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Hey guys, Sorry for not saying this earlier, but I will probably stop writing in this novel. This novel was honestly a ridiculous one, that lacked any actual quality in it. The system was half-assed used from a good novel but obviously did not suit this novel in the long-run. I am now making and rewriting a novel called 'Time Stipend'. If you are interested, you are welcome to read it.
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I thought it was quite decent tho....
You have 6.2k readers and you aren't happy? Are you holding out for a movie deal?
Most stories here would sacrifice their love life to get 2k readers.
This is just because people are perverts... They only looked at this novel since it had tentacles in it. It is not quality work, just a f*cking po*no.
I really don't wish to sell my soul for this... Garbage.
@bignt don't sell ur soul our souls u have 6.3k all pretty much good to use
@bignt Garbage is subjective and you ain’t selling any souls for it
@bignt It's not rubbish, it might be po*nographic, but the story is good. The protagonist still has a lot to be developed and I wouldn't mind if the po*n was drastically reduced.
You are a good writer and even if you have a few mistakes here and there, you can still improve. Listen to a similar one,
i'm also writing a story like this and i'm doing my best to develop the story and the protagonist keeping nsfw.
But if you ever write that "junk" again, remember, it can be recycled and improved to be "beautiful and inspiring garbage".
Good luck! :)
@bignt mentally ret*rded
@bignt — I don't think your soul is in jeopardy quite yet. It had two major points (in BOTH versions):
It was interesting.
It was entertaining.
You created characters that we, the readers could be happy to be friends with . . .
@EugeneTillory You are totally right