lil hiatus
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going on a little hiatus just to build on the story more and plan it out a little more shouldnt be more than two weeks hopefully although worst comes to worst ill cut into some of the chapters out on patreon
give ideas and i might consider them
untill next time - cain
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I have a recomendation, but not let my comment change your thoughts, i Just think that the firsts chapters can expand more the personality of the protagonist, i think that the beggining close the personality of your MC, and the part of the crown can have more "crazy" like, not Just make him craze at once, change him bit a bit and, in a moment, makes that the MC realize about how much mind control he has, obviusly keep that thing about he already knew about the mind control but he try to use it.
As i say, dont let this comment change your history,Just take it as a comment for a fan of your job.