I Am Mad Scientist
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[This novel has been published to Amazon and Google Playbooks. The entirety of volume 1, namely chapters 1-75--in addition to all the side chapters--have therefore been taken down. However, you can read chapters 75 and onwards for free.
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/CupcakeNinja_My_Sister_The_Villainess?id=cVXUDwAAQBAJ
https://play.google.com/store/books/details/CupcakeNinja_My_Sister_The_Villainess?id=cVXUDwAAQBAJ
...If you love memes, cute tree spirits and general random chaos fueled by weed and soda, then you, my friend, have come to the right place.]
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I can never anticipate what will happen the next paragraph let alone the next chapter. How the hell one goes from crazy magic science to planting trees and feeding lolies?
Never change author.
No one knew how to achieve delayed casting past the era of the Second Cataclysm when all the great mages of the mortal realms were taken and their souls were interrogated by malevolent beings from the God Realm.
Those divine yanderes really devolved the world's magical development all the way back to the bronze age.
It's so cool! Sonova beach
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Tx for the Megumin ref.
ANd the boy
Oh man this was fun, tyvm for the chapters :D
What have you done old man?
Thanks for the chapter.
By the way, you were shifting between first- and third-person perspective a bit in this chapter. I don't know if it's something you've done before and I just didn't notice but it can be pretty jarring.
Nah it wasn't first person. It was more third person omniscient. This means the narrator knows the thoughts and feelings of all the characters.
The cnfusion is normal. It's just cuz so many different perspectives are used, see. You switch from one person to another without warning in third person omniscient. If you did otherwise it would be even more jarring, or would turn into bursts of third person limited which would make a mess.
Lots of readers aren't used to that style of writing tho. It can be understandably confusing.
...unless you meant i used "I" in there a few times. Which is just a habit from writing first person so long. But at a glance i can't find mistakes like that here.
@CupcakeNinja Oh okay. Gotcha.
Also unrelated but there's this little quote that seems to switch between past- and present-tense between sentences:
'Now, however, everything was so much more tangible. She experiences the world just like the Prince does and her sense of time is fixed too.'
@Atramede Hm yeah strictly speaking it's wrong for the word to be "was " instead of "is"
It's one of those things that can be used and understood, but isn't entirely right. I actually did notice that one too but was too lazy to clear it up since i'd have to edit it at several different sites. Fir something that is only technically wrong it was a bit of a chore...hehe.
English is a bit of a f*cked language. Though the entire first line is admittedly awkward-sounding even disregarding the weird tense.
@CupcakeNinja 'English is a bit of a f*cked language.' Ain't that the truth. I'm a native speaker and I still feel like just giving up half the time trying to make sense of our Frankenstein's monster of a tongue.
I forgot that you post this at multiple different sites though so I suppose editing must become pretty annoying. I don't even know if you have a dedicated editor or not.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter and all that. Really enjoying Day's adventures in ruining everyone's shit.
@Atramede and phase one ain't even done. He still got a ton of sh*t to do. Hell he hasn't even started going to other realms yet.