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Don’t make the swords women, it’s just f*ckin wierd (says the bastard full knowing he won’t make an atom move)
Is good oyyi_?
Last art from first commission added. Submitted for cover art and just waiting for scribblehub to approve.
I just started reading (Chapter 25 - Betrayal) and noticed that you took a break and are now back. Was there other artwork that wasn't added to the intro chapters? You commissioned artwork for the non-slave characters (not sure exactly if Frankie is a slave or no), but not the original summoner-slaves? Or, should I keep reading?
@TDM I have not commissioned any new artwork yet. Frankie is one of the slaves, after the ambush.
@ByzFan ... Yeah, you can tell that I had just reached betrayal. The next chapter?
Dead. Dead. Dead. Dead. Undead... Dead. Well, FML-harem. Nice job. I've got to say that I regularly comment about fictions that build up a harem then the story nosedives; I've also commented that the obvious, but never used because fans get attached, solution is to kill them off in exchange for plot-fuel. (In my opinion, once you shove a character into a harem, they're story value becomes a fraction of their original identity; previously "Named Entity", now "1/X 'harem'".)
You have done it, good sir. Kudos!
The artist did an amazing job on this art!
The really came out the way you described them.
PUT ART ON THE COVER TO GET MORE VIEWS!!!!!!!!!
There's other art coming for the cover and its not Frankie. I think the artist really did capture the look and feel I was aiming for with Frankie and Red. Maybe Hitomi for the next commission?
@ByzFan
Yes to all and get Hitomi in her ninja get up! [without her mask on of course]
@Harem-Fan
I've been wondering about her look. My aim for Hitomi is the average japanese high school girl. Her rivals for Kojiro, the average japanese high school boy, are the unusual ones. Umeka with her super lewd, lots of t&a, body and Maki with her western model looks.
Was thinking 5' but I may want to leave that for Frankie. Average for that age is 5'2" in Japan I think. Average breasts and looks. Little better than average of course because, isekai. But I was wondering if I should commission her in the Stormgarde school uniform.
Aiming to not only show Hitomi, but also the school uniform. Combined to show off high school hotness. As part of her disguise though she is pretending to be an aquecian merchant's daughter. Since the skirts pattern changes depending on house or nation?
What colors should the pattern for aquecia be?
Yellow and red?
aquecia@ByzFan
Stick close to the name [aquecia] = aqua-blue and white. I think doing a school uniform is good for her, I think a good base model for her semi average looks would be in line with say,,,,,Mikasa Ackermann [attack on titan]
Just a sample model for figure and face..https://wallpapercave.com/wp/wp1975650.jpg
@Harem-Fan
Wow, I really should watch that show at some point. Gorgeous ladies. Sona Sitri looks good. I don't want aloof though, black hair, and Frankie's got the purple eyes. Maybe brown or auburn hair? Or is black okay? Don't think it should be very long due to the ninja thing but probably should be straight. Eye color suggestion. should be brown but brown hair and brown eyes?
So blue and white pattern for the skirt? Check.
@ByzFan
sorry I changed my mind last minute...I re edited the post..sorry its now
https://wallpapercave.com/wp/wp1975650.jpg