I was desperate enough to ask what my options were.
“What is this option?”
“I might reincarnate you if you want so… With one condition.”
“Please, tell me what you want.”
“How about becoming a ship?”
Yes, reincarnation as an object. Will I be able to move on my own without a crew?
“You will. I assure you.”
Assure my a… I am going to die either way.
“Now to the terms you mentioned.”
“Yes, you will have to act according to what ‘character’ I will assign you. If you are not going to do that you will be no more than ordinary an ship.”
Okay, I will be able to talk and move. Where is the catch?
“Catch is that you will have your full power only when behaving appropriately to the character chosen. Nothing more than that. Are my terms fine for you?”
After I considered both options: to die and disappear or to become a ship and live on…
“Where will you reincarnate me?”
“You like fantasy stuff, don`t you? I will reincarnate you in a such place, but don`t expect too much favoritism. You will have what you have. The gods of that world will not harm you directly.”
“Okay… I understood everything. What now?”
“Close your eyes, kid. And let me do the rest.”
When I woke up I was somewhere in a forest, not in a sea. What surprised me was that I was not a ship but a girl. I hurriedly started to seek for a pond to use as a mirror. Usually in the novels, when you are reincarnated as a girl you become some beauty with big breast.
Even at a first glance I was sure that the God decieved me with being a ship, he didn`t do anything in exchange. There is nothing exciting about my looks: my chest is small, I have a weak bony arms with asian skin and the same with my legs. When I found water I saw my face. Simple face with average appearance. I started to cry because if you reincarnated me then why change my gender and turn me from average Joe into average Jane?
“Status”
No response, no screen with stats, there was nothing.
I decided to start panicking later, and now concentrate on looking through my possessions. There were: a tunic with skirt, nothing outstanding for fantasy world; a lunch box, decorated with flower design and actually quite a pretty one; a knife, with thin long blade, could it be that this is a dagger?
All in all I was greatly underequipped for survival in the middle of nowhere.
Let`s search for adventures and signs of civilization!
10 hours later
The night I met with a small campfire. I was twitching at every sound. I already tried using my weapon and found out that my skills did not improve out of nowhere. I couldn`t protect myself if something was about to happen. Sorry, fellow adventurers, if I ever find myself in situation ‘fight or flight’ then you will be on your own…
I started to cry. Why the hell God reincarnated me here without anything but a lunchbox and a knife? If he wanted me to die miserably just like that, why not kill me on the spot?
The sounds of the forest were approaching me. I grabbed my knife and prepared to make my last stand.
Two glowing eyes appeared in bushes. A wolf found me and decided to eat me.
I was overwhelmed immediately. 1/300th of a Spartan was lying on the ground while blocking the jaws with her knife. My strength was weakening with each second. I decided to put all of my remaining strength and hope into one final strike. I blocked the wolf`s jaws with my hand to free the knife and then hit the beast in its neck. Then I lost my consciousness.
What greeted me was that God.
“You did a good job, kid. To fight against a wolf with your bare hands. Commendable achievement for a little girl.”
“It is time?”
“Yes.”
I was exhausted. I said farewell to the memories of my life, of my friends and parents and prepared myself for the inevitable.
“You can decide what kind of ship you will become.”
What?
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IJN Kuronami - Super Destroyer - Kuudere - CatHMS Delight - Battlecruiser - Ojou-sama - Author`s choiceIJN Fuji - Carrier - Observer - Two-tailed foxHMS Princess Patricia - Pre-dreadnought battleship - RoyalJust checkingUSS Iowa/Missouri/Wisconsin/NewJersey - Please, no. Really, NO.Total voters: 71 · This poll was closed on Sep 8, 2020 09:50 AM.222Report CommentPermalink for Comment #Delete Comment\Reported Message in QuotesSearch
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No Enterprise, me me very sad. Guess I'll hit up that Author's choice then, though the other carrier wouldn't be a bad option.
Owari Da. I am Laffey faction.
IronBlood faction here! KMS Odin <3
OK HERE WE GO!
I was desperate enough to ask what my options were without pause.
Maybe add:
“I might reincarnate you if you want so… With one term.”
Maybe add: “I may reincarnate you if you wish so... with one condition”
“Please, tell me what you want.”
Maybe slightly add: “Please, tell me what it is. The original already works in my opinion, this is only a alternative
“Catch is that you will have your full capabilities only when behaving appropriately. Nothing more than that. Are my terms fine for you?”
Maybe add: “You can only access your full power if you behave appropriately to the character chosen.
“You like fantasy stuff, don`t you? I will reincarnate you in a such place, but don`t expect too much favoritism. You will have what you have. The gods of that world will not harm you directly.”
Mostly fine, just some corrections with these and spacing: ‘
When I woke up I was somewhere in a forest, not in a sea. What surprised me was that I was not a ship but a girl. I hurriedly started to seek for a pond to use as a mirror. When you are reincarnated you become some beauty with big breast.
Maybe change to: When I woke up I was surprised to find myself somewhere in a forest, I thought I was supposed to be in a sea. What surprised me the most however, was the fact that I was not a ship, but a girl instead! I hurriedly looked for a pond/lake (could be either) to use as a mirror. Usually in the novels, when you are reincarnated as a girl you become some beauty with a big chest.
At first glance my chest is small, no luck there. Weak bony arms with asian skin, same for my legs. When I found water I saw my face. Simple face with average appearance. I started to cry because if you reincarnated
Maybe change to: At first glance my appearance was nothing to be happy about, my chest was to small, my arms were to bony, and my skin had a distinct Asian color to it. Stumbling upon a pond/lake, my face turned out to be the same as my previous life: simple face with an average appearance. I started to tear up because if you reincarnated
I decided to start panicking later, and now concentrate on looking through my possessions. There were: a tunic with skirt, nothing world; a lunch box, decorated with flower design and actually quite a pretty one; a knife, with thin long blade, could it be that this is a dagger?[/quote]
Maybe change to: I decided to calm down, panic later, and take account of everything I had on me. There was: A tunic with a skirt, nothing much, a lunch box decorated with a pretty flower design, and finally a knife with a thin long blade. Wait, is this a dagger?.
Let`s search for adventures and signs of civilization!
I’m going to start editing the base quotes them selves to save time
The night started with a small campfire. I was twitching at every unnatural sound. I already tried using my weapon and found out that my skills did not improve out of nowhere. I couldn’t protect myself if something was about to happen.
I started to break down and cry. Why the hell would God reincarnate me here without anything but a lunchbox and a knife? If he wanted me to die miserably just like that, why not kill me on the spot?
The sounds of the forest were approaching me. I grabbed my knife dagger thing and prepared to make my last stand.
Two glowing eyes appeared ominously in The bushes. Apparently it was a wolf who decided to eat me.
the wolf’s jaws collided with my hand as I worked to free the knife and then, finally, I managed to hit/stabbed the beast in its neck. Then my consciousness faded to black.
What greeted me was that God.
1/300th of a Spartan
Thanks for the chapter ❤💙😊😎.
Lol 😂 hahaha
I think the yamato would to obvious ^^
Thanks for the chapter, quite liked the Kirov-class battlecruiser as it can handle air, surface, sub aquatic and low orbit attacks from memory. Though while supercarriers are a mans romance they don't do so well without support. Now to read on and find out what happened....
i want yamato. the one with wave motion gun.
Uchuuuu no senkan yamatoooooo ;)
Not gonna lie, I do feel like the ship selection is quite limited. Graf Spee, Yamato, or even straight-up Super-Yamato would've been interesting. Even if they weren't selected. Now only if we had an option for a Tillman-class/Maximum battleship option. So big that the Bow waves will destroy any ships nearby.
If there was one thing I would add, then it'd be that the story is a bit fast. I'm also kind of glad that the Iowa/Missouri didn't win. As I think most stories I've seen with modern ships in them, will always have the Iowa.
While having a lot of options is great for selection polls, for a story it is harmful. Even this much variety is hard to prepare. I need to keep in mind at least vague characteristics for each ship, and what I can make them do. If I would just make a similar story with each character it might end up having a battleship fighting sea turtles.
I considered having a super battleship but I thought that this many options were more than enough for the current situation. Not to mention I was skeptical that there will be that many readers...
"more than ordinary ship"
Add "an" after "than"
"to start panic later, and"
panic -> panicking
"actually quite pretty one"
Add "a" after "quite"
"protect myself is something"
is -> if
"kill me on spot"
Add "the" after "on"
"sounds of forest were"
Add "the" after "of"
"Two gloving eyes appeared"
gloving -> glowing
"I blocked wolf`s jaws"
Add "the" after "blocked"
"fight against wolf with"
Add "a" after "against"