Arrys stats
Cannoneer (beginner stage)
Counter grenade | Making a close range blast of mana facing the enemy, blasting oneself and enemy away from each other, usable when in contact with enemy attack | Dodging thruster | Using the cannon as a jet thruster to dodge enemy attack | Triple shot | Shooting three mana bullet in a fan shape | Stun bullet | Shot exploding bullet, stun enemy when hit | Penetrating bullet | Shooting drill shaped mana bullet, digging in to your enemy |
Master stage (support master)
Healing bullet | Shot a healing bullet to your ally (heal 30% of health) | Physical up | Create a mana orb that raise physical stats (speed and strength) up to 24%, effect 90 sec | Mental mastery | Create mana orb that raise your mental capabilities (magic resistance and magic attack up) up to 24%, effect 90 sec | Healing ward | Gradually heal nearby ally for 1%/sec, active for 15 sec | Hypnosis | Release sleeping gas that 100% effective on organic type enemy, effect for 8 sec | Cocktail | Create an alcoholic substance that reduce enemy accuracy by 30% for 15 sec | Invigorate | Create a ward that buff nearby ally physical stats by 15%, effect 90 sec |
Specialist stage (disease specialist)
Mind conquer | An upgraded version of mental mastery, add 50% mp regen when used | Poison trap | Create a poison trap in designated position, stop enemy movement and giving poison effect for 5 sec (enemy can still attack) | Poison breath | Release poison gas that constantly give poison attack to enemy within area of effect | Virus | Cause enemy to went berserk, enemy attack +20% (berserk mode enable friendly attack) | Sacrifice | Sacrifice own health to heal an ally, raise physical stats by 15% for the duration of healing | Plague breath | Inflict disease on enemy within area of effect, enemy affected by disease will infect other unit in contact with it | Butterfly heal | Create a flock of butterflies that fly around healing ally unit (heal 5% health/sec active for 15 sec) | Disease bomb | Deal massive damage/sec for 11 sec |
So that is the status of our mc when in the game, but like I said this is no mere skill anymore after he was stranded in another word.
RAMBLING WORD (you can skip the the rest)
Now then what should I talk about...
Well maybe I'll talk about how I come to write this story.
So one day I have a dream, I was in inside a forest in my game character that I haven't been playing for a long time, I was adventuring the forest dressing like the character (or crossdressing maybe didn't really remember), having fun and such. And well I've been wanting to try writing a story and this was interesting so I decided to write this. When I started writing I was going to make the mc become a girl at first but then I'm not really familiar with girl stuff so I make him a male, then the character become boring and I can't find a good story about him, then come the trap that we know right now.
I'm not really into trap actually, not that I hate it, sometime the character is just unbearable thought I like some of it, the one from baka test is one of those I like. Not that I'm feminine or a trap, but I sometimes envy those with androgynous look, so then I decided to put in to a character what I think I'll do if I were androgynous so there born your mc.
And the other reason I'm writing is to help with depression I guess, I'm told to write what I feel so that I didn't keep it to myself, and it do help somewhat with the comments readers who even though at a crawling pace, is going up every time I upload a chapter, that make me happy really. Well sometime the stress is getting to me and make me hard to do anything, but I'm trying to fight it even though I've failed so far. Writing this is helping me lift my mood, watching the count of people who read my story go up slowly is nice too. Well can't talk anymore or it's just going into a loop. Have a nice day
I've noticed a trend in the way you wrote the words "thought", "though" and "through", and as each word is always associated to the same but "wrong" meaning, I wanted to clarify it :)
A "Thought" with a "T" is what happens in you head. Like "damn I'm hungry" or "it's hot today". ~~No it's absolutely not what I feel rn~~
"Through" with an "R" means moving in one side and out of the other side of an object, location, opening... Like in "his fist had such power that it went straight through the wall".
And finally "Though" is used when you want to say "despite the fact that / although" as in "my friends all took their umbrellas today, not me though."
I'm not trying to be condescending, but I want to help others as a fellow english-learner :)
Ok for real though, that’s really cool. Keep up the good work cause your story is amazing. The more you write the more you improve. I know how amazing it feels when people like your story and I want you to know that even though you can’t please everybody, and there are people who really don’t like these kinds of things, that we will always love your story and support you. It’s not always possible to just ignore mean comments and that it hurts when people hate the things you work hard to create. I just want you to know that while there might not be many people liking your story right now, that those of us who do read it are loving every bit of it. As an author I know how much it feels good to see people commenting their love for your story, so I’m writing this to give that to you. Have a wonderful everyday :)
Have a nice day
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