I need help

Is this good? 

I'm not really sure whether this is better.

Is it interesting enough?

When the world ends.

Another begins.

Watch as Aeron wakes up, in a World unlike his own.

“Wait… you give me a monkey?”

“What about a tiger? Or better yet, a dragon?”

“Kii!” “kkii!” “kiii!” “ki!!”

“Oh so its fine since there’s a lot of them?”

Watch as Aeron become, the Legendary Tamer!

Or

When the world ends.

“Wait… you give me a monkey?”

Another begins.

“What about a tiger? Or better yet, a dragon?”

Watch as Aeron wakes up, in a World unlike his own.

“Kii!” “kkii!” “kiii!” “ki!!”

Watch as Aeron become, the Legendary Tamer!

“Oh so its fine since there’s a lot of them?”

or

After his death from an epidemic, Aeron finds himself transferred to another world.

A world unlike his own, a vast world filled with beasts, races, mystery, and most importantly, mana.

Humanity as a foreign race strives to survive in the world of Gaia, building cities to expand and defend, bringing humanity to a new era of strength.

Aeron now in a new world, with a new family, and a new profession, must strive to become strong.

Watch Aeron navigate this new world as he meets new people, new pets, and collects new skills.

But a dark shadow looms in the horizon, creeping slowly towards humanity.