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Complete silence fell into that room. The Yao Matriarch just froze with her mouth open, just after Yao Zi eyes closed completely, her body fell back down lifelessly. The clan doctor Fu Hua quickly held the Yao young miss wrist to check on her condition. No movement could be seen, no breath could be seen being taken in, no pulse that could felt. Even the green worms that had been seen wriggling across Young Miss Zi skin had stopped moving.
Slowly moving his hand away, clan doctor Fu Hua closed his eyes. The Yao Matriarch turn to the clan doctor for any glimmer of hope that her only child still had any chance of surviving this ordeal.
"Matriarch, you may want to speak any words you have left." Fu Hua spoke with a low voice, as he stood to the side.
"Everyone leave me alone with my daughter" With lifeless tone in her voice, she order everyone.
Clan doctor Fu Hua close the door on his way out. With only the Yao Matriarch and her daughter left alone in the room. Yao Li's hand caressing the side of her daughter's face.
"My poor daughter." Tears leaking out from her face, as she felt her world falling apart. "Through all the pain and suffering that I've been through. You're my sunshine in my life."
*sniff* *sniff*
"I actually hated you, when I found out that I was pregnant. That all my dreams for the future was cut down because of you." Venting out not as the Yao Matriarch, but as Yao Li's guilt inside of her heart. "But Mother was happy when I saw your face for the first time. That you were and will be the most precious thing I'll ever have in my life." Remembering back then, all the hardship Yao Li had to suffer through.
"Mother had and will never regret having given birth to you my dear." Choking on her grief, Yao Li pour out her heart. "Mother only regret was not being able to give you the bright future you deserve" Yao Li place her head onto where her daughters leg would be, as she cried.
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Hours have past since the time the Yao Matriarch was left alone with her child. As night begin to cover the sky in darkness, the Yao Matriarch herself had cried herself to sleep as she had not left Yao Zi's room. No one in the Yao clan dare to intrude on the Yao clan Matriarch while she mourn for the loss of her child.
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Yao Zi's eyes open in the darkness, slowly raising up in a upright sitting position. Her eyes wandered around the room briefly, and then try to lift her hand towards her face. Only to see one hand in front of her, while another was still being held firmly by someone. Which cause Yao Zi to stare at her mother beautiful face.
[Target host: Yao Zi have been successfully registered as Main Carrier]
[Symbiote Host Stat]
- Name: Yao Zi
- Age: 2 , Mental Age: 6
- Physique: (Sealed)
- Strength: 1
- Agility: 2
- Mind: 15
- Dexterity: 4
- Skill:
- Passive: Regeneration-weak(New), Speedy Mind-weak(New)
A transparent screen appeared in Yao Zi's vision, as she begins to read the information. Yet before she can begin reading the information shown to her, The Yao Matriarch begins to wake up. Raising her head Yao Li wanted to imprint her child's face forever in her mind, just for her to stare dumbly at something so unbelieavable.
"Mommy"Yao Zi whisper out.
I thought she was at least 4-6 and not 2. But she has a mental age of 6? Guess cultivating worlds can have weird developmental rates.
The physique being sealed is a small price to pay for life being saved (wonder why she had that attack? Illness variation, stress from little blob or whatever?). Can be gotten back as it's only sealed.
Also, is being pregnant for 9 months enough to say it ruins your dreams? Granted she also needs to take care of her after giving birth but with so many servants she has the option of free time. Does pregnancy cause some kind of negative effect to cultivation? Sucks if that is the case
Thanks for the chapter
Thx for the chap.
Didn't you forget the [Decay Resistance(Low) Level 1 ] passive ??
Did I? hehehe (creeper laugh)
thanks for the chapter.
Complete silence fell into that room. The Yao Matriarch just froze with her mouth open, just
After Yao Zi eyes closed completely, her body just fell back down lifelessly.
(Complete silence fell into that room.
The Yao Matriarch just froze with her mouth open, just After Yao Zi eyes closed)
seen wriggling across Young Miss Zi skin had stop moving.
Young Miss Zi skin had (stopped) moving.
hand caressing the side of daughter's face.
the side of (her) daughter's face.
I've been thru. You're my sunshine in my life."
I've been (through).
but as Yao Li's guilt inside of heart.
guilt inside of (her) heart.
all the hardship Yao Li had to suffer thru.
all the hardship Yao Li had to suffer (through).
Choking on her greif
Choking on her (grief).
Only to see on hand in front of her
Only to see (one) hand
Only to see on hand in front of her, while another was still being held firmly by someone. Which cause Yao Zi
Which cause Yao Zi????
Age: 2 , Mental Age: 6
wasn't it mentioned that she fell sick at the age of 2 years old and suffered for one and half a year I think her age should be 3 minimum and 4 maximum.
She got sick just after one year after her birth, and only 1 and a half year have past. So technically Yao Zi is 2 years old but is turning 3 time wise.
Please let me know if you find anything else wrong or confusing. 
Thank you for the help.
I really need to start paying more attention to all the tags. I keep picking novels up just to be disappointed by a sudden system. Not that all systems are bad... just a lot of them. At least this unique system has a bit of justification for it I guess... though unique systems are typically even more likely to be poorly done. Bleh. We'll see, I guess.
Thank you for giving my novel a chance