
Blue Core was never meant to be this long. My original idea for it was something like one hundred thousand words, maybe one-fifty. Clearly that didn’t happen.
Looking back on it, mostly I see all the things I did wrong. There were too many moving parts, too many incidental characters and actions that demanded their own plot threads, and a weird mishmash of different styles of things. Some dungeon stuff, some action stuff, some kingdom-building stuff, and it would have benefitted from more focus.
I still stand by my decision to make the Companion thing based on sex, because it actually matters and the usual cost to those thing is pain, which doesn’t. However, I can tell you that writing good explicit scenes is a serious chore. Writing terrible ones is easy, but bringing them up to my standards was hard.
Still and all, it turned out fairly well. Blue Core is not my first finished story but it’s certainly my first finished story of such a length. Over seven hundred thousand words is a bit of a doorstopper.
I want to thank my Patrons and readers, who were the ones who made Blue Core as successful as it was. There were a number of suggestions and notions suggested by readers of various sorts that I ended up incorporating and I thought made the story better. Taelah is actually one such an inclusion – the patrons wanted a perspective from the nameless alchemist from Anton’s Village, and the rest is history.
While Blue Core is done, I am certainly not finished writing. I won’t be returning to the universe of Blue Core anytime soon, but it may not be never. Hopefully you will give Paranoid Mage a try, and if that’s not to your liking, you’ll keep an eye out for whatever comes after that.
Thank you,
InadvisablyCompelled
The last Thanks For The Chapter of Blue Core.
Thanks For The Story!
It's nice to read a Story with a ending.
I'm always sad to see a story end, but the melancholy of it ending is nothing compared to the joy of the journey and I must say, the journey with this one has been exquisite. Thank you for taking me and many other's on this journey, the writing and quality has overall been incredible.
I feel the exact same
Feels weird having an ending. That never happens with web novels.
I'll check out your other story.
I have very much loved this story. For all of the flaws you mentioned here, there was just so much to enjoy here. The depth of the main characters, the fact that you never over did the number of Companions, the way that Blue always remained just a bit absent-minded and unaware of just how much his random thoughts could affect the world around him...
I do somewhat wish we had seen him choose the perk to have a physical avatar, but the choice to have him always remain as this intangible, mysterious entity really gave a wonderful flavor to the story and helped keep it consistent.
Thank you, so much, for all of the time and effort you have put in! I look forward to seeing how much you have grown as I devour your new novel, Paranoid Mage, one Friday chapter at a time! (It's awesome so far!)
Some dungeon stuff, some action stuff, some kingdom-building stuff, and it would have benefitted from more focus.
Counterpoint: Single-minded focus on even one of those aspects would make the novel stale, especially a 700k word one. I've read plenty that have done so, a slice of life leaning too much into drama making you wonder when it gets to the life part, the opposite where it's to peaceful and you're itching for even the slightest bump, a story about an op protagonist just constantly climbing a power curve and a villain that's always stronger. There is so many ways this story could go wrong but didn't. It's a testament to how much permanence this story has in the genre and writing as a whole.
I still stand by my decision to make the Companion thing based on sex, because it actually matters and the usual cost to those things is pain, which doesn’t. However, I can tell you that writing good explicit scenes is a serious chore. Writing terrible ones is easy but bringing them up to my standards was hard.
I felt like the explicit scenes were good 'checkpoints'. They usually happened a turning point in the story. Rather than being forced by audience demand or a superficial character relationship. Totally agree on bad ones being easy with 'aghnn' and 'mmmms' with no description.
The ending made me cry. I think it was a combination of how engaging the story was versus the realization that it's over now. The feeling of eternal existence Blue has being contrasted by the realization that everyone else, except for those few with immortality, dies was too impactful. :( It was a great story. I really enjoyed how despite how op blue is, his companions and friends all played important roles, accomplishing things even he couldn't. The story flowed really well. The relationships made sense. The end made me cry though. Because it ended. It was a rush of emotion. Because it was a great story.
Don't know what to say, loved this world and his characters. I loved the necessity of the s*x and the meaning behind. The explicit scenes where not needed even if, not gonna lie
, that was what I was searching for when I stumbled upon this title
Your work will forever be a little part of me. Love to you a May the potato be at your side
PS : Please build a (faint) continuity between your worlds, it's not that hard and can be greatly meaningful (at least for me !
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Well today is both a good and bad day. The last of one of my long time favorites, yet that extremely rare opportunity to actually place a story on my completed list. So many die before this point. Sad but awesome!

I'll check out your next offering and we'll see if I hang around for another ride.
I have loved this series, and I am very glad I originally found it on RoyalRoad. I have purchased the first two books of this story on Amazon, and look forward to book three when it's ready.
It's definitely a story I have read again and again.
I am so glad that at the end we have had a chapter for each one of Blue's companions (and a bit of detail on how the kids turned out). It's good that everyone lived happily ever after.
With that being said, you may someday decide to take a page out of what some other authors have done in the past. Write a new story and towards the end put in something that ties it in with what you have written in other stories.
For example, Vihyungrang on RoyalRoad:
https://www.royalroad.com/profile/6277/fictions
The first story was Lament of the Fallen, then The New Journey of an old soul. Later on, Song of the Void had a bit towards the end where a character from Lament met someone in Song of the Void, and they were going to try to meet someone in New Journey.
Each of the stories are independent, and can be read without having read the other stories. Yet they become part of a shared universe, which is pretty special.
Andur's stories on Royal Road are the same way, but a bit different. His main characters reincarnate into different times and places. They have no memory of what came before, but they retain their personalities, flaws and all.
https://www.royalroad.com/profile/3091/fictions
"Beyond" and "Coeus" are two of my favorites from this set, although his book order is a bit wonky because of the timeline issues. Anyone interested can refer to the author's notes and the commentary that goes with it here:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/3754/andurs-oneshot-collection/chapter/436128/a-timeline
In any event, even if this is it for Blue and his companions, thanks for writing a wonderful story. It's definitely one of the best dungeon stories I've read yet.