Chapter 7 ((SFW) Sneak Peak) Trying more descriptive writing :O
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Now this chapter is meant to be NSFW so I'd thought I'd try be more descriptive instead of my usual lazy way. I still like my lazy way though, I've said before if you imagine your watching a anime/tv show you can usually fill in blanks by yourself. Well I just wanted to try this. Just taking longer then usual... also video games are distracting me...

Probably one main problem I have in writing like this, is my limited vocabulary.


Day 2 - Midday/Early afternoon


It's been a few hours since what happened this morning. Lilica has been strangely quiet ever since, I'm very worried. “Hey Lilica? You okay?” I ask, “You've been quiet ever since this morning.” After a few steps forward I notice she's not walking beside me any more. I look behind me and see her just standing still with her head held low. Is she still feeling guilty about this morning? As I question myself and walk up to her and place a hand on her shoulder, gently. Without warning she instantly interlaces her finger with mine before I can even make contact with her. “Lili...ca?” After cautiously saying her name I notice her ears twitch in response. Her hand tightens around mine. “Come with me.” she muttered softly. I look at her puzzled and confused. Before I have a chance to think what she meant, Lilica starts pulling at my dragging me in a unknown direction.

We arrive at a dark cave, but I get no moment to fully take it in. Lilica continues to drag me along with her. “Lilica... Wait!” My words fall on deaf ears as she drags me further and further into the cave. Eventually I see nothing, surrounded by nothing but darkness.

Suddenly the touch of her hand fades away. “Lilica!” I try calling her and get nothing in response. All I hear is my own voice echo through the cave. I look around slowly for maybe some indication of an exit, a faint light or something. Nothing. I slowly start shuffling slowly in a random direction till I come up to what feels like the wall of the cave. I slowly place my hands on the cave's wall, hopefully to able to maybe guide myself to an exit. But then...

*STAB*

“Huh!?” All of a sudden, pain starts to emerge from my left hand. “AAARGHH!!!” I scream in pain and attempt to pull my arm away. I couldn't. Whatever has impaled through my hand has hooked itself at the end, forcing my hand to stay against the wall. Without thinking I place my right hand on the wall in an attempt to help my left hand free. That was a bad idea...

*STAB*

Before I even notice my right hand on the wall, something impaled it. I scream once again echoing the whole cave. Just like my other hand I try and attempt to pull my self free. No luck, there isn't even enough room to maybe use one of my legs. All I know so far is that my hands are trapped forcing me to face the wall. Suddenly the area is illuminated by something behind me. I attempt to look behind me, but nothing, I couldn't turn my head that much. “Lilica? Is that you?”

Continue this style?
  • Yeah Votes: 36 66.7%
  • For at least Chapter 7 Votes: 5 9.3%
  • Nah, I Don't mind the other way Votes: 13 24.1%
Total voters: 54
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