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Prologue.
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A family car is slowly progressing down a winding road, the famous landmark known as Mt. Fuji can be seen.
“Look girls! That’s Mount Fuji outside the window.”
“Whoa! Sister look! It’s so tall and it’s shining! So cool!”
“...”
“Come on Misaki, at least stop ogling at your phone so much! It’s unhealthy.”
“Sigh. Fine mom.”
The girl turns off her phone and stuffs it in her pocket before looking out of the window, probably contemplating life.
The car stops at a road crossing, where no other vehicles can be seen, the car accelerates and makes a right turn, just to be hit by an incoming truck, seemingly out of nowhere.
Crash
“... Help! Please!...”
“..S-Stop! What are you doing!?..”
“...Argh!...”
End of prologue
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In the end I don't know which is better... waiting 1 week to have 1 chapter of 1k word or waiting 1 day to have 1 chapter of 200 word...
In theory it is better to have a chapter of 200 words every day since a week has seven days, that is 200x7 = 1200 words, only this is only in mathematics
Excuse me but why does this, the PROLOUGE chapter have the most views? like WOT
edit: nvm chapter 1 now has the most views
Probably because it’s so short most people assume that it’ll be the trend so they just drop it.
I agree it needs a little more even for a prologue. I look forward to where you go with this.
Thanks for the... teaser? It needs a bit more substance but I want to see how you will play this out.
I do have to agree with others, the prologue is too short, and needs more substance to it.
That said, I still intend to read it because it is just the prologue, and doesn't mean the rest of the story will look like this.
I don't mean offense with any of this, but I really do think that it would be wise, from a general story point, as well as just to get more readers, your prologue needs improved. One of the stories I'm working on (though I haven't posted it yet, and it is currently my only story) the prologue is 600 words, and it could probably do with a bit more substance as well, even aside the other issues it has.
Uh this is a chapter? No offense but this isn't even a page. If 128 words is a chapter by your standards I can't see this story being any good. Heck 128 words is barely even a paragraph. Since the author obviously can't put in the effort I see no point in reading this story I'm out.
calm down, almost every page after this is 1k words at least
By the by, the chapter title is misspelled
fixed, thanks for the heads up!
It's called a prologue for a reason lol
Even prologues should be more than 128 words because that is way to short. The whole point of a prologue is to grab the readers attention you completely failed to do that. There’s a car crash so what? I know nothing of importance I have no idea who the mc is, if they die or not, what kind of thing person they are, not even what their name is. If you can’t even do a single one of those things how do you expect people to bother reading any further.
I would say, please make longer chapter. This chapter is literally: *a family travel in a car, they have an accident*