Just for fun here are some quick and dirty stats for a few characters. You don't have to read them..
Thoy the Cool Old Lady and Former Monster Hunter:
Level 7 Stormbringer
Stat spread: Strength/Aura/Resolve
Abilities: Storm Affinity (like Slime Affinity but storm), Storm Understanding (like Slime Understanding but storm), Storm Cloud (calls miniature cloud that spits out lightning and rain), Storm Fist (punch stuff and electrocute and shockwave them), Arcing Lightning (chain lightning thingy), Thunder Wave (sound-based shockwaves), Storm Wings (flight ability), Speed of Lightning (turn into lightning, arrive at destination), Storm Resurgence (burst healing ability), and one more ability that is a spoiler.
Sardu the Guardian:
Level 3 Muscle Ninja
Stat spread: Strength/Agility/Luck
Abilities: Muscle Amplification (increases muscle building and power), Ninja Tricks (variety of tricks including stealth, lockpicking, ways to conceal weapons, etc.), Burst of Speed (makes her really fast in bursts), Endless Armament (gives her ninja tools and throwing weapons), Explosive Unarmed Combat (basically punching/kicking stuff really hard), Ninja Throwing (really good at throwing stuff), Ninja Evasion (defensive skill that avoids or lessens the impact of attacks)
Phylu the Community Head:
Level 4 Bellower
Stat spread: Aura/Control/Resolve
Abilities: Bellowing Amplification (allows shouting really hard), Bellowing Control (allows fine control of shouts), Bolstering Bellows (buffs every ally who hears him shout), Destructive Bellow (shout so hard everything in an area in front of him is damaged), Bellowing Beam (damages everything in a controlled beam), Bellowing Launch (bellows so hard he launches himself through the air, can control landing with more bellowing; think sound-based rocket), Bellowing Barrier (controls a shout that becomes a barrier of sound).
Phylu literally shouts things to death, thats great lol
Cool! Web fiction can be a bit rough when it comes to editing already published chapters so I'm glad you felt comfortable enough to make the edits
Thoy the Cool Old Lady and Former Monster Hunter:
Wonder does she have a mind-controlled hammer that only she can pick up?
You... you turned the Skyrim dragonborn shout into it's own specialized class complete with unique abilities.
I gotta admit, I'm chuckling and I'm impressed.
Storm Affinity (like Slime Affinity but storm), Storm Understanding (like Slime Understanding but storm), Storm Cloud (like Slime Summoning, but storm), Storm Fist (who needs a tazer? Not me), Arcing Lightning (i like to think you're all just walking lightning rods), Thunder Wave (first lightning, then thunder), Storm Wings (wingardium leviOHsa), Speed of Lightning (thunderclap and flash), Storm Resurgence (the saying is a lie. Lightning always strikes twice), and one more ability that is a spoiler.
Muscle Amplification (JACKED! UP!), Ninja Tricks (skill no jutsu), Burst of Speed (nin nin. Nin nin.), Endless Armament (I AM THE BONE OF MY SWORD....), Explosive Unarmed Combat (see, the explosion is your blood and flesh), Ninja Throwing (i mean, if you can't throw ninja stars, are you REALLY a ninja?), Ninja Evasion (substitution jutsu)
Bellowing Amplification (ALL WILL HEAR ME), Bellowing Control (EXCEPT YOU BRIAN, YOU SUCK), Bolstering Bellows (ANYWAY, YOU'RE ALL STRONG NOW), Destructive Bellow (ROAR!), Bellowing Beam (ima firin ma BAAAA-), Bellowing Launch (can i double jump with this? I should be able to double jump with this), Bellowing Barrier (YOU! SHALL! NOT! PAAAAAAASSSSS!).
Thank you for the character stats (which I have read for sure)