Thanks for giving a shit.
And for coming this far. I know I'm not the best writer in the world so the fact that I have 305 readers (So far) that can tolerate all the small and stupid mistake like the ones I'm always making when I wright, is more than I expected, and the number keeps slowly growing every time I publish a new chapter.
So...
One of my more vocal commenters, Yorda, asked me this in chapter 30. I thought I would share it here.
Yorda
"What inspired you want to write a Police, Detective, Gender Bender, Magical Girl, Guns, Crime, and Pixie story?
It's very interesting because it's different and outside of the normal kind of themes that I read. Police? I barely know what they are! Detectives? =D
Magical girls definitely need some kind of mascot; Tulip was the natural course of action."
My Answer.
Hmmmmmmm. Well, to be honest, Magical Girls as a sub-genre have always fascinated me. Mostly because there is very little middle ground in tone. They're either one extreme, super girly or another extreme, super dark. (The super dark ones happen to be my personal preference.)
Again I haven't ever seen much in the way of middle ground aside from one or two parody mangas.
As far as the crime and guns, it really goes hand in hand with the dark and gritty atmosphere. Also, thanks to my father's influence, I grew up on 1980/90's buddy cop movies. So that definitely plays a factor there.
Also, Keep in mind that this is not my only work.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/55525/we/
Who am I? Where am I? A young handsome man across the room, a young beautiful woman on the other side. I see him but I also see her. Is that me?
A being awakens in a small run down shack by the forest. This being has two bodies, one male one female, split between one single soul. With no memory, or knowledge of the world around it. It must now forge a path to reclaiming its memory.
Please give it a read! Part two of Rise of the Magical Girl Vigilante will likely be coming out sometime after Thanksgiving and before Christmas. So if you really can't get enough of me feel free to give what few chapters I have out a read.
In other news as of 11/16/2019 (Or at least that's when I made this discovery thanks to Yorda pointing it out to me.) Rise of the Magical Girl Vigilante is trending please join me in celebration. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usfiAsWR4qU -Hallelujah Chorus-
"Small and stupid mistakes" You mean like when you *write* instead of when you wright? =P
That being said, I've seen some series with wording / grammar so bad that I didn't even make it past the first chapter, so I'd say this isn't too bad.
Although, admittedly I'm not one to be *that* nitpicky about the actual story. I just go by "If I enjoy it, then it's fine" personally. It's fun enough to read.
And personally, I'm not too much of a fan of the super dark side of magical girl stories... although I'm not a fan of the super cliche other extreme either. This feels like it hits somewhere in the middle. \o/
this is better than my story on Royal Road i know how hard it is to write so i say you've done a good job my slight problem is the low amount of reading but i know how hard it is to write.
Royal Road? What's your story?
@Megel454 its a story that i am having writers block on its called a star is born by elliott white i cant change my display name which is my name IRL
Thanks this was some good sh*t I loved it little pissed about the wish though but at least she now has time to get used to being a girl
We: Synopsis
That sounds really similar to a Chinese Web novel and manga. Of coarse I was disappointed with the direction the story took, but the synopsis and premise is totally something a better writer could make a gold mine with.
After Transformation, Mine and Her Wild Fantasy
When other people experience a body transformation, it is inevitably either male to female or female to male.
Me? I wake up to find myself transformed into two different bodies.
Both a male body and a female body, one conscience operating two bodies, all sorts of embarrassing moments.
Walking together normally makes other people think that I am sweethearts with my other-self, such sadness.
Also, the entire business of a hero rescuing the beautiful maiden, I call Bull.
I get slashed by a sword and my female body gets abducted, and he wants me to thank him?!?! Can it be less of a tragedy?
Your not wrong I started writing it because I got so frustrated with After Transformation. There are some strong similarities especially at the beginning, but I just see it as keeping what worked. Sadly some parts of the beginning of After Transformation are the only things that work, the rest is just cliche after cliche.
So yeah, I thought the premise deserved better so I took a shot at it. It's not done and I'm not sure when I'll get back to it, but feel free to read what's there.
@Megel454 glad to here it. Sad thing was that LN started good, but by the martial Arts tourney and afterwards was terrible. Plus the whole gladly doing evil was just too much.
Soo... any idea as to when we'll get an update? I love this story and am anxiously awaiting more lol
Bhahaha you guys whoever said bad comment on the story so far better stop cuz it's not like you can make better and i know for sure writing story is very hard especially to ppl who not creative enough. It's a good story so far author so just ignore the fly :v
Keep it coming
Binge-read the entire thing, very satisfied through the process :D
Meh your grammar is good and your story has a proper flow. Which is more than I can say for a lit of the stuff I've read...
As for your story? Its interesting and enjoyable even if its a bit cliché at times...