
Later, Elmistrae pulled back, wiping her lips with the back of her hand.
Rin, lightheaded and slightly dazed, just blinked at her.
"Did it work?" she rasped, her voice barely a whisper.
Elmistrae studied her intently for a moment.
"Functionally, yes," she finally admitted. "But you…" a flicker of surprise crossed her features, "by all accounts, you should be unconscious right now."
Rin shook her head, the movement slow and deliberate.
"No... I'm okay." It wasn't entirely true. Her body felt slightly hollowed out, a lightness bordering on disorientation.
But, she was nowhere near being unconscious.
Elmistrae's gaze narrowed.
"There's something... different about you, human. Something odd. I can't quite place it, but specifically, your tolerance for Essence transfer is... unusual. I would write it off as just you having a strange resilience that others don't, but this fact coupled with your passive ability and, well... Something is off."
Rin managed a weak smile.
"Maybe that's why I passively give it off in the first place. I can resist exchanges well."
"I hardly believe the Divine brought you to this world purposefully to please succubi like me," she cackled. But, then, Elmistrae nodded slowly, her earlier flirtatious demeanor replaced by a thoughtful expression. "Perhaps." A predatory glint returned to her eyes. "Regardless, the experiment has proven successful. Rin, I have a very important question to ask."
"Go ahead."
"Will you continue helping me like this?" Rin's brows shot up. "Though this was not enough for long-term sustenance, it was more than enough to keep me running for a few days. Plus, you are from Libera, are you not?"
"I am."
"Then, what do you say? It's not like it would be hard to find one another."
Rin took a deep breath, forcing herself to appear more in control than she felt.
"Yes," she bargained, "but only if there's something in it for me too."
"By all means, what do you need?"
"I'll get back to you on that. But, the gist of it is that I... There's a group of people I'm hunting. You've probably seen their name pop up once or twice on the news, the Scorned. I figure a couple as wealthy as you and Harlan must have some connections..."
"I would agree with that."
"So, what do you think? I, uh, help 'feed' you every now and then, and you help me out when I need information."
A slow smile spread across the succubus's face.
"An intriguing proposition," she purred. "Very well. I agree."
They shook hands on it.
"The rest of this expedition is pointless, wouldn't you agree? Come, let's head back to the others."
Rin couldn't help but agree.
As Elmistrae stood, offering her a hand, Rin couldn't help but wonder what she'd gotten herself into.
But one thing was certain, she'd gained an ally.
And, given the caliber of her enemies, Rin needed as many of those as she could get.
---
Together, they walked back towards the ruined structure, the weight of their newfound connection hanging heavy in the air.
As they approached, they saw the others gathered near a cluster of cages.
Inside, Mr. Harlan and his men sat slumped, their faces etched with disbelief and a dawning sense of fear.
Cara, arms crossed, stood beside them.
"What happened?" Rin asked, her voice a touch hoarse.
Cara's gaze flickered between Rin and Elmistrae, a flicker of understanding passing between them.
"Mr. Harlan's little expedition, launched under false pretenses, got people killed," she explained grimly. "We'll be pressing charges against him as soon as we head back into town. And... You."
Her eyes moved to the woman standing near Rin.
It was clear she wasn't too happy about her involvement in all this.
Rin glanced at Elmistrae, expecting to see anger flare in the succubus's eyes.
Instead, Elmistrae met her gaze with an emotion Rin couldn't quite decipher. It wasn't sadness, nor was it defiance. It was a chilling indifference.
"Meh, he deserves it," Elmistrae finally spoke, her voice devoid of warmth. "Harlan is an actual murderer after all."
Rin blinked.
"What?"
"Oh, he killed quite a large number of people," she gestured vaguely towards the cages. "Those who shared my company before. He'd bring them to me and kill them afterward."
"What!? Why?"
"Because he could not handle the idea that I might leave him."
"And you just let that happen?" Cara asked. "You're not helping your case."
"What else could I do?" Elmistrae asked. "As much as I found his actions distasteful, without him, I literally would just die, right?"
Rin stared at Elmistrae, a horrifying truth settling in her stomach.
"This is why I was so insistent upon us undertaking this project. I was sick of it. I couldn't merely stop him because I needed the help, but now," Elmistrae continued, her gaze locking with Rin's, "I have found a different solution. A more… agreeable one."
Cara looked back and forth between them, eventually settling for a glare at Rin.
Rin mouthed, "I'll explain later."
"We've… worked something out," Elmistrae said, turning to address the wider group. "There's no further need for this expedition. You're all free to return home. And, you know," she nodded toward Cara, "you'll have a very hard time getting Harlan behind bars without help."
Cara raised a brow.
"What exactly can you do to help with that?"
"We can discuss that back in Libera. We'll work something out, surely."
At that moment, Harlan crawled forward.
"E-Elmistrae, m-my lady, what are you doing?" He looked up at her with disbelief in his pupils. "Surely, you won't-"
"Save your breath," Elmistrae told him. "I've hated you for quite a long time, Mr. Harlan. Why wouldn't I do this?"
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The morning sun cast long shadows across the ruined structure. A sense of frenetic activity filled the air.
The others were busy packing their belongings, the expedition abruptly cut short by the revelation of Mr. Harlan's true motives and Elmistrae's surprising solution.
Rin lingered near the edge of the camp, her gaze lingering on Elmistrae.
The woman was now openly sitting amongst them, not caring about the looks and glares sent her way.
She seemed… different. There was a newfound calmness in her eyes, a weight lifted from her shoulders.
Taking a deep breath, Rin sought out Dylan.
He stood by a lone tree, sharpening daggers.
"Hey," Rin greeted, her voice hesitant.
He looked up. The boy was clearly surprised to see her.
"Morning... Everything packed?" He asked, a little awkwardly.
"Almost," she replied, stepping closer. "Listen, about last night…"
Dylan's smile softened.
"Don't worry, I won't pry. You certainly don't owe me explanations."
Rin shook her head.
"It's not that. Actually, I…" she hesitated, unsure how to phrase her question. "What did you think about what Elmistrae said? I mean, given that... You know..."
Dylan paused, his gaze flickering to Elmistrae for a fleeting moment.
Then, he met Rin's eyes, his expression turning serious.
"Honestly? I related to it." He sighed, lowering his daggers.
"Really?"
"Being an incubus isn't a very pleasant experience a lot of the time. I've done things…" He sighed. "Things I'm not proud of, all to survive. If she's found a way to regulate herself through you, then… good for her." He shrugged, a hint of wistfulness in his voice.
"Maybe," Rin ventured cautiously, "maybe, uh... You-"
The words almost escaped her lips before she could stop them, but Dylan cut her off.
Dylan chuckled, a dry humorless sound.
"Don't worry about me, sweetheart. Even if it would work, I'm not interested in making you sleep with a sex you're not attracted to."
Rin's eyes widened.
"I mean, it's fairly easy to tell what team you play for," Dylan said with a smirk. "You wear your emotions on your sleeve. Anyway, don't worry about me. I'm doing just fine."
His words held a gentleness that surprised her.
"I-I see," she whispered, feeling a warmth bloom in her chest at the boy's kindness that had little to do with the rising sun.
"Thank you for the offer, Rin," he countered. "We should work together sometime."
"Yeah," Rin smiled. "I'd like that."
He winked, then turned back to his daggers, a thoughtful expression etched on his face.
Rin lingered for a moment longer, the weight of his words settling in.
After speaking with Dylan, Rin wandered through the camp, the weight of his words and the whirlwind of the previous night settling in.
She caught Alea's eye. The once arrogant classmate now held a different glint in her gaze, a spark of newfound knowledge or perhaps even ambition.
Maria and Cara worked diligently, packing supplies with a renewed sense of purpose. The rest of Rin's classmates helped with that.
Rin glanced down at her own hands, the lingering warmth from Elmistrae's touch a stark reminder of the extraordinary events that had transpired.
In the midst of it all, a single question echoed in the quiet corners of her mind:
Who, or what, was Rin truly?
The answer remained shrouded in mystery, but she hoped she'd get it one day.
To be clear about why this bothers me so much
Rin being any kind of special chosen one feels extremely antithetical to her character thus far. She's a nobody, a normal woman who has to deal with some pretty sh*t circumstances growing up. She picked up martial arts because she was too poor to buy a weapon for crying out loud. Everything unique about her is something that she's worked very hard to earn; including her relationship with Xhez and the flame fist spell she found. Hard work, empathy, and being hot; plus some luck in finding the plot and not giving up against dire odds.
Suddenly dumping a "actually Rin's a super duper unique essence manipulator" plotline just undercuts the narrative that has grown over the last 200 (nearing 300!!!) chapters. Will she be able to shoot lasers out of her eyes and fly when she uncovers what she is? Ugh. Probably not, but whatever abilities she gains from this biological superiority plotline will be unearned. Might as well just give her an isekai cheat ability at that point.
It feels more like something that's been planned for a very long time to me.
Rin's mother being sick was something that was shown in the very first chapter, and even at that time, it seemed like it had a mysterious, unknown cause. And with how almost no one can see essence, it is understandable why people weren't able to figure out what was going on with their family.
Rin's *family* has this feature though - and her brother is still one of her biggest enemies we know of in the Scorned, so even if it ends up being an "Isekai cheat ability" it's one that her enemy has as well. To be honest, it seems like it's only helpful for Rin because of her willingness to help other species off people.
And if your problem is that she has an 'unearned biological superiority' well, being hot is that too? Without that, she'd have been unable to pay for tuition in the first place, so it seems like that genetic advantage has been more helpful so far.
There's a difference between having something be planned for a long time and having something be thematically consistent, or well-foreshadowed, or good. The fact that the author has wanted to do this from the beginning doesn't counter any of my arguments. Still unearned, still antithetical to Rin's character, still an unpleasant left-turn out of nowhere.
That mysterious disease was mentioned from the beginning, yes, but it wasn't an active overhanging threat or even really a goal for Rin. That plotline hasn't moved an inch in, again, 300 flipping chapters. Because it's had no movement, I genuinely had relegated it to be yet another thing that's unfortunate about Rin's background - a mother ailing from, like, a genetic heart condition or something. The disease could have been literally anything with how it's written and if it was meant to be supernatural or even plot relevant then it's really poorly foreshadowed.
And come on. There's tons of other hot people in this story - it's far from an innate special advantage over the people around her. Rin's not a Chosen One for being hot. That's dumb. And if it turns out her family disease makes her hotter, has been giving her a supernatural charisma, that's just deeply frustrating writing to me. Again, it undercuts Rin's accomplishments and takes credit away from her practiced confidence and sexuality to give to something outside her control.
@Modality I recently started reading the series and judging by the comments there were people making guesses about Rin being a half-succubus even in the earlier chapters. It's been constantly pointed out in the narrative that her golden eyes are unique and that she's never met anyone else with the same colouration outside of her family.
Additionally, she's had a bit of protagonist aura where people feel drawn to her and want to help her, frequently essence users. This weird trait of hers helps us to view that with a new perspective. I like that she has a downtrodden background too, it is an interesting part of her character and I think there might be some sort of intersection between why she is so popular as a prostitute and her innate ability.
Its about time Rin got strong. It was tirenig to read about protagonist who was getting her butt kicked for most of the series. I dont want to see her become Cpt Marvel like, but seeing her grow to Maria's level would be cool. So as long as Rin dosnt become futa, i'll read on.
@Modality
I don't see how Rin's constitution specifically downplayed her hard work. It's not it's her special blood that pushed her to want something better for herself and dare to become an adventurer. She did start from the bottom when she arrived and we are told and shown more than once that she ended up being one of the best students now because she is one of the hardest-working. She was basically forced by circumstances to become Maria's favorite student since she couldn't afford a weapon but she stuck to it even after she could. Spirit Flame is literally a gift from a side quest but she still trained so that it wouldn't be a clutch. You could even say she's lucky to have grown up in a place without bias which is why she befriended Xhez when she ran into her. There are plenty of things that Rin has "earned" and others that she was "lucky to have" and the latter hasn't taken away from the former so far. Her not being normal, especially with how subtle the effects are, in no way sounds like the major reason she got where she is.
As for the disease not being relevant and or foreshadowed, it sounds pretty relevant that Lyn (Rin's mom) was said to have seen healers everywhere and no one could help her or even tell her what was wrong with her. And we're occasionally told that Lyn's not being so well so it's not like it was a forgotten plot point.
Sure, we now know that there's more to Rin's looks than just being really lucky at the genetic lottery, but it doesn't seem like such a relevant advantage that we should change our perspective of her. Her choices and accomplishments are still very much her own.