I noticed the newest chapters aren’t really getting any comments :( :(. If you’re reading and enjoying please comment!!! Otherwise I might have to stop writing this if i get sad… also someone else told me i was “spamming” too much so i guess i’ll start only posting one chapter a day? Im sowwy if i annoyed anyone uwu
The next floor had a sey human lady there, sitting on a fancy chair! She was a big strong lady with big boobies and a cool, fancy, shiny, elbarote suit of armor. I bet it was magic, too! And she had a big sword!!
Unlike the others, master did not attack her right away.
“Hello, follow child of MAn,” he called out.
“THe woman looked at him, a sneer taking over her beautiful face. I hope she wasn’t so beautiful that master would fall for her! Haha, not really. Master would never have any girl when he already had me, right?
She spoke ina an elegant, noble-sounding voice that aw as a little husky. “Greetings, fated hero. You have done well to make it this far, but I am afraid I can allow you to pasds no further.”
“That is a shame indeed,” myaster said, his eyes roaming over her scantily clad, armored, curvy body. “I had hoped, the two of us sharing a common race, that we could settle this like civilied people.”
The women stood, drawing her huge sword. “I[m afraid not, hero. You will meet your doom here. I cannot allow you to attack my liege.”
As the two of them started sword fighting, master also asked her questions.
“Why are you so loyal to this wicked sorceress, ruler of monsters? Have your loyalties swung so far that you would attack kingdoms of your won kind?”
The woman sneered. “My kind? Ha! I shared scarcely anything with the people of the human kingdoms. They would subjugate the other racds of the world to fit their own ends, and call it civilizqtaion. It is th e demon queen that brings true freedom and equality.”
[Oh god it hurts]
“Equality in death, perhaps,” master parried. Literally, too! He literally paried, is what I’m saying. Hhaha.
The women grunted as she thrust her sword at him. GHe dodgedasideat the last second and her sword became stuck in the wall. Then he waved his hand over her and some kind of SPIRIT^ energy flowers out of him.
Suddenly, the woman stood up again, bu with the fire gone from her eyes. She stood upright, robotically, and intoned “how may i serve you, master?” ina monotone.
Wow! How did master do that? Was he just so handsome and charming that she changed her mind?
Master motioned to both me and the lady. “Woman, where is the Orb of AIR@”
It is held by the last and greatest of the generals, the great fairy Laenia” the woman said blankly.
“You two, mindless women, follow me,” he sid. We both followed him as he went up the steep stone staircase to the next floor. Hooray, I had gained a new friend! ...I just hoped she wouldn’t be a rival for master’s affections!
I'm not sure if you never read back your old chapters, if you're acting innocent or confused to try and elicit sympathy, if this is a cry for help or attention, or if something else is going on, but the general response I've seen from readers is them being disturbed by what's going on in the story, how the MC is being treated, and how things have shifted from comedy into horror.
You have MC who has been lobotomized and brainwashed, killing human boy Lys and being replaced with cat girl Lys. Lys has literally been sold as a s*x slave, allowed to drink questionable drugged magic milk that she really shouldn't have been and lead to the creation of Leche, and she is constantly abused by the "hero", verbally, emotionally, and physically, and Lys doesn't register this as a bad thing and even is upset when the "hero" stops paying attention to her. Just a few chapters ago the "hero" literally said he doesn't want Lys to go back to earth with him since Lys wouldn't be as useful to her since cat girl Lys can be sold as a s*x slave and the "hero" likes looking at her and controlling her. Just this chapter you have the "hero" enslaving and brainwashing another woman, and Lys thinks this is a good thing, just hoping she won't be a rival for the "hero's" "affections".
Lys and the "hero's" interactions and relationship aren't healthy or funny-it's an extremely disturbing abusive relationship with Lys effectively being severely mentally handicapped at this point and brainwashed to be emotionally dependent on the "hero" no matter how abusive, manipulative, or cruel he is. And the "hero" isn't one- he's just a cruel, manipulative, abusive sociopath. All of this abuse and cruelty from the "hero" has been portrayed as either a good thing, a neutral thing, or not a big deal and not something worth worrying about
As for the editor-several chapters back she mentioned in an editor's comment she was done editing because she was too disturbed by the story's "content" and had to stop and work on her own mental health. As for you-if you actually think the obscene abuse the "hero" has been subjecting Lys to for the entire story or their "relationship" is fine, cute, funny, or healthy-I sincerely suggest you do some soul searching and questioning about yourself, your morals, and your priorities. In an earlier chapter the editor mentioned something about you having been in a bad relationship before, so maybe you should get some help and a therapist to help sort things out for yourself. I truly hope you're able to sort things out for yourself and stay out of abusive relationships
That's a lot of comment
maybe the author is autistic, that could also be it.
Hey, I just wanted to clarify that the "author" as portrayed in the author notes and the choices in the isekai story is a character, and not one you're meant to think is in the right. I think that becomes clearer over time in things I haven't yet posted, but I'm sorry that I've alarmed and disturbed people. This whole thing was meant to be a commentary on aspects of the isekai genre that I thought were f*cked up, but heightened to the point that they were obviously objectionable, but I guess I failed in getting that across. (The editor is also a character, and meant to be the more sympathetic voice of reason). There's also some puzzle solving/ARG elements that I don't think anyone has picked up on yet, which if solved give some more context/backstory to the overall meta-narrative
@ChibiWitch Taking you at your word that this is supposed to be a satire and the Poe's Law thing-it seemed to be a sincerely f*cked up story with no pushback from Lys or anyone else. I've had the misfortune of reading (and then dropping) a fair number of stories that have characters like Alto and Lys, portrayed similar to how they are here, but they are entirely straightforward and unironic-the abuse is portrayed as "romantic", brainwashing is perfectly fine as long as MC is the one doing it to other people, slavery is common and either a "who cares" or even a positive thing or a "mercy" from the MC since they aren't killing the people they enslave, frequent, blatant, and unapologetic hypocrisy for the MC doing things that are horrible and people in story make excuses for them or they are aimed at "acceptable targets" while the MC gets all "righteously furious" when their enemies do the exact same thing, etc.
On a different note-even if this story is satire, the abuse and insanity are just unpleasant to read or think about, so if it's an unlabeled satire (or even if it is labeled as satire) then you'll get people like those several chapters back that just drop it out of disgust before the boot gets dropped and something like Lys snaps and rips Alto in half because of all his abuse
@ChibiWitch okay that makes sense, i have seen some stories like that(redo of healer).
personally i thought it was a mentally disabled person just writing what came to mind and a friend editing for them.
i thought that because my sister is disabled and if she ever wrote something it would probably be like this. well she would add in nick jonus (i think thats how you spell it?) and have a lot of "forest gump" and "the room" references, and "charlie the unicorn" .