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Hello Everyone,
Thank you for taking the time to read the novel.
I hope you had a good time.
This is a quick note to thank you for taking the time to vote in the poll. It's much appreciated.
I also want to inform you that the first arc has come to an end.
I'll take a break before beginning the next arc.
I'll be working on another story to keep my mind sharp, and I'll be rewriting the chapters of this one as well.
I'm not changing the story; I'm just rewriting it to make it more readable.
Thanks
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curse your cliffhanger. i enjoyed the story a lot.
Oh, I thought you would love the cliff hanger
Loved the story mate👍
Thanks for reading.
the f*cking cliffhangers
I know you love them.
Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to reading more!
Thanks for reading,
hey you author, at least help MC escape.
who knows, maybe he will die, come back as a baby and start all over again.
The end of the first arc felt..... lacking.
The story is intriguing. Good luck to ya
Thanks for reading.
English is not my native language so there may be some writing errors.
I must say that it could have had more development in the first arc, it's like you start a lot of things in the first arc but don't finish anything.
you could have developed more the time he grew up with his mother where she could have tried to do some more naughty things to him, you could also have added a chapter telling what happened to their mother during those two years.
something I didn't like was that even though allen is not innocent he is extremely naive for a grown man, an orphan who grew up alone. his view of the world should be a little tougher, not to mention he should be a lot more active, instead he was basically passive all the time, whether he was still with his mother or later with madame bel, he at least had that having started some plans to get her and her maids over him (like with the aim of fulfilling his wishes or goals) instead he just did what the madam said and nothing more.
Please update
Dropped?you died?