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"Ok that's pretty hard". Rick sighed while he pushed his bike around. Today was not particularly a lucky day for Rick as he was facing some hard time. First thing in the morning he got a mail regarding his entrance test result for a reputed school in the city and despite giving his best he didn't qualify for it.
And although none in his immediate family will blame him for it but now Rick was in a dilemma, should he settle for a less reputed school or should he apply for another school in another city.
Rick has a family supporting him at every point of life. His loving mother taking care of him since his childhood even when his father was not available for him and was busy with his work. His father although absent from his early years while he was growing up, was the constant source of motivation in his life. His sister was the focus of his adoration, her cheerful laughter got rid of any worries he had.
So when his results arrived he had a thoughtful morning. When his mother saw him she can see the tension on his face.
"Hey Rick" his mother called him.
"Yeah mom" Rick answered.
"Would you be kind enough to fetch some groceries for the house as we are running pretty low on it."
"Sure mom I will be free in an hour." Rick replied in a monotonous voice.
Rick washed up as it was going to be afternoon in a few minutes. He got ready and left his house to go towards the local mall. While on the way his bike broke down and now he is pushing it around.
Rick was waiting on the signal when he realised a lady with a child cart that she was holding on to while on the opposite end of the road crossing. While looking towards her and appropriating her beauty he didn't realise that the signal was green now.
When he was getting ready to cross the road, he can see a fast moving car in his peripheral vision. Realisation struck him that the car is not slowing down at any rate and maybe the lady with the child might be in danger. Sensing that trying to warn her would not be possible now. He rushed towards them.
All his life Rick was not a heroic guy. He himself didn't realise how he got the idea of helping her just in the spur of the moment.
Result you ask? Well Rick is now on the road lying down in a pool of blood, most probably his own.
"This is a quite a disappointing end." When he tried to open his eyes, he can see the face of the mother of the child. At this point of time her face was nothing less then that of a fairy. He can see her mouth moving.
'Ohh, she must be screaming for help. Sorry, to disappoint you lady I can feel my internal organs rupturing, I don't think I can survive this haha' Rock thought. Rick's hearing faculties had been collapsed.
Last thing he saw was a car stopping by and she carried him to it with help from some pedestrians. And then he closed his eyes never to open them again in this life.
'Well atleast the mother child pair was saved' was the last lingering thought in his mind. In his last moments he was worried for his family how they will take his loss. How they will move forward with their lives.
Before I continue I need to ask.
To what extent do I have to prepare for netorare or is that a mistag? I really don't like reading mc getting his girls stolen. So if it is actually netorare and not a mistag or something I don't think I will be able to bring myself to read this.
I will just tell you one thing that tag was selected by me, that is not a mistag. So read at your own risk. One thing I would like to clear though, in this work I am writing, there is no concept of MCs girls. Atleast not till now. It's an all in all smut fest. Everyone x everyone.
Whether you read it or not thanks for asking about it first instead of down rating it right away. haha??
@Slayer104 I understand. thank you for the honest reply.
@Slayer104 oof... read first chapter without noticing netorare tag, gg me. Not my cup of tea, but thanks for first chapter. Decent setup of MC's personality and family background, but I think if you up-played the devastated by rejection thing it would have added a bit more depth to the mc.. ty tho.
@Miwa that tag is just to play it safe because most people can't comprehend the difference between a free use world and neto and then they simply down vote. Just let me clear a few things for you and others.
1. I hate neto and cheating (ohh.. the irony, considering my novel topping the neto charts )
2. MC won't have exclusive right over the other woman. They got their own husband's and they love them.
3. None of the woman MC sleeps with are going to betray him or cheat on him (atleast till where I have envisioned the story). Does that mean they won't sleep with others? Of course no. They will sleep with whoever pays, that's just how their society works. But everytime they will do that, it will just be a transaction for them. They aren't going to be emotionally involved with others like they are with MC.
4. Neto is more about emotional betrayal then physical. Thore won't be any of that sh*t involved.
Thanks, hope that clears my POV
So there is NTR? Ugh! nvm... thanks for the first chapter!
I don't mind if the MC doing it but if the females that he slept with did it , i just can't stomach it... dunno why though...
@hichris23 that's what you infered from such a long post
@Slayer104