Blue Core was never meant to be this long. My original idea for it was something like one hundred thousand words, maybe one-fifty. Clearly that didn’t happen.
Looking back on it, mostly I see all the things I did wrong. There were too many moving parts, too many incidental characters and actions that demanded their own plot threads, and a weird mishmash of different styles of things. Some dungeon stuff, some action stuff, some kingdom-building stuff, and it would have benefitted from more focus.
I still stand by my decision to make the Companion thing based on sex, because it actually matters and the usual cost to those thing is pain, which doesn’t. However, I can tell you that writing good explicit scenes is a serious chore. Writing terrible ones is easy, but bringing them up to my standards was hard.
Still and all, it turned out fairly well. Blue Core is not my first finished story but it’s certainly my first finished story of such a length. Over seven hundred thousand words is a bit of a doorstopper.
I want to thank my Patrons and readers, who were the ones who made Blue Core as successful as it was. There were a number of suggestions and notions suggested by readers of various sorts that I ended up incorporating and I thought made the story better. Taelah is actually one such an inclusion – the patrons wanted a perspective from the nameless alchemist from Anton’s Village, and the rest is history.
While Blue Core is done, I am certainly not finished writing. I won’t be returning to the universe of Blue Core anytime soon, but it may not be never. Hopefully you will give Paranoid Mage a try, and if that’s not to your liking, you’ll keep an eye out for whatever comes after that.
Thank you,
InadvisablyCompelled
The last Thanks For The Chapter of Blue Core.
Thanks For The Story!
It's nice to read a Story with a ending.
I'm always sad to see a story end, but the melancholy of it ending is nothing compared to the joy of the journey and I must say, the journey with this one has been exquisite. Thank you for taking me and many other's on this journey, the writing and quality has overall been incredible.
I feel the exact same
Feels weird having an ending. That never happens with web novels.
I'll check out your other story.
I have very much loved this story. For all of the flaws you mentioned here, there was just so much to enjoy here. The depth of the main characters, the fact that you never over did the number of Companions, the way that Blue always remained just a bit absent-minded and unaware of just how much his random thoughts could affect the world around him...
I do somewhat wish we had seen him choose the perk to have a physical avatar, but the choice to have him always remain as this intangible, mysterious entity really gave a wonderful flavor to the story and helped keep it consistent.
Thank you, so much, for all of the time and effort you have put in! I look forward to seeing how much you have grown as I devour your new novel, Paranoid Mage, one Friday chapter at a time! (It's awesome so far!)
The ending made me cry. I think it was a combination of how engaging the story was versus the realization that it's over now. The feeling of eternal existence Blue has being contrasted by the realization that everyone else, except for those few with immortality, dies was too impactful. :( It was a great story. I really enjoyed how despite how op blue is, his companions and friends all played important roles, accomplishing things even he couldn't. The story flowed really well. The relationships made sense. The end made me cry though. Because it ended. It was a rush of emotion. Because it was a great story.
Some dungeon stuff, some action stuff, some kingdom-building stuff, and it would have benefitted from more focus.
Counterpoint: Single-minded focus on even one of those aspects would make the novel stale, especially a 700k word one. I've read plenty that have done so, a slice of life leaning too much into drama making you wonder when it gets to the life part, the opposite where it's to peaceful and you're itching for even the slightest bump, a story about an op protagonist just constantly climbing a power curve and a villain that's always stronger. There is so many ways this story could go wrong but didn't. It's a testament to how much permanence this story has in the genre and writing as a whole.
I still stand by my decision to make the Companion thing based on sex, because it actually matters and the usual cost to those things is pain, which doesn’t. However, I can tell you that writing good explicit scenes is a serious chore. Writing terrible ones is easy but bringing them up to my standards was hard.
I felt like the explicit scenes were good 'checkpoints'. They usually happened a turning point in the story. Rather than being forced by audience demand or a superficial character relationship. Totally agree on bad ones being easy with 'aghnn' and 'mmmms' with no description.
Truly one of the greatest stories I’ve read in recent memory. The length was not at all a problem. I’d say the branches of story that you think had little relevance were entirely beneficial. Even the smallest ones made the world feel real. My absolutely favorite part of the book was that it ended. So many authors cannot seem to figure out how to end the book they are writing. Also, it really feels like you had a strong outline for the story from start to finish before you even wrote the first chapter in its entirety with how well the plot threads linked together.
Although I'm sad to see it end I am also compelled to say this:
I have read many stories and very few are seen to completion anymore. Either the author stops or loses their spark and so I lose interest. I have read this story in its entirety and now I feel that it is time to give you a well deserved review. Thank you and well done.
Don't know what to say, loved this world and his characters. I loved the necessity of the s*x and the meaning behind. The explicit scenes where not needed even if, not gonna lie , that was what I was searching for when I stumbled upon this title
Your work will forever be a little part of me. Love to you a May the potato be at your side
PS : Please build a (faint) continuity between your worlds, it's not that hard and can be greatly meaningful (at least for me ! )