Drako was naturally prideful and ambitious so it went without saying that he was willing to go to many lengths to obtain power, but by the time he had achieved his venomous flame breath, there were much more emotions involved than mere pride.
For one, the Dragons had quickly found out that his hybrid race could not only not fly, but had also failed to obtain their Breath techniques. And as one would expect, he and his children had become a laughing stock that the Dragons would constantly harass.
Resentment grew in his heart uncontrollably and at times he could not sleep because of it. He would sometimes think of the sounds of their rumbling laughter and beating wings and the frustration would cause him to roar out loudly with anger. In such moments, it was impossible to calm back down so he would get up to work on his obsession; his breath technique.
Even when he eventually came up with his venomous flame and gave more than a few Dragons a rude awakening, they would still find the gall to laugh at him because of the still very visible difference in the scale and destruction of his breath technique when compared to theirs.
Those lizards would even say that his smaller fire breath was a sign that he couldn’t even compare to their females, saying that his ‘hybrid race’ was a mistake that had no ‘masculine power’. And although it still infuriated him, the first few times he heard them say that he had been confused by why they would specifically call him weaker than females as if it was something specifically embarrassing.
It was common knowledge that males tended to have slightly bigger muscles and females had slightly better flexibility, but it was also common knowledge that in the presence of Mana, muscles and flexibility meant nothing. Someone in Stage 7 would not be able to best someone in stage 8 because of something as insignificant as those 2 things.
The only time the physical body mattered in a fight was when Anatomy Refinement was involved, or when different species did battle. A fluffy rat and a scaled rhino would never be able to have a fair fight if they had the same exact cultivation level (unless you included bloodlines or laws). But a male scaled rhino and a female scaled rhino both had the same defensive measures, so the fight would come down to who had a better cultivation.
As such, females were not inherently weaker than males. But the way the Dragons spoke you would think it was so. Of course, this was all before their goddess of creation had emerged and silenced all that talk, but still. Why had they ever even spoken like that in the first place?
The first few times he had heard their comments, he would laugh to himself or amongst his friends and call them foolish because of their eccentric ideologies, but when even their females began to ridicule him, telling him to ‘be a man!’ as if he somehow wasn’t one already, he began to suspect that he was missing out on something big and perhaps very humiliating.
He didn’t notice any signs that female Dragons were weaker than male Dragons - even if it was strange that they often had docile or coquettish personalities - but the more they abused his male identity and highlighted his inferiority to their females, the more he began to believe that female Dragons really were somehow weaker, and that it really was an embarrassment that his Fire Breath couldn’t even compare to theirs.
This only grew the more the Dragon race mocked him, so you could imagine how much he wanted to tear off their reverse scales and make them watch as he ate them with relish. But more than that, he wanted to prove them wrong. He wanted to show them that not only was he not inferior, but he was in fact superior to them! He wanted a Breath technique that would make THEIR breath technique look inferior!
So he continued to work hard, even as countless people praised his venomous fire breath and his various children hounded him to teach them.
It was around that time that Raiko came to him for his usual masochistic tendencies, also known as Anatomy Refinement practice. Raiko had heard about the news of his venomous fire breath and had bounded over to him excitedly, asking him for him to shower him in the Breath as if it wasn’t something extremely lethal and was instead just a nourishment.
With how tense and frustrated Drako had been, seeing that goofy face that had unwittingly mocked his power and dignity was enough to make him snap. It ended up in a serious fight that had led to both of them being severely injured.
Of course, with how close they really were it went without saying that they made up at the end and even had a laugh, but the event had still caused his obsession to burn brighter than before. Perhaps too bright.
Because all these events were what finally led to an unprecedented maniacal drive that broke his mind.
A few days after that fight he left his territory without letting anyone know.
In hindsight, it was indeed irresponsible for him to do that, but with how his mental state had been that day it was already fortunate that he did make the decision to find a location where he could not accidentally kill his family or allies. He had left to work on a dangerous idea that he had been priorly hesitating about, something that could potentially end up in a huge magical explosion and the loss of his life if things went wrong.
It was his instincts for self-preservation that had prevented him from enacting it, but that day, all thoughts of hesitation had vanished. The only thing that had been in his mind were visions of a flame that destroyed everything in its path.
He didn’t even know how he reached the clearing he had found and that was how single-minded and insane he had been.
He was so absent minded that if anyone was bold enough, they would have been able to walk right up to him and attack him for free, and he wouldn’t have seen it coming. But they better be either durable or super fast because it was likely that his addled mind would finally sense them and detect them as some kind of training target.
Or perhaps they would have just blown up with him, because the technique he began to employ was called elemental mixing.
As the name suggested, it was the utilisation of 2 or more elements in a single magic act. It was an extremely dangerous practice that required a very high level of proficiency and practice, but how could anyone practise when failure was so dangerous?
The worst case scenario wasn’t even blowing up. There was even the chance of mana deviation that could lead to one mutating into an Abomination, bound to a life of never-ending torment.
There were only a few people who were lucky enough to be born with - or somehow obtain - an mixed elemental ability that was an innate skill, and that meant they didn’t have to go through a process of trial and error, they just gained the ability completely for free.
The difference between an Innate skill and a technique was fairly obvious. An innate skill was a skill that you were born knowing how to use (or in the case that you obtained it from something like an evolution, knowledge was granted by the Eridius System).
On the other hand, a technique was something that you developed by yourself or learnt from someone else. Most techniques took inspiration from already existing innate skills, but on occasion, some people would make their own technique from scratch.
For example, Drako’s venomous fire breath technique was inspired by his [Venom Spray], his [Flame Infused Venom] technique, and the [Fire Breath] technique. Essentially: An innate skill, a technique based on that innate skill, and an unrelated but already-existing low level technique.
With that, he had formed a brand new technique that had astonishing effects.
That was how techniques worked. But this meant that Drako was on his own if he wanted to mix elements.
He had 2 elements, Fire and Wind. When he woke up after fusing with the Supreme Wind Dragon and found out that he didn’t get a mixed element innate skill, it was just 1 more disappointment, not something he had thought about too much about because of the rarity of such a thing in the first place, along with his greater disappointment in more unexpected and pressing matters like his lack of wings.
Of course, since that time the thought of elemental-mixing had naturally crossed his mind a few times, but he had never actually dared to try it because of how risky it had been
But on that debilitated day, he genuinely lost all understanding of the concept known as ‘risk’. Even now he could not fully describe what state he had been in, because first of all his memory of that time wasn’t even linear or complete. It was very, very strange. And second of all, the only thing that had gone through his mind were thoughts of an unmatched Fire Breath and how to achieve it.
The only thing that he did know was that the abnormal mental state had given him an unprecedented level of comprehension.
That, coupled with his own experience and a clawfull of luck, was probably why he was eventually able to grasp success and figure out how to infuse his wind mana into his venomous fire breath technique, creating something that he had called the Inferno Breath. The wind element and fire element had a devastating synergy that made their elemental mixing a terrifying sight to behold.
With his unmatched comprehension in the Fire Laws, he had already known that air was an important component of natural fire, as such, he had already possessed suspicions about what the wind element could do to the fire element if they were used in conjunction, but he still held his doubts because it wasn’t necessarily wind that was important, but instead a certain component that could often be found within it; something the System called Oxygen.
He shouldn’t have possessed the slightest doubt. The explanation by the System had actually ended up making him think that things were more complicated than they were. In reality, the more wind there was, the more oxygen there was. And the more oxygen there was, the more fire there was.
As it turns out, wind had a great amplicative effect on fire, especially when magic is involved.
The Inferno breath was comparable to a True Dragon’s fire breath in scale, and was even more destructive. Furthermore it was a lot quicker. The colour of the flame was a bluish-violet, a rare phenomenon that displayed its enhanced oxygen and temperature, and it was a beautiful sight to behold.
It was this breath that he had been planning to use against the malformed creatures, when he caught sight of the Crystal Dragon and decided to take things a step above…
Yes. There was a step above. Drako wasn’t done. Not at all.
After all, a True Dragon could emulate what he did if they had the same elements as him and the talent to not kill themself in the process, and the result would be more startling than his with their natural Dragon Breath augment. The only thing that would be lacking would be the fiery venom, but in the grand scheme of things that was not something to be too impressed about.
He wanted what he had been seeing in his visions. An almighty destructive flame that could erase Dragons and rearrange landscapes. And so, he continued to practise.
He didn’t know how long he searched for various ways, because like he said his recollection of the entire event was not linear or even complete, but eventually, he found it. The path forward.
It came in the form of an Intent.
In a mental state where pride didn’t exist, he had become absolutely disinterested in the idea of his breath technique being bigger just so that it could be as big as or bigger than Dragon Breath. His desire for size only held on because the bigger the breath, the more enemies it could destroy.
A bigger fire breath was a lot more useful than a smaller one of the same calibre, and that was obvious. But at some point in time, as he continued to manipulate wind and oxygen, an idea began to form in his mind.
What would happen if all the oxygen that went into increasing width and height of the breath, was concentrated into a narrow column that was as fat as his mouth - something like a beam? Wouldn’t the temperature be exponentially more deadly? He could feel it in his bones that it was so. So he tried to do it and he failed.
No matter how he tried to manipulate his mana, nothing would give him the effect of a ‘concentrated beam’. But obviously, that didn’t stop him, so once again time filled with maniacal pursuit began to pass.
Until one day, he obtained a chance epiphany and his mind opened.
The Intent of Compression.
A power that could compress anything and enhance its effects, amongst other things. Understanding of its alien mysteries began to flow into his starved mind like water from the spring of life, along with a distant ‘ding’ sound which he would much later find out was a notification from the system. A congratulations.
From there, he began to slowly implement his newly obtained intent, and finally… finally, he obtained it. The ultimate breath technique.
After using it once, he knew immediately that he had achieved it, especially when his mind began to return to normal and he began to take in the destroyed scenery. The previously healthy plains had completely blackened. Even though it was a scene out of a nightmare, he only felt joy. Joy, an actual emotion.
This joy, along with other emotions like pride, swiftly bloomed within his heart like never before.
‘I… AM DRAKO, GREATER THAN TRUE DRAGONS! I AM… I AM…’ And he tried to think of a word that could describe the sheer level of ascendance and glory that he felt, but nothing in his vocabulary seemed accurate enough. But in that moment, as he looked at all the destruction he had caused, he began to truly, well and truly, think of himself as a being above all lifeforms. And so the word that eventually appeared in his mind was.
‘DIVINE!’
‘...YES! I AM DIVINE!’
‘I AM THE DIVINE DRAGON!’
He felt unprecedented ecstasy, his brain blew up with the feeling of 1000 orgasms ‘compressed’ into 1, and he could no longer contain it within himself, so he tried to roar out loud to let the world know of his elation and triumph, to let the world know that their divine master had been born.
But then he felt a savage pain course through his body.
It was then that he discovered… that he no longer had a face. It had been destroyed in his relentless training and he had been none the wiser.
He was also dying.
In honour of chapter 300
That's a lot of yap! Ahem, in any case... Thank you all for reading this far everyone, it means a lot. I'll be releasing chapters at a faster rate from now on.
Love this chapter, thanks!
Happy chapter 300 your majesty!
Thanks for the 300th!! Chapter.🍪
love the chapter
TFTC
TFTC
I quit this story. Why would you make the world an even playing field then deliberately place all this misogynistic patriarchy nonsense in there.
Your story is too good for you. You have to warp it to try and write it. You clearly need to address your world views before you make a final copy.
You are alienating your female readers on purpose. You cant write a story without making gender a thing that allows the females to be killed and attacked or graped or looked down on for their weakness. When the whole premise of this story is personal power and evolution for all. You did this with Chad leaving behind a slew of dead mothers. Pharoah disregarding all the women in his lands as merely tools. The moon spirit not being able to control her quivering parts and being hyper aware of her (*ahem) because of eridus. Dodo not being able to commit to anyone. The dragons dogging their OWN race to outsiders causing drako to be insecure in his masculinity. For what reason ? If your story is too good for you then dont write but claiming again and again that we're all equals only to pull this bs. Reading about all those graped and dead mothers was sick. Whats wrong with you? I quit your story. You're not good enough to write it.
Lmao, I'm sorry you feel that way, but you're focusing too much on one side of the equation. You've failed to acknowledge that most of the dominators are female.
Gaia (the only god)
Jorma (strongest in her continent)
Gloria (Tied strongest in her continent and smartest being in the world)
Blazing Ant Empress (Tied strongest in her continent and rules one of the greatest races)
Titania (One of the strongest and smartest in her continent and created the greatest civilisation)
etc.
People even accuse me of preferring females because of how many great ones there are compared to males.
But moving on, you've failed to acknowledge (or perhaps remember) that it's not only males that have harems and that females are doing the same thing or similar to what Pharoah and others do. Example, it's been stated that Gloria has 2 Soul Mates. Another example: female blazing ant queens take seed from the male drones and the male drones perish not long afterward. Do you think they're not considered tools?
You've failed to acknowledge that I've stated numerous times that the True Dragon race are the only ones that hold patriarchal values because of their ancient instincts. Remember, they are the only race Eridel did not create. They are the lizards that were last surviving lifeforms from the previous era, and as such, it is only logical that they retain their instincts, which grew into something else when they gained greater intelligence.
On the topic of Luna, that was Eridel testing out the capabilities of an Anomaly. Since they have bodies that are not at all organic, he wanted to test if they could feel arousal. If a portion of sand suddenly became a male humanoid, would you not be curious to know if it could have an erection? After all, something like that is needed if they want to create SoulChildren with their Soulmates.
With what Eridel did, even a male would be forced to feel the same arousal, regardless of will or sexual orientation. It's not moral, but is that ever something that's been prevalent in this book? Evolution and progress is the goal, emotions have little sway towards that end. You already know why if you've been reading.
On the topic of rape, all genders are subject to this possibility if they're weaker. There is little concept of right and wrong at this point in time, so people mostly do what they want. This too has been stated many times. Males rape females, females rape males. Beasts literally kill and eat each other. Monsters kill each other not only for cultivation but also for fun. Only the Enlightened races are better off morally.
Humans are weak and docile (outside of the north continent).
High Humans have Gloria's all-controlling rule which nobody disputes. As you can imagine, her intelligence allowed her to notice the problems in many behaviours that result in a series of bans.
Elves have Titania who has already established law and order because of the memories she inherited from Ciera.
Everything that has happened has been very calculated and very logical.
Chad is a being that goes to very extreme lengths when he becomes enraged. This has been mentioned many times. When he noticed that Honourable Brother was sacrificing lives to create more Phoenixes, his insanity drove him to do the same so that he would not fall behind his greatest enemy. He absolutely did not care about the nearly non-existent right and wrong. Is that not logical?
I already wrote how Drako was laughing at the True Dragons beliefs because of how silly they were, and how he eventually became confused when even the females began mocking him. Most people in that situation would feel the same way. If people kept laughing at you for wearing a red shirt, even if you did not know why, would you not eventually feel self-conscious after tens of years of the same ridicule? Is that not logical?
Pharoah is a victim-become-dominator who became cruel and had no qualms about not restraining himself. Is that hard to believe?
Eridel is an apathetic scientist that was conducting an experiment on a unique lifeform. Is that hard to believe?
Everything has been very logical and absent of bias.
Lastly, I must address something.
You cant write a story without making gender a thing that allows the females to be killed and attacked or graped or looked down on for their weakness.
When have I, the Monarch, ever written that females were specifically weaker than males in this book? Did you skim this very chapter that stated that they were very much equal? Or previous chapters that mentioned the same?
I was happy to see your comments after a long while, after all you are one of the few that mention things going on in the chapter rather than just saying 'TFTC', but this... What a pity. What a disappointment.
Prancer… You made it all the way to chapter 300 right? And that’s your take away from this chapter? First of all the monarch has already addressed all you points but did you forget that drakos big sister is literally one of 2 strongest forces on the continent named after being the strongest the other being a female dragon goddess? I mean genuinely you point our pharoahs thoughts about women but then neglect that fact that not only do other women like liyanda think the same way but that they see both genders as tools to some extent. Are we forgetting how not even that long ago liyanda used a random man she had no carw for as a pawn to make pharoh angry? And how technically liyanda is above pharoh in rank as the first follower of the heavenly sun flame making her the boss? Most of the races have girl bosses and all the good male characters are second fiddle draco and raiko an amazing duo but drako not even the strongest in his race his sister is who he is loyal too. On every single continent females are the strongest presence of high teir power in the north the slime abomination is the whole reason the north continent is full of death with gabriel and seraqiel the twins stars of hope being around the same power and different genders. The only continent that was ruled by a man was the demon continent and we read the chapters where asura fought for that only to learn that fate orginally wanted 9 flame queen to win and rule like come on. And like the monarch said and how the chart frames it the only race that holds the belief of women being lesser (not even true for the most part anymore with gaia being among them) was the fact eridel didn’t make them and their instincts pushed them that way along with the fact that there where more strong males then females since gaia and the destruction dragons got removed from the rest. In conclusion please dont drop the story over a point that doesn’t even qualify as making sense💯.
Low IQ take. Don't read the book if you can only see one gender facing problems in Eridius. That's a bias that you have, rather than Monarch.
@Peril_Himself Its not about "facing problems". Raping the female characters to death is gross and uncomfortable.
You dont seem to mind but disparaing his female characters throughout the entire story is gross and not palatable. Its hard to stomach and is disrespectful. He used no tact whatsoever because he doesnt feel its a sensitive subject.
And so do the other readers. Its not common place to talk or write about this at all and you see no problem but I do and so would lots of people who read it. He shoyldnt be objectifying his characters or deliberately miswritting them.
A drgon is a proud creature that would never look down on themselves to spite anither race. It was wholly unnatural to write them that way but he did because he wanted to compare the female and male experience. Being female has nothing to do with manhood. Why did he even put this bs in his story.
He made the female dragons objectify themselves JUST to make draco feel like he's not manly enough. Women dont objectify themselves. Men do. It was weird to read about them treating themselves like that. I thought his story was all about equality so why did he put that sh*t in there AGAIN.
He's not fit to write this story. He needs an editor it it wont make it off the shelf. People like me will report it. The way I just did..
@SolitaryMonarch
I'm sorry you feel that way, but you're focusing too much on one side of the equation. You've failed to acknowledge that most of the dominators are female.
When have I, the Monarch, ever written that females were specifically weaker than males in this book?
You are missing the point. You are writing about women being raped and it killing them leaving their dead bodies everywhere. That is vile.
The thing abiut the moon spirit being reduced to a quivering p*ssy was gross. Pharoah and Chad seeing the women in their kingdom as throwaway tools is unapalatable at best.
You are missing the point. A dragon is a proud creature that would never put themselves down in front of others. You already recognize their pride. Even if Eridus didnt make them and you can justify their behaviour it doesnt change the fact the the males are proud but the female dragons were disparaging themselves and even objectifying themdelves.
I have never in my life seen a woman objectify herself however I have seen many men do it in basic conversation. You are writing your male characters to have dignity and your female characters you are purposely and deliberatly throwing their pride and dignity out the window when it suits you to make a male character look strong or whatever.
Its perfectly reasonable to have a strong reaction to reading about rape and vile actions. You have no tact whatsoever. Because you truly dont feel like the things you are writing about are bad. Your equal playing field is performative at best. And the way you treat your characters is unattractive.
I want to keep reading but you didnt write this story with everyone in mind. If you dont want women to read your story than I wont. But I really liked your story and I'm sad that you wrote it in such a disrespectful way and univiting way. I have been with you for over a year and I'm sad to go.
I will be reporting your story on any website I find it on. I reported it today. And if you keep writing like this there will be others who report your story.
I really like Jorma and Gaia and Its cool you have strong female characters but that has nothing to do at all with the way you have been treating your other characters. A little tact goes a long way..