Hello Everyone!
I'm Arcy and am currently working on with Arc 2.
Arc 1 is all about the MC's begining on he starts the shop.
Arc 2 would start focusing on the character development of each characters as i'm now currently making on a poll as to whether this relationship of theirs would end up in a harem or you picking on a girl he would choose.
Arc 1 would already establish three girls who would start to like him as arc 2 would introduce the name of the third girl.
But i'll begin by placing down their characteristics and personality as the choices you pick would ended up how this story would go.
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Selina, the childhood friend
Kathlee, the rich girl who was classmates with the MC in college.
Mage Girl, the one who the MC saves.
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I only gave a few details as most would begin in Arc 2.
I was planning on how their relationship would go but the choices would solely depend on the readers as i want your opinion on which the story would head towards.
But remember, once the vote is finished, there's no turning back.
After the first arc is done, i'll wait for another week after the poll to start working on Arc 2 since i plan on changing based on what you guys picked for me. Thank you and have a nice day!
Comments (16)
Although I don't like harem that much it's quite sad to see the other Girls losing to the female lead and becoming lonely as they can't be with MC, so i think I prefer harem.
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Update:
I'll be moving the scedule a bit early and make it an exception that if Selina gets at least like 12 votes, i'll gonna pick her route over the harem one.
While i'm not hating on the harem route, i feel like its been overused much and writing relationships with different characters is a bit too much on me.
I was writing a fanfic for the first time but after diving deep into the fanfic, i realise i don't have any skills into developing characters so i might not try write a harem route.
Just as long there is no harem it's all good
Harem is too over rated and the gurls in a harem novel are often based. Thry have the personality of a wet water. they all have the same feel except their "colour" arent the same.
Yeah, i get that but there would always be a problem which develops a character. I don't plan on writing them to be a wet paper but with personalities for each of them.
Such as the rich girl being clingy and finds that the MC being reliable or the childhood friend afraid of hurting the MC.
The human mind is quite diverse and each people having different thoughts and processes.
Also, I can say that I read all the caps and I have no impression about this fellow rich girl he knows ...
MC poderia ter um harém poliamor, e não coloque todos eles pensando em quem adicionar Eu honestamente prefiro limitar isso a 3 ou 4 garotas.
A Ps: Polyamory, There would be several people in a relationship with each other, basically the girls would be Bi and would stay with the MC and the girls in the 'harem'.
I'm just going to let you know that at least of me, unless your story is an "Are you the only one that loves me?" Harem romance comedy from the start, making your story a harem signifies two things; one: you are not talented enough to make interesting relationships in their own right, and two: you do not understand how relationships work. Its basically declaring to the world that you have no talent. That's just my opinion though I suppose.
Writing a harem signifies that there's a psychological problem the MC would face and tries to think about. The MC is solely would love one person but as he interacts and develops with the characters, he would encounter a problem with his feelings as i want to dive deep into how he would act.
@ArcadiaBlade That's the theory at least. But all you have to do is look at the hundreds of completely abandoned "harem stories" on this site already to see how that turns out. The problem you run into in a harem scenario is that it is never, ever realistic and none of the characters come out as likeable which harms the story because it really makes people not care about what happens to them. Real harems end in murder. Love triangles are actually the number one cause of murders in the world in case you didn't know. Although I am being a bit facetious I suppose since this is a fantasy story.
I'm just saying that making your story a harem novel is genuinely a turn off for many people, and just about the most generic thing you can do besides introducing rice to the setting lol In fact the only reason I decided to read this in the first place was because the premise was interesting and it /didn't/ have a harem tag. Usually i skip anything with a harem tag automatically.
@MrBlue i guess so. Since i basically live in a place where NTR usally happens in dramas and movies here, i want to make this as different from my own but i guess writing without a harem can be fine. But i'll wait until the poll is over before i think about it.
@ArcadiaBlade Well whatever you decide to do, it is ultimately you story, my friend. I just know that if it goes harem, I personally, would stop reading. While NTR is also disgusting, at least it breeds the opportunity for an interesting revenge plot.
@ArcadiaBlade usually happens in dramas in your place .........wtf
@MrBlue While i find that harems to be weird since its sharing one person having multiple lovers, i kinda feel bad about what would happen if he only picks one girl out of the rest.
@Maple NTR, incest, hmn... Necrophilia... Hmn.... Dunno about the rest.
@ArcadiaBlade I don’t think a harem is the way to go and so what the MC only picks one woman. That doesn’t mean the other women who like him would not be able to move on and be hung up on him. And NTR; f*ck that bs
@Jacarya24 I was actually on a discord group with some peeps and ask if whether whether i would go to a harem route or not. As a catholic, i'm not interested much about harems but i kinda wanted to try it out just for fun and i decided that i should make a poll of it. I'll also probably move the schedule a bit down since 3 weeks is kinda long.