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Hello there, this is Noel Elitia.
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I would like to thank all of you, since the number of words in this novel has approximately reached 4lakh 50k words and we are soon heading to completing the 6th volume.
I have been releasing a chapter every two days, but now the story has caught up to the point where i am still writing.
So from now onward I will be focused on consistently releasing one chapter per week and hope to continue to do so.
Most probably every Thursday.
But before we move on to the next arc, I personally wanted to know what you think of the current story. So, without wasting your time any further, I would be highly obliged if you can answer the few questions below:
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Q1) Do you think the plot of the story has cooled down or has become less fun for you at the current point? Or, you can either tell me how enjoyable it is, otherwise.
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Q2) Do you think you can point out some places in my story where I could further improve in my writing. Or, tell me of any aspect or phase in the story which made you unable to understand the story line.
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Q3) Any suggestions for the characters, or anything about that character which you want to let them know.
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Q4) Was Regis able to come out as a character, with whom you could associate our FMC, and can happily enjoy her company throughout the novel?
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Q5) Do you think that I over-exaggerate my writing with characters, and is obsessed with their development throughout the novel. Does, the story line becomes less enjoyable for you when I introduce side characters like ⸺ Edith, Lia, Will.
Or, try to showcase their own personal stories in between the main story line like ⸺ Edith's and Lia's childhood stories, or Regis and Will training.
Do you find these parts of story enjoyable or do they not stick with you.
Or, would you like to say otherwise, 'its exactly what makes this novel fun.' Hoping you actually say that so….
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Well, that's it for today. Hope to see you in the next arc pretty soon. Which would introduce two new characters whom I like to call them 'The Best Duo in the World.' You will know pretty soon why, when I will done with this arc. Alicia will be back on her journey and also the main screen time now transferred to her.
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Hi,
Thanks for the story so far :)
To answer some of your above questions:
My favorite arc was her living with mom and dad and meeting her sister.
I feel like the story cooled off once Alicia left the labyrinth.
Up to that point she was getting smarter and stronger, as she faced more and more enemies, but once she left the labyrinth she seems kind of stupid and forgets a lot of things and powers.
thanks for your feedback, i will surely try to improve on those parts and hopefully the new arcs will fix all issues
Q1) Do you think the plot of the story has cooled down or has become less fun for you at the current point? Or, you can either tell me how enjoyable it is, otherwise.
Not really, I like it the way it is, maybe tell us about the other reincarnators, It's been a while since we have heard of them.
Q2) Do you think you can point out some places in my story where I could further improve in my writing. Or, tell me of any aspect or phase in the story which made you unable to understand the story line.
Well some more world building I am huge fan of these and I miss it in this novel, for the rest is good.
Q3) Any suggestions for the characters, or anything about that character which you want to let them know.
Well I miss our dear goddess I want some POVs from her.
Q4) Was Regis able to come out as a character, with whom you could associate our FMC, and can happily enjoy her company throughout the novel?
Yeah, I like her and its a good addition to the novel and a great adventure companion.
Q5) Do you think that I over-exaggerate my writing with characters, and is obsessed with their development throughout the novel. Does, the story line becomes less enjoyable for you when I introduce side characters like ⸺ Edith, Lia, Will.
Or, try to showcase their own personal stories in between the main story line like ⸺ Edith's and Lia's childhood stories, or Regis and Will training.
Do you find these parts of story enjoyable or do they not stick with you.
Or, would you like to say otherwise, 'its exactly what makes this novel fun.' Hoping you actually say that so...
Well you can always have a bit of both worlds, it is good as it is. But, if you deem necesary to add them don't limit yourself, they dont even have to be a cahppter just some paragraphs at the beggining or at the end of a chapter and it is good to go, novels that go to deep into backstories of several are usually pretty boring.
Thanks for your valuable feedback. i will surely make note of all of them.
But could you explain a bit more abut the world building you were talking about.
bit late but here are my comments
Q1 i think the story has become better after leaving the dungeon as it has become less repetitive it also makes it clearer how much our writting has improved although it is a bit frustrating when she forgets her powers.
Q2 i think there are a number of areas which need improvement but i think the most important area is consistency as frequently i can see tell how most things will go happen simply because it seems like she cant rembour half the things she can do so it just feels like forced weakness, although i think your consitent and have improved with many of social aspects of the story.
Q3 i think the characters are fine the way they are although adding in one two redeeming moments is not enounph to make them a good person this is comment is mostly directed at the older sister but at times with Regis i think "why are they friends when we really see them have fun togther" when the elf family arc concluded i think the characters were fine then and were closer to the balanse that true hero shows a bit bad bit still showing there goodside.
Q4 i think you did pretty well with Regis given your current level of writting. although manging powers seem to be a weakness of yours as does she need to live seperatly as non magic cloths seems to act as a barrior to the problem. (there a few other ones that i cant think of right now)
Q5 love the side characters i think what you have right now in side character management is great as well as the expression of there personalitys i have seen authors get do focused on the side characters thus streatching out the story to much but what you have here is just fine.
sorry for the grammor and spelling as im in a rush to read more
Really, thanks for the feedback.
Happy Reading and have a nice day.
@Noel_Elitia :)