I drifted slowly to my room. Too much stuff happened. Brain full. Another busy, being tossed all across the place with little free time. I shouldn’t complain though since it’s not like I couldn’t run away nor am I living a painful life – unless I was still going to be eaten one day.
*droop*
Resting my head against the wall, I sulked. Was there any need for me to go along with this plan? As long as I was able to remove all the magic inhibiting crystals in the building, it wouldn’t be too difficult for me to rebalance the order of things – but could I really overwhelm all the guards here?
I just need to relieve the stress I built up just thinking about it –
“Baaaaaaa!”
That was quieter than I anticipated, but maybe that was for the better? I didn’t have something like a watch on me, but it was quite dark outside. As I was going to go down, I saw Ava.
“Oh, are you okay Mi- Alice?”
“Yeah Ava, just very, very tired.”
“Ha-ha I can assume so from your reaction, did both Marie and Lloyd do you harshly?”
“Yeah, there actions were weird and made me so confused!”
I wanted to go on a cruder rant about Marie’s harassment, but Lloyd was just incomprehensible. He was the coldest yet warmest at the same time?
Wait why was Ava blushing.
“Alice, you did ‘it’ with both of them?”
Now I was the one who turned beet red. Why would she assume that though? I looked down again. My top was ripped before I left Marie’s room.
“No!”
Using the remainder of my energy, I walked down the stairs as fast as possible and hopped naked into bed. Please don’t let me wake up from this!
*Knock knock*
*Yawn*
And now another day began with another peculiar event. I went to open the door. Oh, it was Ava – and she had my maid clothes washed and dried anew!
“Thank you!”
“I’m sorry! Have a good trip!”
Huh?
*Slam*
She slammed the door and ran away? Oh. I really need to pay attention to my clothes before I turn this exhibitionism into a habit – my wool only covered my wrist and ankles in this form. Wait could it be possible for me to manipulate the strings on the cuffs? I’ll have to test it out but first, breakfast!
As I rushed to put on my beloved maid clothes, I walked to the dining room and...
Lloyd, Emil, and Marie all at the entrance as if I was late for something.
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also why didn't you name it Baahh'd Habits XD
Oh my god, this completely slipped my mind - genius
Well, why don't I give my opinion. I do not understand this wave of hatred towards this guy, he only expressed his opinion and gave advice, albeit in a rude form. Yes, no one likes criticism, but without it we will not know better to pay attention to or what is worth changing, nothing is done by praise alone. I also want to give advice to the author, I believe that not a single well-written story is complete without a "backbone", I mean that the author should, firstly, write down in his note, the hero's distant goals and some short-term ones. Secondly, it is worth writing down certain actions or events that will occur on the way to these goals, for example, arriving in the city x, meeting the future partner y, and so on. but how, when, for what reason it will happen already to adjust to your new thoughts. I also noticed in some authors the changes in the characters of the characters, as if they suffer from schizaphrenia, so it is also worth writing it down separately and adhering to the original character (and if you change it only with some significant event or with a skip of time, long skip). It seems to me that thinking over the constriction in advance, albeit only in rough sketches, is quite important.
As the saying goes, a good house starts with a blueprint, doesn't it?
As for rereading my text, it’s also a good idea, for example, I always reread my official letters several times before sending, this is a good habit. I agree with this guy.
And yes I am not a writer and you obviously do not have to listen to my or his advice, after all, this is just advice.
Have a nice day!
Thank for the chapter
Thanks for the chapter it was a good one
don't eat the sheep tho
...I'm suddenly getting the terrible premonition that my bloodthirst will not be sated, after all. how sad.
sad torches and pitchforks
good chapter, but effectively did she misheard her knowledge, reading it or one person ha gived her some of his knowledge (principal suspect Lloyd who already tell her some things when they go for the first time in the city)
Thx for the chap.
Thanks for the meal. What could they be planning?