Countless.
Corpses everywhere. It doesn't stop. Entrails marked on the wall, corpses left and right... Eyeballs are sticking out of corpses and they keep on coming.
Why... WHY??!!
Death is something superfluous that is intended to give life meaning. Death is an act that is inevitable for all beings in the universe. Death is something one should not fear, but plan for. Death is an act of mercy. Without death, nothing would live.
Death occurs when life ceases to be. In this universe, death can occur at any time. Reason and ration are mutually exclusive. Reason is the end result. Rationing is the justification process.
W̸h̵i̸l̴e̵ ̸m̸y̶ ̷o̷r̷g̵a̸n̸s̸ ̷a̶r̸e̷ ̶s̴p̴r̶e̴a̴d̶ ̴a̸c̴r̶o̷s̸s̵ ̷t̵h̵e̸ ̷g̴r̸o̶u̷n̶d̶,̵ ̸I̶ ̷c̸o̷n̵t̴e̸m̸p̵l̶a̸t̴e̸ ̵w̸h̶a̴t̵ ̵a̶l̷l̸ ̷o̷f̵ ̸m̴y̷ ̷l̷i̷f̵e̴ ̷w̵a̴s̸ ̴f̵o̷r̴.̵ ̷D̴i̸d̷ ̵i̸t̵ ̵r̶e̴a̷l̴l̶y̵ ̸s̴e̴r̴v̶e̸ ̷a̸ ̶p̶u̵r̴p̵o̴s̷e̵?̵
My name is Penelope. Recently, I have been exploring opportunities to adventure with my party. In Harlequin city, the crisis level has been raised to B, meaning we were stuck out on patrol duty for a long time. A threat to mankind has been said to revive recently and I have the duty with my party to oversee it's activities.
I accepted a minor request recently to visit some unknown location which has been recently discovered.
But why is every pore in my body shaking...?
I am very tired.
I step forward slowly; my fatigue is really getting to me. I can barely see...
Looking up... Oh, I am in line. Why am I limping? Around me is grass and in front of me is... The empty sky? Why am I in line?
Huh, walking forward doesn't sound so bad... Since when was my hair black? Hmm hmm...
People in front of the line continue to walk into the empty sky, and it appears to be my turn to do so as well...
Wait, why am I doing this? Sho
My eyes fall on a pile of corpses in front of me. When I look up... Oh. That was me a moment ago, falling to it's death, what a pitiful existence...
It appears I was not looking at the empty sky, but the edge of a cliff. Several people with simple linen clothing continue to walk right off, adding to the collection of corpses ahead. Blonde haired men, pregnant women, children, they all walk the same road...
SPLAT!
More splatters happen one after another. Ruptured organs, twisted legs, severed heads...
Ohh... Look at that. It seems I am staring at an orb showing my previous vision. the mountain of corpses are all but a distant hologram for the orb. I am standing behind it, just watching the punishment happen.
Now that I see the orb, I feel a bit more pity for the beings being splattered. I really do not think this can go o
Huh...? Why am I watching an orb of myself watching an orb?! How many levels of fairy tale must my existence go on for?
I am real worried. I am surrounded by lab equipment designed to power the orb. there must be a switch, a lever... A button...
Why is this? No switch? Nothing like it?
As the door opens, a man walks in with green hair, but I cannot see any details beyond the hair color. What is approaching slowly is a silhouette with slowly appearing red dots for eyes. What an eerie grin...
As the figure gets slowly lit up on with the ominous light, more details emerge.
A lab coat...? Oh, he also has a tie. His grin is becoming more visible as time goes on, but what I am witnessing now is inhuman.
Like usual, the man has a gem fixated on the middle of his forehead, but his expression is entirely different from the man I was with before out on patrol.
His teeth look quite disordered and sharp. He is baring his teeth and fangs in the highest grin he can pull off, with eyes I thought were red dots looking onto me with great killing intent and hatred.
Do not be deceived though, that smirk is by no means one of inferiority and jealousy. Sloth does not exist on his expression.
Nothing but curiosity and wrath lurks on that thing's expression.
It already knows everything. It does not even need to state that fact.
The devil would be jealous; this is not a thing in this universe that should exist. It is an anomaly.
Monster is not a good descriptor either. Something omnipotent and with fury this deep-seated is something that cannot be described by mere words like "monster".
Betrayal. Banishment. Death. Let me witness all of my entrails again.
I'll take all of it. Just take me away from wrath incarnate.
And then I awaken from my daze.
ug, another aggravating headscratcher of a chapter. Why do you take such a circuitous approach to telling the story? Every chapter is practically stand alone excerpt of a much larger plot, not always told in chronological order. It is very frustrating to follow this story. I started reading because I liked the first volume, it was interesting, though sometimes a headscratcher, but this volume you threw out the principles of good story telling and made the chapters very annoying. How long do you intend to keep this up? I keep feeling like I must be a glutton for punishment to keep reading your chapters, hoping for improvement only to get another painful reading experience (and I do not mean the gore.) The plot is all over the place and I never know what to expect in the next chapter.
(At least this chapter mentions a character Penelope, and I assume she is the one viewing/experiencing these lemming like deaths of marching off a cliff; though I do not know why, it looks like Sword is experimenting on her. Also it does not seem like it was really neccessary for the plot to have Sword quickly become a sociopathic/mad scientist type after the events at the pillar. I don't recall there being an explanation for why his character is behaving so differently from before. His thoughts are difficult to follow and explanations take alot of re-reading to make sense of. It is hard to accept that his curiosity about things alone would be enough for him to start treating everyone like a guinea pig.)
Edit: Maybe I'm just confused and reactions overblown, but each chapter takes a while for me to figure out what is going on, and everything stated above is indeed how I end up feeling after reading a chapter each time a new chapter finally comes out.
Thank you very much for the feedback! :)
I want to clarify that this is not a sudden personality change and is only a dream/vision chapter. Both Content warning chapters have been.
Yes, I am trying to fill out length in normal chapters but this chapter I couldn't really do much because I didn't have many details to work with since it's not part of the main cannon. I really do appreciate long-form responses like this and will seriously consider reworking some of the later ideas for the chapters, though they get pretty simplified from this point on.
Ah also sorry for the post frequency, life suddenly went though a storm of annoying changes and am dealing with it (not that it changed the frequency much).