1st POV
"Well?" I asked Midoriya that was in a daze.
'I must cancel one of my plans because of you! So be responsible and answer me!! At first, I planned to have a superhero landing while Midoriya in a bind fighting All for One, but because his target is me I can't do that now!' I thought.
Well, doing a superhero landing while explaining the main character's secret is one of my dreams, but now it's ruined because the Villain's target is not the main character but me! This Ayame!
"A-Alright. I'll tell you about One for All." Said Midoriya.
"Umu, I'm listening. Shoot."
"The thing is, I don't know much. All Might told me that One for All is a quirk that accumulates strength from generation to generation. Right now I'm the 9th holder of One for All with All Might as 8thholder. All Might had said that my body can't handle the full strength of One for All for now, that's why I kept trying to find a way to control it."
Midoriya explained what he knows about One for All. I put my right hand on my chin and smiled.
'Fufufufu, it seems I need to give him that training after all. Let's ask him first, because this will be hard for him.
"Control huh, by the way, Midoriya." I called out to him to get his attention. "You, why are you only use your punch?"
Midoriya was confused by what I said and asked. "Why? Because my quirk is the best if I use it that way."
"Are you by chance an idiot?" I said flatly. Yup, he's an idiot, he opened his mouth and didn't say anything when I called him an idiot after all.
"Think, do you remember how strong I am?" I asked.
"Your quirk is strong, versatile. You can move at a fast speed, even faster than Iida with his quirk. When in quirk apprehension your score is the highest in all tests, except the ball throw you are second after Uraraka..." Midoriya put his hand on his chin and began mumbling out loud. "…more importantly you are skilled, your way of using your power is your biggest factor to your strength."
'Finally, he stopped. How far did you want to analyze it? Yet you leave one important detail.'
"Right? But you leave a single detail."
Midoriya was curious when he heard me. He looked at me expecting an answer from me.
"I am indeed strong, maybe I could win against All Might in a fistfight if we are talking about his condition right now." I said and paused for a while letting Midoriya understand my words clearly.
"But, how do I fight? Did I use my fist? Yes, I use it but my main way of attack is my sword." After I said that Midoriya had a look of realization.
"I…see. I don't think about it. I had a choice, not using only my fist, but using a weapon too!!" and Midoriya started mumbling any incomprehensible thing again.
'Did he only get that? It seems like he needs another push.'
"No, I think you are not suited for a weapon. To use a weapon you need to train for a long time, if you suddenly change your style from barehanded to using a weapon, you will only get weaker instead."
Midoriya stopped mumbling and turned confused again.
'This guy!!' I started losing my patience and told him flatly.
"Use your leg idiot! The leg is 3 times stronger than arms, so it would not break easily! And the way you use your quirk, you only focused on 1 part instead of using it throughout your body. You are an idiot, understood?" I shouted directly at Midoriya's face and he got scared.
"Y-Y-Yes! I-I-I am an idiot!" He replied instantly and stopped to think. He entered his thinking mode again, I was the one who gives that habit of his, mumbling incomprehensible thing name, thinking mode.
"Stop your mumbling! You mongrel is not suitable using shoes. Take it off." I keep shouting at Midoriya. Well, it's not my style but I need to get it done as fast as possible.
"U-um, why do I need to take off my shoes?" Midoriya asked me in a low voice.
"Because I said so, from now on you are a monkey. Do you understand? You are forbidden to use your hand, live with your leg only. Eating, brushing your teeth, showering, writing, and everything. From now on, for 3 days you are forbidden to use your hand." I said as I put both of my hands on my waist.
"Uh, why? I just need to train my kick right?" For the first time, Midoriya let out his complaint.
"Why? Because you are a mongrel, a monkey. From today you are a monkey. Monkey did a lot of things with their leg and feet. Come here, let me show you something."
I said as I go to a nearby tree and stood in front of it. Midoriya followed me curiously and stopped behind me.
"Stood there, and look." I pointed a small rock on my left side. Midoriya walked to the spot that I pointed at and looked at me.
"You said you just need to train kicking right? Let me show you when an amateur kicking things." I said as I approached the tree.
"Look closely." I said and kicked the tree using my right leg. I kicked the tree using a kick that was called a Yakuza kick, just a straight kick without any preparation.
The tree that I kicked was snapped and fell to the ground with a loud thud. Midoriya who looked at the scene was excited. He didn't think that a kick could be that strong. But, interrupted him in his excitement.
"Wipe that amazement off your face, that was how an amateur kicked things. Now, let me show you the real kick, the one achieved by training hard." I said as I approached another tree not far from the one that I had knocked down.
"Look closely, a trained kick is refined and fast. You will miss my kick if you didn't look at it closely."
This time, I got into a stance. I put my right leg behind my left one and turned my body sideways. When I am ready, I unleashed a karate kick to the tree with all my strength.
The kick connected and a part that hit my kick directly was gone. Not only that, a gust of wind was created when I kicked knocked over a lot of trees behind the one that I kicked.
This time, Midoriya's mouth was wide open. He can't see when the kick hit the tree, but he suddenly felt a gust of wind and closed his eyes. When he opened his eyes again, a lot of trees were already knocked down.
"T-that's amazing!!" Midoriya said.
"Right? Now, do what I say and took off your shoes!!" I shouted at Midoriya.
"Yes!!" Midoriya replied back with a shout.
"Good, now your training begins!"
'Good, now because I am your trained! I will have fun too!'
Since she’s already ‘saved’ Eri (and Overhaul technically), and now is training Deku… will there be no moment where Eri is latched onto Deku’s back to help him control his quirk?
More importantly, will we get some scenes of the white haired horned little sister (Eri) and big sister (Ayame) doing SoL family stuff?
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Thanks for the chapter
Just a... few... corrections to grammar
with All Might as 8thholder
Space between 8th and holder
You can move at a fast speed
You can move fast
But you leave a single detail.
But you forgot a single detail.
But, how do I fight? Did I use my fist?
But, how do I fight? Do I use my fists?
"You, why are you only use your punch?"
the you is a bit weird but i guess it can still be. "You, why are you only punching?
I don't think about it.
I didn't think of that.
I started losing my patience and told him flatly.
I'm starting to lose my patience, so I'll just tell him flatly.
"Use your leg idiot! The leg is 3 times stronger than arms, so it would not break easily!
Use your legs idiot! Your legs are 3 times stronger than your arms! They won't break as easily.
I was the one who gives that habit of his, mumbling incomprehensible thing name, thinking mode.
I gave that incomprehensible mumbling habit of his a name, thinking mode.
Or something along those lines, as it is the sentence is a bit of a mess.
You mongrel is not suitable using shoes. Take it off.
You're (or you are) a mongrel that is not suitable for using shoes! Take them off.
You are forbidden to use your hand, live with your leg only.
You are forbidden from using your hands, live with your feet only.
When comparing hands I feel like feet would be the more appropriate comparison rather than the whole leg. also plural since i doubt she is making him use only one foot.
"Uh, why? I just need to train my kick right?"
Uh, why? I just need to train my kicks right?" Plural since i doubt he would train only one. flows better.
From today you are a monkey.
From now on you are a monkey.
Monkey did a lot of things with their leg and feet.
Monkeys do a lot of things with their legs and feet.
I said as I go to a nearby tree and stood in front of it.
You say 'I said' a lot when it's not needed.
I go to the nearby tree and stand in front of it.
Stood there, and look.
Stand there and watch.
I said and kicked the tree using my right leg.
I kicked the tree using my right leg.
But, interrupted him in his excitement.
I interupt his excitement
Or something to that effect. As is it's a bit weird.
"Wipe that amazement off your face, that was how an amateur kicked things.
that was how an amateur kicks things.
Now, let me show you the real kick, the one achieved by training hard."
Now let me show you a real kick, one that can only be achieved by hard training.
my kick if you didn't look at it closely.
my kick if you don't watch closely.
and took off
and take off
'Good, now because I am your trained! I will have fun too!'
Good, now because I'm your trainer, I'm going to have some fun too!
damn, lots of them... will fix it .. tomorrow
Oh boy, torture time!
Out of idea Nya~~
lol, actually out of idea
@RaizarP Can't keep having original thoughts to say Nya~~
@Bunny
B-but
@RaizarP At least it's not just a "." Nya~~
@Bunny
wise word
@RaizarP You can't get the title of Priestess without merit Nya~~
@Bunny That's... makes senses. Truly a wise priestess