When Sasori saw Guy charging at him, he opened his mouth and a barrage of needles shot out.
Guy instinctively knew that those needles were dangerous and jumped sideways.
'Those needles arent shaped to do lethal damage, so this means they are poisoned...if my enemy is a poison-user, I can't get hit...I didn't use him in a long time, but better be safe than sorry!' - Guy retreated into the distance to give himself some time.
"Summoning Jutsu!" - With that, Guy summoned Ningame.
"A tortoise? Your pet looks as stupid as yourself..." - Sasori ridiculed him.
"It's been a long time, Guy..." - Ningame
"I know, but can we do the catch up later? My enemy is a poison user, and I need you to help me close the distance." - Guy
Ningame starred at Sasori before nodding.
Then he suddenly retreated into his shell and Guy positioned himself behind him.
On another battlefield.
"...koff...are you two alright?" - Chiyo has used her "puppet-arms" to summon a chakra shield, which shielded Naruto and Sakura.
Of course, this was only possible since Deidara's explosion was mainly focused on Eiji and not Naruto since he needed to catch Naruto alive.
"So you decided to just hide behind your pet? It looked like you had some fighting spirit, but if that's how you want to do things..." - Sasori knew that needles or his tail wouldn't be able to damage Ningame's shell, so he decided to just breathe poisonous gas into the battlefield.
'Since this is a cave, he will need to escape outside...at this moment I'll strike...' - Sasori continued to breathe the gas, and soon most of the battlefield was cover in a purple mist.
But before the gas could reach Guy, Ningame suddenly started to rotate and Guy was ridding on him.
"HOAAARHH!!!" - Guy shouted while Ningame shot with an unbelievable speed, moving seemingly randomly across the walls and ceiling of the cave.
On his way, Ningame left a trail of destruction behind: boulders and walls destroyed, purple mist completely dispersed and the ceiling crumbled down!
'What's up with this ridiculous speed?! I need to use another pup-' - while Sasori was planning his next move, Guy suddenly jumped from Ningame and was instantly above Sasori.
Guy hit Sasori with a perfect and powerful kick!
Crack!
Hiruko was destroyed, but the "real" Sasori used the slight moment of confusion to retreat.
This time, instead of the crooked and old voice from his puppet Hiruko, now Sasori speaks with his youthful voice: "Really...the most stupid looking ones are always the ones who surprise the most...when I add you to my collection I will fix your appearances though..."
"Looks like this is the real one, Guy. Be careful, I have the feeling he's starting to get serious." - Ningame
"I know but since he is a puppeteer, our tactic will be the same: Get into close-range where he is weak!" - Guy got himself ready.
"Still...for destroying Hiruko so seemingly easy, I will show you now my favorite one..." - Sasori summoned the Third Kazekage.
"This is..." - Guy had a shocked face.
"You know him?" - Ningame
"Oh, even stupid-looking brutes can recognize-" - Sasori was interrupted by Guy.
"Who's that?" - Guy
"..." - Sasori
"..." - Ningame
After recollecting himself, Sasori did a fake cough, before saying: "Anyway, let us begin!"
At another battlefield.
'Shit...even with my regenerative ability, if I didn't react in the last second, I would have been done...' - Eiji was panting and standing in a huge crater with an arm missing while most of his clothes were blown to pieces.
He looked around: the forest more or less disappeared, Naruto and Sakura looked being fine since they were guarded by Chiyo's chakra shields.
'Those tiny chakra-shields were probably only able to block this explosion because this piece of shit mainly targeted me...makes sense though since he needs to capture Naruto alive...but more importantly why did he attack me? I always made sure to show a completely neutral stance towards Akatsuki...did they decide that Shiki Ryuu's growing influence would become problematic for their future plan? ' - while contemplating he looked towards the perpetrator.
Deidara was flying nonchalantly on his tone-bird: "Hmm...didn't think you would be able to survive a surprise C3...well, looks like I'll have even more fun...yeah."
I agree that it feels rushed, but carry on and write two or three more chapters before coming back to this. Constantly second guessing yourself is an excellent way to get unmotivated to write.
i would suggest to start writting in google docs, so it is always saved, and then just transfer here.
shiki ryu better leak all the info on akatsuki now since they openly attacked :P
Another thing I noticed:
Assuming Pain's attack on Konohagakure still happens, Eiji's parents would be among the casualities as well, right? Sure, they get eventually resurrected by Nagato but with the timeline out of whack that shouldn't be completely assured. That being the case, Eiji still loves them and probably couldn't stand seeing them -and Tenten for that matter- suffering though the attack. My guess would be that he jumps into the frey to protect them and unintentionally fights Pain. Then Naruto jumps in too and they save Konohagakure together. I guess both would do Pain's backstory together with Eiji providing details that Nagato didn't know himself, like Tobi/Obito and Danzo sabbotaging and causing the death of the original Akatsuki.
With Tsunade out cold the Daimyo and Elders would have to appoint a new Hokage for the summit. Just like Naruto in the original timeline Eiji would be mentioned for the position of Hokage. Only that unlike Naruto he has both technically some experience doing the job and some merrits, seeing as that him killing Danzo was ultimately a good thing+ whatever he is going to do next(as in chapter 110 and further). Eijin could use this opportunity to reveal himself as the Founder and leader of Ryou Shiki tea house. Like that he would be chosen as Hokage to go to the Kage Summit.
I think this works particularly with his MOB fate since the Hokage going to the summit would ultimately be either Danzo or Kakashi, with both losing the position. Kakashi would let Tsunade do the Job ones she recovered.
It's an opportunity for Eiji to get himself, Sasuke, Ukon, Chisato, perhaps Itachi and whoever else he managed to recruit into Konohagakure.
I still hope for genderbender Ukon. New name: Uka
I mean, the position of Hokage at that point in time would be that of a MOB. And getting to the summit should be important to Eiji as that's were Tobi reveals bad sh*t's goint to hit the fan. Eiji could use transformation Jutsu to become Obito's and Kakashi's teammate(What was her name again?) and troll/torment Tobi.
Unintended or not... this fic has the effect of showing the consequences of rash actions... mainly from the main cast, and i love it.
Still looking forward to Tenten and Eiji reunited. She can join the battle with Deidara, that would be epic.
Wondering whether Eiji will mature in his personality. Happy go lucky, is fun and all, but it gets old fast.
Meatbun delivery~
Thank you for the chapter ( ●w●)
Nooo you can't let us hunging like that with only two chapters before you stop :(
( I presume the battle and aftermath won't end in 2 chapters)
Good job and thank for the chapter.
Good luck with the exams!!
You can read the following fanfics while this one uploads. They are pretty good.
Lo and behold you pitiful peasants. While you wait for the story to grow and come. I have already given up on virtueous path and forsaken my humanity.
" Naruto
Played With in Dreaming of Sunshine — the Author Avatar is not godpowered and, in fact, attempts to change the timeline as little as possible. This is actually justified, as she is attempting to retain her advantage by not rendering her knowledge of future events useless. This is difficult, as she arrived many years before the worst of the sh*t starts to hit the fan. She has some skills beyond the norm, but those stem from being reborn with her memory intact, not from being an Uberninja.
Dreaming of Sunshine has in fact been so positively received, it's created a boom in the Fanfic genre of self-insert via Reincarnation, especially in Naruto fandom. These other authors have thus far had varying degrees of success.
In Déjà vu no Jutsu, the Author Avatar is an ninja orphan and surrogate older sister of Minato Namikaze. While she is more skilled due to her past-life as an American soldier, she was also weaker due to differences in power and self-neglect. Since she is born years before major events, she grows up and evolves into a different character. She reluctantly made friends with her and Minato's contemporaries, she's a living butterfly and she changes things for the better and for the worse.
Catch Your Breath. The main character is ultimately a flawed, realistic character who has the good (or horrible) luck to be born into the Third Shinobi World War era—thirteen years before the Kannabi Bridge Arc. Her existence butterflies away several important important plot points while raising new ones in their stead.
Shinobi The RPG. In this case, the protagonist is kind of hilariously overpowered, experiencing the world through Fallout: New Vegas game mechanics, getting elements as perks, and having early on maxed out Intelligence and chakra control, can pull new jutsu out his butt and gain exp for it. On the other hand, he suffers immensely from his choice to go in with minimal charisma, and ordinary training doesn't help him in any way — only quests, killing and inventing jutsu will do the job — so his peers view him as a Death Seeker and other people react to him like a terrifying combat monster with no human empathy. That's not even going into what happens when he fixes his charisma problem... "
Here is a tvtropes page with similar fanfics.
These are the metaphorical ugly bastards.
That's right I am NTRing the author and taking reader chan away to other ugly bastards(the above ugly author).
Such is the way of life. Never should have trusted me. First otto and then me. I support otttooo hahahahahah.
it would be nice if you told us where to read these
@vishramramoutar fanfiction . net
just Google the names they are pretty popular
Unfortunately, I’ve read all of those already
Thanks for the chapter