[LEVEL UP!]
What? um maybe it has something to do with that blue board thingy let me check
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Name: Kris Stella Level:00012
Race: Skeleton Rank: G
EVOLUTIONS POSSIBLE: [Steel Skeleton, Black Skeleton, Skeletal Demon]
JOBS AVAILABLE: [Skeletal Warrior, Skeletal Mage, Skeletal Thief, Dungeon Master, Necromancer]
SKILLS: Summon Weapon: [MACE(blunt weapon x2 damage to Carapaced, Brittle and Armoured/Heavy Weaponry 2x damage to Heavy enemies, bonuses stack)], Weapon Mastery: 50% to nullify damage if your weapon is used to block the attack, Fury: 10x all stats when angered suffer immense pain whilst in use, Flame Lord: can infuse hellfire into: objects, your body and all armours/weapons, mana cost is variable.
PASSIVES: Tough: 3x multiplier to strength, dexterity, constitution and vitality, Smithing: knowledge of forging weapons and armour, Sentience: Retains human level of intelligence (until wisdom and intelligence reaches regular human levels)
WEAKNESSES: Blunt Damage takes x2, Temperatures Over: 400 Degrees Celsius, Corrosion
IMMUNITIES: Poison, Gasses, Cold, Drowning
TRAITS: Brittle/Undead
Titles: The Eighth One
Stats:
Health: 300 Mana: 10 (Reg Human Lv1: Hp: 60, Mp: 40)
Health Regen: 0.3 Mana Regen: 0.01 per minute(Reg Human Lv1: Hp Regen: 0.4 , Mp Regen: 2 per minute)
Constitution: 50 (Reg Human Lv1: 10)
Vitality: 30 (Reg Human Lv1: 40)
Strength: 30 (Reg Human Lv1: 4)
Dexterity: 18 (Reg Human Lv1: 10)
Intelligence: 10 (Reg Human Lv1: 40)
Wisdom: 10 (Reg Human Lv1:200)
Available Stat Points: 55
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Um so it seems I got some stat points...I think i'll be putting them into one of the stats supported by tough hmmmmmm, I WON'T BE KILLABLE IF I PUT THEM INTO CONSTITUTION!
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Name: Kris Stella Level:00012
Race: Skeleton Rank: G
SKILLS: Summon Weapon(Maximum Summon Limit:1): [MACE(blunt weapon x2 damage to Carapaced, Brittle and Armoured/Heavy Weaponry 2x damage to Heavy enemies, bonuses stack)], Weapon Mastery: 50% to nullify damage if your weapon is used to block the attack, Fury: 10x all stats when angered suffer immense pain whilst in use, Flame Lord: can infuse hellfire into: objects, your body and all armours/weapons, mana cost is variable.
PASSIVES: Tough: 3x multiplier to strength, dexterity, constitution and vitality, Smithing: knowledge of forging weapons and armour, Sentience: Retains human level of intelligence (until wisdom and intelligence reaches regular human levels)
WEAKNESSES: Blunt Damage takes x2, Temperatures Over: 400 Degrees Celsius, Corrosion
IMMUNITIES: Poison, Gasses, Cold, Drowning
TRAITS: Heavy/Armoured/Undead
Titles: The Eighth One
Stats:
Health: 1290 Mana: 10 (Reg Human Lv1: Hp: 60, Mp: 40)
Health Regen: 0.3 Mana Regen: 0.01 per minute(Reg Human Lv1: Hp Regen: 0.4 , Mp Regen: 2 per minute)
Constitution: 215 (Reg Human Lv1: 10)
Vitality: 30 (Reg Human Lv1: 40)
Strength: 30 (Reg Human Lv1: 4)
Dexterity: 18 (Reg Human Lv1: 10)
Intelligence: 10 (Reg Human Lv1: 40)
Wisdom: 10 (Reg Human Lv1:200)
Available Stat Points: 0
EVOLUTIONS POSSIBLE: Steel Skeleton, Black Skeleton, Skeletal Demon
JOBS AVAILABLE: Skeletal Warrior, Skeletal Mage, Skeletal Thief, Dungeon Master, Necromancer
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'Hmmmm, whats this? evolution is.... I think I heard about it when I was studying in the vault, it's a creature creating a defense to something in response to a constant attack of another entity right? huh... WHY ARE THERE JOBS HERE!?!' I tried composing myself but it just doesn't make any sense whatsoever 'WHY DOES THIS EXIST!?!'; those types of thoughts ran through my head constantly, I only ended up getting a headache out of it for some reason, I did compose myself though and due to my current stats and the fact that I didn't know know what the other would do aside from thief and mage (which in all honesty didn't have much appeal in the first place) I made my selection [Skeletal Warrior] and [Steel Skeleton], then I blacked out for what seemed like an eternity.
When I awoke I felt as though I could take on the on the entire world without so much as breaking a sweat, I checked out my new body it was metallic and seemed that my bones were thicker and tougher than before then I remembered what I did and took a look the my [SCREEN], as I had dubbed it and took a look at my stats... suffice to say my reasoning for feeling this powerful wasn't ungrounded.
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Name: Kris Stella Level:00012
Race: Steel Skeleton Rank: F
SKILLS: Summon Weapon(Maximum Summon Limit:1): [MACE(blunt weapon x2 damage to Carapaced and Armoured/Heavy Weaponry 2x damage to Heavy enemies, bonuses stack)], [LONG SWORD(cutting x 2 to Fleshy, Squishy and Soft/light weapon 2 x damage to light targets, bonuses stack)] (stat bonuses:x10 to damage whilst in use), Weapon Mastery: 50% to nullify damage if your weapon is used to block the attack, Fury: 10x all stats when angered suffer immense pain whilst in use(does not deal damage to you), Flame Lord: can infuse hellfire into: objects, your body and all armours/weapons, mana cost is variable.
PASSIVES: Tough: 3x multiplier to strength, dexterity, constitution and vitality, Smithing: knowledge of forging weapons and armour, Sentience: Retains human level of intelligence (until wisdom and intelligence reaches regular human levels),
Evolution Bonus!: Armoured Tank: 90% less damage taken, Job Bonuses:Warriors Spirit: 2x Hp Regen, Analyse: Shows information of things you want to know(this skill is gained by any who gain a job)
WEAKNESSES: Temperatures Over: 800 Degrees Celsius, Corrosion
IMMUNITIES: Poison, Gasses, Cold, Drowning
TRAITS: Heavy/Armoured/Undead
Titles: The Eighth One
Stats:
Health: 1290 Mana: 10 (Reg Human Lv1: Hp: 60, Mp: 40)
Health Regen: 0.6 Mana Regen: 0.01 per minute(Reg Human Lv1: Hp Regen: 0.4 , Mp Regen: 2 per minute)
Constitution: 215 (Reg Human Lv1: 10)
Vitality: 30 (Reg Human Lv1: 40)
Strength: 30 (Reg Human Lv1: 4)
Dexterity: 18 (Reg Human Lv1: 10)
Intelligence: 10 (Reg Human Lv1: 40)
Wisdom: 10 (Reg Human Lv1:200)
Available Stat Points: 0
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Whilst taking a look at my new bonuses a sense of absolute PLEASURE engulfed as I had become so much stronger so easily, so seeing as killing a measly Cave Orc gave me so much power I thought, 'Why not explore this place?' and so i did... and found a few more Cave Orcs and by few i mean a few HUNDRED, I looked upon them in absolute disbelief 'THERE IS ABSOLUTELY NO WAY THAT I'M GOING TO SURVIVE FIGHTING ALL THAT' but then i remembered i had an ability that seemed...interesting...[Flame Lord]...so i looked at the..description and tried enchanting it on to my new summoned sword with hellfire and it worked, a bit, the hellfire didn't actually appear, instead what i got was a super heated blade which could cut through steel plate armour like tissue paper! i was so excited to test it! and i knew just who to test it on~~~
POV Change Orc Leader
I am Korm the Mercenary Leader of my squad we were hired by Zanathos III to clear this dungeon I was at the front of the subjucation of a minor Kobold nest everything seemed to be going well, until i saw a blinding white and hot light gleaming from behind us seemingly getting closer, I tried to make out what the thing was then I saw what it was, a skeleton holding a big ass glowing sword.
(Merc) "What the fu-*SHINK*" the Orc commando's head fell to the ground
(Korm)"IT'S HOSTILE DEFENSIVE POSITIONS" I commanded my troops into a turtle defence position
POV change MC
I killed one of the orcs but, they seem to be getting into a co-ordinated position which i find rather strange, considering they're meant to be barely sentient, 'Well whatever i'll just kill 'em all', i'm brought out of my train of thought when an arrow clanks into my head, I pluck it off and see the metal bit has crumpled like paper mache, i have to say i was pretty pissed at this, 'Really?, I just cut one of your fucking comrade in half without batting a damn eye, i take it back you really are fucking stupid aren't you?' following the original arrow dozens more came flying at me there damage was negligible, i cut a few of them out of the air recalling some of the times i had to cut hundreds of bullets out the air, the feel of cutting an arrow actually felt rather fulfilling in all honesty so i took my time getting to them and enjoy getting the feel of cutting, back home I used to test my limits daily, I found it fulfilling in my rather boring repetitive life, my routine was basically this: train, spar, eat, sleep and occasionally fight world threatening beasties, so i found this rather relaxing due to a certain attachment to this sort of stuff, testing your limits, oh almost forgot I was walking toward the orcs, with the reminiscing over and done with let's begin the slaughter.
One of the Orcs in the front holding his shield to cover himself was quaking in fear, like child in front of a wolf, as he watched the skeleton raise bring his burning blade to his side and bisect a handful of his comrade, he collapsed their only to have his head lopped of mercilessly by the skeletal abomination, he watched in his last moments as the skeleton holding the sword in one hand killing his friend and allies and in the other flipping him the bird with a (permanent) smile on his face, he was absolutely flabbergasted but couldn't retort because at that he died.
'HOOOOOOOF now that was an amazing killing spree' I thought to myself smiling at my Handi-work now LET'S SEE WHAT NUMBER I SCORED!!!
[Evolution Possible!] [Job Change Possible!] [Level Up!]
To be continued
Yay he did them in. Strange tho. Wasn’t an orc leader supposed to be a challenge.
Wait!!!.....You cut bullets in the air???
He seems to have an interesting background indeed.
Encouraging you: Good work, tho I am a bit sad about those Orcs. [Wish u a save journey in hell] “To the orcs of course.
y'know we did have a discussion of how powerful he roughly was and i said he was C rank right? you remember the scales right? well here's a reminder of how badass out MC was in his last life
Highest to lowest Numbers are levels
Ex 10000 Tier 9 Class
S 08000 Tier 8 Class
A 06000 Tier 7 Class
B 04000 Tier 6 Class
C 02000 Tier 5 Class
D 01000 Tier 4 Class
E 00100 Tier 3 Class
F 00010 Tier 2 Class
G 00001 Tier 1 Class
Well this story feels a bit rushed, second of all the mc is kinda op, usually the mainc characters have an advantage but some weak ass stats and they always face opponents much stronger than themselves time after time and you have to make it believeable so it doesnt seem like plot armor, third of all you dont have to write all caps if a character is shouting or surprised just add an excalamation mark, the sound effects aren't necessary at all and making them all caps, they usually take away from the experience, fourth of all don't use such informal language after writing so formal for example "what the fu-". Hope this helps you if you plan on writing another novel, you need to learn and read some fantasy novels and analyze them on a higher level to make a quality story yourself.
Also i get that you used informal language because of the orcs, but i'm also reffering to using fancy words and then switching back to casual day to day words. By no means am i trying to be offensive, i just wanted to point that out, that is what makes a story enjoyable from my point of view, but you're the author do what you want.
Edit : I'm aware i have posted in a chapter that was written on a much earlier date than the current chapter may be and i will continue to read this story until it's current chapter.