'hi, my name is Keita oota your average senior high school student. I'm so average that there is nothing I can say to describe myself, my hair is black with average looks and average grades, that's it like I told you I'm your normal average teenage boy. So how did I end up in this situation you ask? I have no idea, a few hours ago I was just sleeping through the boring history class...but when I open my eyes I saw a green-skinned woman. Of course, I was startled I tried to look around hoping to understand what's going on, but I can't move at all or feel any part of my body for that matter, I can only look up to the ceiling of what seems to be a cave? maybe I was kidnapped by some kind of an alien? well whatever it is I can't move anyway so I was at the mercy of that green-skinned woman, and because I'm...feeling a little...bit sleepy I decided... to take a nap *yawn*' and so he closes his eyes.
Why that short?
This is the prologue and all
Quite a big chapter
Really? I thought it's short
@DeathLeon better think about making it shorter
@TheBoredDreamer Nah this is a prologue so the next one is even more words
Right off the bat: capitalization. With that said, might I suggest some of the free online grammar checkers. Though, they can be better, it'll help you see some grammatical errors you can fix.
Thanks