First off, I want to apologize… it was unprofessional to not inform everyone that I was canceling the last chapter (Friday’s chapter). To be honest, I was sort of trying to put off this announcement.
I’ve lost my motivation to keep writing this story… and plan to take an indefinite hiatus.
I don’t know how long, or even if I will return to writing it.
I- Well, I don’t really know how to put this in an accurate way. It feels like I’m building the novel on a shaky foundation that could collapse at any moment and whether I try to write all the flaws and problems that exist in the story are surfaced into my head.
This story had a lot potential, but it was my first story… A lack of writing skills early on squandered that potential. I had so many plans and ambitions for the story, yet I feel like I failed.
A solid foundation is what helps a story continue forward into the future, and makes it easier to write and read. My problem is I- I know that it’s impossible for this story to be as good as I want it to be. I know it’s impossible to be a masterpiece because of that squandered potential and it haunts me whether I write it. I find myself wishing I was writing something else without all the past mistakes to haunt me whenever I pull myself to the computer to write.
I- I want to write a masterpiece that anyone could enjoy… and the longer I write the more I realize that this story isn’t it and it’s been ruining my motivation. I’ve been persisting on this work because people have continued to read my work and I appreciate all of you.
But I’m afraid this story cannot become a masterpiece.
Any new readers would have to go through my entire process of learning to write and the various problematic elements of the story before approaching anything remotely close to acceptable in my mind. And I…. I don’t have the motivation to rewrite all my mistakes. I’ve already written close to 400k words for this story and editing it to the point I’d like would be impossible without causing significant changes to the point of it becoming unrecognizable.
My delay of this announcement was because I was hoping that I would change my mind. I hoped that my lack of motivation was temporary and when today came I would burst out of this bubble…
This hasn’t been the first time I lost motivation to write this story, but… I fear it might be the final time.
I really didn’t want to go on indefinite hiatus... or any hiatus at all, honestly, because I’ve seen other writers do it over the course of my years as a reader, and know, there’s a good chance it will be permanent.
Multiple times over the course of writing this novel, I realized something important. Time is the ultimate test of persistence. You will lose motivation when writing, you will be lazy, you will want to quit. But I pushed through most of the time… all my doubts, busyness, and laziness to continue writing were pushed aside unless they were completely impossible to ignore.
I’ve written close to 400K words during the course of this novel, which is similar to four full-length novels in published format (of course, actual published novels tend to do a lot more editing but regardless). Each chapter has taken me approximately 6-8 hours, adding up to over a thousand hours of writing and I’m very happy to have done it. That will never change.
It has been a significant part of my life for the past year(s?) and I still remember how naive I was when I started. I remember believing my writing was almost flawless at the beginning because I'd reviewed the starting chapters almost a hundred times before releasing them. When I saw someone put the story into their public folder of (do-not-read) on scribblehub because of them, I simply couldn't understand why... I remember having the urge to emailed them to ask, but I didn't in the end and I'm glad of that. I don't know if I could have handled the truth.
I appreciate everyone of you that has supported me by reading and encouraging me with comments in this endeavor… And I apologize for losing the motivation and ability to continue forward.
I realize this isn’t an ideal ending point. If the novel was close to the end, I would continue trying to push through… but I wrote because I enjoy writing and I’ve stopped enjoying writing this story for a while now and continued despite of that….
I also don’t want to write a half-hearted ending as I feel like it would be a disservice to the story that I've already written with love and care. A hastily-crafted ending is forever bad and I've always had grand ambitions for this story.
...I think- at a later point, I will come back, when I’ve learned more about writing and satisfied my ambition to write a masterpiece story. Otherwise, if I leave it unfinished, I’m afraid it would haunt me to my grave (another reason I have continued despite having little motivation to continue for awhile).
-But even if I do come back, I imagine that will be a long while from now. When most of you have already forgotten this story. Maybe… I’ll be the only person who remembers this uncompleted niche story at that point and… maybe nobody will remember it when I continue or bother reading it. A story that might only be finished and released for myself because of an old regret of failing to complete it.
Sorry, I’ve actually written myself to tears.
I don’t… I don’t want this story to be uncompleted and to disappoint you all with an abrupt ending like this…. I just don’t have the motivation to continue. I deeply apologize for giving up and even regret writing this already, I couldn’t bring myself to telling you all on Friday and I've been delaying until today because I know many of you have supported me and have continually returned to read my work.
I still plan to continue writing other stories, like World of Joy… and hope you forgive me for abandoning you all at this conjecture. I-I’m sorry.
Hello.
I don't know if you read your comments often but I am the one who just says thanks and leaves.
I have read your novel since ~sept/Nov 2019 and have loved your novel since.
Nearly every Friday I will read the new chapter in the evening and be happy.
This is one of my favourite webnovels.
And I don't want to say goodbye.
I never had any problems with your writing style. In fact, I love your writing style and wished I could write like that. And you have stayed dedicated for so so long and I just don't know anymore. I don't think you need to go back. The early chapters are great as is. The mini plot holes and things can be fixed. Worse case you can even make a random.fix using a side story alternate timeline chapter.
I-I really don't want to say goodbye. I want to say thank you. I want to say thank you for continuing this random niche obscure story with only 600 reader, no cover and still do 400k words. I want to say thank you for going on for 2 years. I want to see this story soar and get trending.
Though.
I want to see you happy.
The story has felt like it was slipping. You seemed tired throughout the last few chapters. It was naïve of me to think that it was temporary. To think that you were not getting sick of this.
Any new readers would have to go through my entire process of learning to write and the various problematic elements of the story before approaching anything remotely close to acceptable in my mind. And I…. I don’t have the motivation to rewrite all my mistakes. I’ve already written close to 400k words for this story and editing it to the point I’d like would be impossible without causing significant changes to the point of it becoming unrecognizable.
Your learning to write is recognisable but you don't make many mistakes or thing early. Or atleast not that noticeable. The pov changes that were odd can be fixed but you are correct with editing. Because of how your story is written, trying to edit out all the mistakes and things would be a basic rewrite due to having to change a few crusial things (I remember things need changing but no what).
I would recommend that you do not attempt to rewrite. Only rewrite as a side thing when you don't want to really come back but you have a bit of motivation.
Rewrite kills motivation for alot of people as they go in a never ending loop of constant change and it just doesn't stop.
Also. I hope you come back. I really hope. I hope you come back in a month with new found motivation but I doubt it. But I really hope you come back eventually.
I hope Tobias and Rin and Stanley and everyone's adventures carry on.
Sorry if this comment seems super disorganised or angry. I do not want to sound angry. I do want to cry tho. Alot.
Again.
Thank you.
Thank you thank you thank you thank you.
And as always.
Thank you for the chapters!
Thank you for the chapter!
Thank you for the story!
Thank you, SleepingFox.
Thank you.
This is coming a bit late, since I took a break from the internet, but thank you for sticking as long as you did I really liked this story, like some other comments have said I don't have any particular problems with your early chapters they seemed mostly fine to me, and like many have pointed out your latest chapters had a lot less energy in them than the previous ones, I dearly hope for you to one day finish this story, but your free to do whatever it is you set your heart on and if its not this...that's ok too I just hope you continue being you have a good day
Masterpieces don’t exist. The closest thing to one is a story that you enjoy writing. So yeah, see you around. :)
Sympathy, comisseration, and the counter that a quick unworthy ending might disappoint, but it also points in the direction that you wanted it to end. Luck in your quest to write your masterpiece in the future. After you've mastered the craft, perhaps repairing and finishing this tale will be an easier task.
For what it’s worth I really liked this story and did not think it’s early chapters were badly written..... but your health and happiness always comes first so I wish you well and hope that you will someday find the inspiration to either continue writing this or to do a reboot..... I hope and wish you a good day and goodbye for now
It's a bit sad that you're putting this story in hiatus, but forcefully poisoning yourself with lethargy and disappointment to churn out new chapters, for a story you and I both know has alot of potential, due to momentary lack of inspiration and self-doubt... yeah, I think it's probably a good thing that you're taking a hiatus on this one. Though I'd have been very very sad if you stopped trying your hand at writing completely though, thankfully/hopefully that's not the case, and maybe in due time a reworked version of this novel can be shown in all it's true glory.
So yeah, take time off, live a little, make oneshots, grow and things will be probably be fine. Also I'll be most likely still there to read most of your works, if not me then many others.
Thank you, and good luck.
A potential, which could never be fullfilled as the creator was blinded by its own dream of a masterpiece.
All in all, you gave up, never fulfilling the potential your story could have gained, yes, it was getting really drawn out and the pacing was getting slower with the latest chapters, but that could have been fixed by actually caring about the story.
Your own expectations of making a masterpiece blinded you from actually enjoying your own story and magnifying the failures however small they might be, remember, never write to succeed or to gain fame if you genuinely love writting then write.
If you get demotivated with your lack of skill then just research and study, that way you can experiment and get better at writting.
Good luck, i love this story with all its flaws present, and im saddened to no end to see another gem shatter, its not your fault.
The moment you used time concept and travel I knew this story was not going to be completed anytime soon 🙃my reading experience is that Don't mess with time YOU CANNOT BEAR THE CONCEQUENCES well giving this story a ending will be extremely difficult with MC'S ANNOYING PERSONALITY
Been here for over a long period of time true to that towards to the end things got too shaky to continue without any major brun outs its fine why try and new one with all the skills u gained through this journey and for last I feel heavily insulted as a reader to your novel when you think the way I was trapped within my novel does that apply that I'm a fool to read it every week?
"I was trapped in my own story" is cursed concept I think. Never seen it deliver.