Chapter 167: Die
Can this day get any worse? Luo Ai wanted to cry as she chased after her. When they had arrived at the scene, it was already worse than what the two predicted. Luo Ai didn't need any people to tell her anything as she dashes faster, drop kicking and punching the thugs before they could even realize what happened.
Ergo, this is how the scene is now.
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Can't you see that I'm an injured person as well?! As Liu Fei Fei shook him, Tang Weimin felt like he was going to throw up. He quickly pointed over at Long Shen's direction, "He's over there."
Like garbage, Liu Fei Fei chucks Tang Weimin to the side as she rushes towards Long Shen. However, Luo Ai grabs her arm before she could. Her face couldn't help but twitch at how reckless her friend is. To get to where Long Shen is, Liu Fei Fei would need to get past Duan Cheng and another one. They probably wouldn't let her walk past them without any problems.
And no, Liu Fei Fei didn't realize the surroundings. Instead, she snaps at Luo Ai, "Luo Ai, let go of my arm!" She couldn't believe her best friend would stop her from getting near her Shen. From the angle, Liu Fei Fie could see how badly injured Long Shen is, and her heart instantly broke. The only thoughts going through her mind are taking care of Long Shen, nothing else.
"Idiot! Are you that dense that you can't even look at the situation they're in?!" Luo Ai couldn't believe how irrational Liu Fei Fei is right now. She continues to spell it out for her, " If you jump in like that, you're just going to create problems for them instead!"
Yet Liu Fei Fei didn't seem to care as she screams, "I will beat them all till they beg me to kill them!" Duan Cheng and the other thug twitched at how ferocious sounding Liu Fei Fei is. However, behind all of that killing intent and threat, Luo Ai knows Liu Fei Fei is nothing more than a paper tiger.
Luo Ai continues to spell out how bad the situation is for them as she whispers, "Can't you see that they have the upper hand? Let's say you do charge at them. Then what? You can't even beat them, and you'll just become a hostage as well. Worst case scenario, they could even use Long Shen and Yao Shao as a hostage. It will put us in a worse position!"
Hearing how Long Shen could become a hostage, Liu Fei Fei chilled out. Even though she wanted to save Long Shen, she didn't want to hurt him in the process.
Her expression turns tearful as she looks at Luo Ai, "Luo Ai, can you do something about this?" Out of everybody, the only person that could be helpful in this situation would be Luo Ai.
From Liu Fei Fei's tearful face, Luo Ai wanted to cry as well. But not from stress and sadness. It was from how cute Liu Fei Fei is.
How could you make such a ridiculously adorable face?! For her lifetime, Luo Ai had never seen Liu Fei Fei make such a face to her. The only thing close to this is the love-stricken face she makes when she is with Long Shen. If Liu Fei Fei looks like a puppy with her favorite toy with Long Shen, this situation is a sad puppy losing her toy.
Luo Ai quickly assures her, "Fei Fei, give me like two no three minutes tops to deal with this situation." Luo Ai didn't say anything more as she moved closer towards the thugs.
As she walked, Liu Fei Fei could hear cracking sounds coming out of Luo Ai. Luo Ai was cracking her knuckles and rotating her cuffs around in circles. To anybody else, it looks like any other ordinary action coming out. However, Liu Fei Fei's tearful expression changes into a smile.
Whenever Luo Ai does this, it means that she is serious.
Naturally, Duan Cheng looks at Luo Ai with caution as she had just knocked out two of their guys with such ease. When Luo Ai had walked up in front of the thugs, Duan Cheng quickly backed away from her. The other thug, on the other hand, didn't seem to care as looking at her more made him feel lustful. Luo Ai only smiled lightly, but the words that came out of her mouth next didn't fit with the smile.
"Die."
It is unheard of that if I step into your future and you return to your past do not destroy your opponent and make family of that bit*h that I love and betrayed him lose power and disappear, author your story treats as it comes. To the top or is let’s see what happens day by day
Look your story is good but you don’t know how to focus I feel so far with over 100 chapters the protagonist has not made any progress to destroy his enemy and the idiot of his beloved, may not make my author words bigger but you’re stalling and you’re not focusing on what people or your audience want, I want to see mc succeed in destroying conquer become someone untouchable but I feel that the whole thing goes over 100 chapters and I don’t see so even begin in military branch ro I should do it.
In conclusion I notice the progress too slow for the number of chapters. I respect your opinion but I think most bad reviews are due to the ante mentioned by me.
It's better in my opinion that it progresses at this pace, when I started there were around 120ish chapters already out and when you're reading them in a row it's a great story. Now that I can only read 2 chapters at a time it does make the story feel a lot slower but I think that's due to having to wait for new releases. The chapters of this book are smaller than a lot of other books (Which I honestly prefer since I don't see the author adding lines purely for word count) but if you combine smaller chapters along with having to wait for them to be released it ends up making it feel like we are progressing at a snail's pace.
If you let your chapters build up and read them all in one go it shouldn't feel slow anymore, the rate at which this book is going allows for a lot of details to be added which I loved when reading the first 120 chapters in one go, its just harder to get that when current since you have a few days between reading sessions.
@Cactii It has argument is valid I respect it but look at a story with 160 and something to chapters and your turn to the mc who has done something relevant find the villains I do not see any of that you have more than 160 chapters you can tell me there is advance but I will tell you that if you have 160 and you go so many chapters are necessary
@Cactii You cannot defend the wrong approach and I believe that also a story that is taking many detours to see him begin to climb to the top, I do not see his desire for power, his search for absolute power so that nothing and nobody touches his family and him. .
We are talking about someone who is supposed to have lived a life before this one and yet I do not see the urgency or the maturity to change everything and have a future on top of everything and everyone.
Or is that not we wanted the readers when we began this story.
Some things:
1. Instead of looking at the chapter count, look at word count better because it provides a better representation as my chapters are on the shorter side tho I consistently post to counteract it.
Also, I think people don't realize I'm going to write like 2000 chapters.
2. Also me stalling? Hmmm, It depends on what angle you are looking at to be honest. But let me ask you; what would happen after the breaking of the engagement? If you're looking at it from that angle for wanting the scene of the breaking off the engagement, then that's a maybe
. But overall for the book, I'm not stalling. (And dammit, I kind of gave a spoiler with the tags TwT XD)
3. I know you want to see the MC become somebody that would be destroying conquer become someone untouchable, but I never thought of him becoming like that this soon. (Dudes still in high school still tf XD).
@placeintime Wait is 2000 chapter....
Your arguments are valid already with that I am more relaxed about it, but frankly I think there is something that does not fit but I will leave that opinion to me.