The Prologue (what else do you expect)
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I did a prologue rewrite enjoy

    "Kill! Kill! Killlllll!"
    "Dammit these monsters won't stop"
    "Someone pass me an Element Blaster!"
    "Damn anybody has a type 1F crystal"
    "Shit!! the beast is coming though run!!"
    "Damn these beasts! Damn those Politicians! And damn that God too!!"
    "Yeah damn them all!"
    "Yeah!"
    "True!"
    "Yes!"
    --
    while in another space an average looking man with brown eyes and black hair with a hight around 170 cm looked around with a bit of confusion in his gaze.
    "What happened," A lady with blue eyes and black lustrous hair asked the man
    "Nothing it just looked like many people were cursing me again"
    "Oh! Well not surprising, you did make them suffer like this"
    "Cant you take my side for once?"
    "Nope, no can do"
    "Sigh how did I end up with you. Still, in my defense I did give them plenty of chances to grow and change"
    "Yeah and most of them were all hogged up weren't they"
    "Sigh true"
    
    
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