its been 3 months since ive worked for Mrs Beatrix
Grinding my already high tailor skills up, Ive managed to reach new heights
Ding!
grand tailor reached level 2
grand tailor reached level 3
grand tailor reached level 4
grand tailor reached level 5
Aryan found out that he had a cheat code. Synthesis
He didn't play around with the skill side of it, since it could be dangerous.
But, Synthesis allowed for the user to combine skills or items
In his spare time, he made a dress and fused it with a suit armour
Yeah.... that was pretty busted
Ding!
The maiden's war cry - (Armor)
+20 Defense
+20 Attack to Axe and sword weapons
+5 Agility
Requirements
-Female
-Must have a warrior class
-Over level 15
the problem with synthesis was its cooldown, taking a month. However, the skill is only level 1, which means it has great potential
"Aryan, come down" Shouted kind granny Mrs Beatrix
3 months and they developed a relationship like a grandmother and a grandson. It is said that Mrs Beatrix had a child, which died of an outbreak of disease cast by a suicide ritual via a level 100 witch
the people of the spell were never caught, but some gossip speculates that it was the powerful red witches the lived in the highest peaks
There were a myriad of different races in this worlds with their advantages and disadvantages
Elves have great atonement with nature, high many pool and senses, but the weak body's due to the poisoning of the life tree
Dwarfs were renowned for their strong crafting body's and crafts, but the pitiful speed and magic
Beastmen and Beastwoman were just faster humans specializing in power over speed. However, their race determines the attribute. if it was a lion beastmen, the power would be insane but the magic is faulty
Humans and beastmen have been at war for many years, due to the world main god "Eve" Apparently fucking a horse or something, I don't know
there were 2 main types of religions in this world
There was a religion solely focused on the system, thinking it a powerful god sharing its benevolence or whatever
And then was religion focused on Gods, who apparently made the systems so humanity could grow
they both sound like bullshit propaganda, so Aryan didn't care
but when there's religion, there are cults
An accident 100 years ago witnessed a group of cultist called gods benevolence slaughter a whole village as sacrifices to the system. They apparently got powerful magic called blood magic, which was manipulation of the blood
(Think of a blood bender off avatar baso)
there are other races like angel, demons, Fairies, Halflings, Mermaids, Dryads, Centaurs, Cyclops etc
Going down the stairs, Aryan saw regular customers, Duke Cornwall and his daughter, Erika Cornwall
She had a hot temper and liked to punch things while angry.
Aryan called her red hot chilli pepper, due to her red hair
Looking at them blankly and did a practised bow. Mrs Beatrix made me learn etiquette due to the noble customers she gets
Now, Aryan wanted to throw up just hearing Courtesy and Etiquette
"Ah. Aryan, nice to see you" The Duke said, bowing back
people call him the "Duke" since he got insecure about his first name. His brother was in line for the duke position, not him, and when his brother died he apparently had a mental breakdown. Aryan thinks fondly of him
"I want to request a battle suit for my daughter" Duke's tone changed as his gaze sharpened
Suddenly, The kind old Mrs Beatrix eyes turned into slits and she coldly spoke
"We do not do those here." She said, hissing at him
"Why do you even need it?" Mrs Beatrix said coldly
"Cant you make an exception?" The duke said "We are holding an Adror diplomatic party and I wanted to make sure my daughter is safe" he said, with a look of hatred in his eyes. Apparently, his brother was a genius. An extremely talented sword user that could cut the sky in half or something. at that time Adror and Acna started getting into fights, which made Adror supposedly nit the flower by its bud and kill his brother before he got too powerful
Poor duke isn't suited for duke position, being tame and kind. But the moment when somebody says Adror, his eye's go as cold as a mother disappointed stare
"N-" Before Mrs Beatrix could cut him off, Aryan gave a sign language to tell her to wait, before she could respond, Aryan said
"I might have a way to help you there" Muttering, his eyes telling Mrs Beatrix to follow.
With her slowly walking into his room, she towards the dress that was presented as a trophy
Mrs Beatrix had a Level 7 identify, the upgrade of Appraisal. Most skills evolved at level 10 except for some certain skills like inheritance magic and others
"When did you create this?" Mrs Beatrix looked at me like some monster
"Not long ago, I didn't have the chance to tell you," I said, telling her the truth.
With a sigh and a bitter smile, she said "Ill guess ill make an exception this one time, but don't do this again without telling me okay?" She said with a smile
"Yes ma'am" I replied
Grabbing the dress, she said "What do you request from the Duke, make sure to make it Extorbant so the old geezer doesn't come back and request this again"
Suddenly, Mrs Beatrix turned into a devil in Aryans mind.
With a gulp, he went downstairs
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the powerful red witches the lived in the highest peaks
that lived in the highest peaks.
Elves have great atonement with nature, high many pool and senses, but the weak body's due to the poisoning of the life tree
attunement with nature, high mana pool, and good senses, but a weak body due to the poisoning of the life tree.
Dwarfs were renowned for their strong crafting body's and crafts, but the pitiful speed and magic
for their strong bodies and excellent crafts, but pitiful speed and weak in magic.
Beastmen and Beastwoman were just faster humans specializing in power over speed. However, their race determines the attribute. if it was a lion beastmen, the power would be insane but the magic is faulty
were just humans specializing in a certain attribute. Their race determines the attribute.
Humans and beastmen have been at war for many years, due to the world main god "Eve" Apparently f*cking a horse or something, I don't know
due to the world's main god / due to the main god of the world "Eve"
group of cultist called gods benevolence slaughter a whole village
called Gods Benevolence. Capitalize names
which made Adror supposedly nit the flower by its bud and kill his brother before he got too powerful
nip the flower in the bud and kill his brother
With her slowly walking into his room, she towards the dress that was presented as a trophy
slowly walking into his room, towards the dress that was presented as a trophy.
You might want to mention that the duke isn't following them. From how they were talking i thought Aryan was telling the Duke to follow him in order to show what he is talking about. You could say that he had whispered in the old ladies ear instead of speaking to the duke. And i believe that she should be the one to make the extravagant price since she's the owner of the shop and is the one who actually wants to put an excessive price. Aryan wouldn't even know what is excessive or not. If he knows the market price he would still have no idea what would actually be considered expensive for a duke
waytodank bro my heead is popping
@Duckchaser1 sorry, these are just some obvious errors that come more from language than style
It is Angel not angle
Still I look forward to more <3
@Whit3M3dusa much love man! Fix it now
@Duckchaser1 I am mot a man I am a fae and I shan't have a gender until I have stolen one from someone with words
@Whit3M3dusa SORRY SIR
@Duckchaser1 apologies accepted but still, not a sir and also the lack of capital letters in front of demons and angels make the rest seem weird also angels in plural
@Whit3M3dusa its a really bad habit , sorry
@Duckchaser1 keep doing your best! And I'll be here to read your story so cheer up!
t@Whit3M3dusa thanks!