian said, looking down at Chris and hugging her tightly.
Chris hesitated but ultimately chose to hug Adrian back burying her head in his sturdy chest, still trying to process what had just happened. "You're welcome, my lord. Madam has us, maids, trained for situation like today," she replied, sounding a little embarrassed.
Mission Complete! Claim your Reward host!
Adrian couldn't help but smile as he watched Chris walk away. He knew that he had just experienced something amazing, and he couldn't wait to do it again.
Reward: A one-time-use Charming Item.
what does it do? Sounds like mind altering item. If so, you either have to change the story title or change the reward item.
I’ve corrected this by having Chris introduce herself instead
Her name is still mentioned before she introduces herself.
Is there any yuri in the harem? Its not my thing so I wanna ask to avoid any misconceptions
Thanks for the chapter!
Ok mc adalah seorang perjaka dan di langsung bilang minta b**wjob,dengan kepercayaan kecil antar berhasil dan tidak.harus nya minta sentuh payudara atau minta ciuman dulu itu awal yg kecil tidak seperti langsung meminta sesuatu yg besar seperti menyepong penis
Fast start
Any advice and suggestion are highly appreciated.
Okay we have issues.
1, how does he know this girls name? Speak the same language?
2. Is he in his original body?
3. Who the f*ck is wearing pants with a zipper as they sleep?
If you just want to write nonsense smit go-ahead. However this is suppose to be a story that makes sense and it's failing so hard I couldn't even finish the chapter.
This needs a ton of work and the author needs a Beta reader, because obviously they can't see their own continuity issues at all.
I have seen toddlers make a more convincing story, when lieing than this.
Nothing about this story reads like a reincarnation at all. Reads like he was born there and thus is just another day. It's simply just bad.
Well that's pretty rude it's a decent start where someone got distracted by a hot chick.
And pants thing? I'm weird I know but I do it when I'm lazy and he's probably a lazy rich kid who cares even less than I do. That's a tiny little thing you decided to nitpick. It's not needed.
@VampireLord its making a point towards continuity. The pacing, setting, the mcs knowledge, and reactions, it's all off terribly.
@Chaddts the reactions are average and expected, I absolutely agree about the mc it's clear the mc focuses immediately on Chris once she enters. So he's lustful, sue him idk. And Chris is trained and thus technically expectant of these situations with the mc. So her while hesitant but confident reactions is justified.
The MCs knowledge is "refreshed" in the next chapter giving him some of the knowledge we require.
The setting is pretty bad agreed mainly bc the author describes the setting then after, says the mc is "trying to make sense of his surroundings" yeah pretty bad. I'll count that as part of pacing as well but honestly I don't see anything else about the pacing it flows from start to finish you get the idea fairly quickly.
Hey what do you meant I was sleeping even in my school uniforms huhu
@tatsuya you aren't pampered royalty jn a world that shouldn't even have zippers at all.