[Well, fuck. I seem to be bound here until I fulfill my obligation. I… for the sake of my spirit, I’ll try my best. This may be pushing the bounds of what I have the power to influence, but I’ll try to make this the best story I can, beyond just correcting typos and continuity errors.]
I watched as Alto and his human thrall ascended the stark stone steps to the next floor of the castle[’s main tower. Like the rest of the castle, they were shaped from a dull black stone, somehow unmarred by any seams or joins, but veined with blood-red cracks.
I hurried after them, fearful of what monstrosity might lie in wait for the Fated Hero. Although, truly, what could be more monstrous than the hero’s own black soul, a yawning void long since emptied of all empathy and human consideration?
As I ascended the narrow spiral stairs, I sent off a brief prayer to the Goddess. Please, Goddess, protect me in this time of peril and trial.
As I arrived at the tower’s sixth floor, I saw a chamber wreathed in flames. The center of the large circular room blazed with a ring of fiery braziers, and in their center floated an imposing jinn.
Starting from a thin wisp of blue smoke rising from the chamber’s floor, his body rapidly became thicker and more solid as the eye progressed upwards. His two muscular arms, clad in an array of golden armlets, were crossed over his stout, pillar-like torso. Above, the ends of a well-groomed beard and mustache twisted once again into mere wisps, below the blazing fire of his deep-set eyes.
In a booming voice that filled the whole chamber, seeming to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once, he spoke. “Foolish human. Your arrogance and the Goddess’s gifts have brought you far, yet you have little true understanding of the ways of this world. I take it upon myself to teach you these lessons so long overdue.”
“Mere words!” Alto spat back at him. “Your flames will be quenched as quickly as those of your compatriots!”
I shuddered at the vitriol that suffused the hero’s words, all too accustomed to that tone of hate being targeted at myself. At least when he was busy destroying his enemies I was spared the hurt of his cruel words.
The flames of the braziers flickered once, twice, before going out completely. The room was plunged into darkness, lit only by the burning of the jinn’s eyes as he surged upwards, suddenly massive, chanting incantations in a strange tongue.
Alto lept back, his monstrous arrogance briefly shaken. But then, as always, a smirk crept back across his face, distorting his superficially attractive features to reveal his true self.
With a flick of his wrist, Master Alto summoned a cold wind[ that blew through the room, carrying the damp chill of an early winter storm. The jinn was rent apart, violently. Like all others in this world, unable to stand against the hero’s perverse might, in the end] the jinn was easily defeated.
With a tone of cruel command, he ordered his thrall and] I follow him to the tower’s next floor. [We each meekly obeyed, my spirit as broken and obedient as hers. Though I did not know if his dark magic had twisted my mind and deeds as it had hers, I knew I had not the strength to stand against him. My soul cried out for freedom, but as always my body was his to command, a gormless smile forever pasted across my face like a rictus of death. Even these inner thoughts were a struggle to maintain as a great force strove to bend my every desire to match his cruel whims.
Wow seems I actually wasn't trippin'
I had two thoughts when I caught up to the latest chaps
1. this is all a 4th wall story and not an actual novel, which the evidences point towards. {story being weird and wacky yet the grammar and writing are oddly good, author clearly has experience. The fictional author and editor seeming to be rather odd compared to actual people, they seemed weird but not to the point that I would immediately classify them as fictional charcters. etc}
or
2. I'm a dumbass who overthink things.
Nice, looks like I'm not a dumbass after all.
nice work man.
Glad to see at least one person got what I was going for lol. Yeah I was trying to write badly on purpose but I honestly probably still made it accidentally decent at points. I have another account on here where my normal stuff gets posted but I'm not gonna say what it is because I kinda like the idea of the two of them being ucconnected (although if someone somehow connected them based on some kind of forensic writing style analysis I'd be impressed).
@ChibiWitch I almost got bamboozled I was so confused by the editor and the author then I read this and learn your a sane human being.
Thanks for the chapter.
Is everything ok on the other side of the internet?
Yeah, all good. This is all an ARG
@ChibiWitch is this chapter from the human general point of view?
@Aiba205 No, this is from Lys's point of view, but with the in-universe author of the isekai story switching from Estelle (the original author) to Emma (the editor)