The Prologue (what else do you expect)
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"Kill! Kill! Killlllll!"
"Dammit these monsters won't stop"
"Someone pass me an Element Blaster!"
"Damn anybody has a type 1F crystal"
"Shit!! the beast is coming though run!!"
"Damn these beasts! Damn those Politicians! And damn that God too!!"
"Yeah damn them all!"
"Yeah!"
"True!"
"Yes!"
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while in another space an average looking man with brown eyes and black hair with a hight around 170 cm looked around with a bit of confusion in his gaze.
"What happened," A lady with blue eyes and black lustrous hair asked the man
"Nothing it just looked like many people were cursing me again"
"Oh! Well not surprising, you did make them suffer like this"
"Cant you take my side for once?"
"Nope, no can do"
"Sigh how did I end up with you. Still, in my defense I did give them plenty of chances to grow and change"
"Yeah and most of them were all hogged up weren't they"
"Sigh true"
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Oh and all the critics out there are invited comment all you want, but just remember please give an objective or viable criticism only, nothing like "you are shit".
Oh and finally remember one last thing I am a newbie author with English my 2nd language and it is not that commonly used in my country, so please give any constructive criticism and advice, but please refrain from any unnecessary language and unreasonable criticism
Oh and Flood the Comments it tells me you guys are reading
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you misspelled something in your synopsis.
you wrote:
"Create your own world, create & explore various mistries, all to your heart's content.
I believe you meant:
Create your very own world & explore various mysteries, all to your heart's content.
I'm interested
You might want to check the font color. It's currently black on a almost black background.
It comes of as black on white background, and as for black background I really can't do anything, it's a technical fault
@HeartPiercingSpear
If you're setting the font color, check what you have set for the dark "theme" not just the default. Some of us have a lot less eyestrain with light text on a dark background.
@HeartPiercingSpear No its a author error for explicitly setting a font colour... let the site set the font colour via the theme like everyone else and it will work.
@Fuxy I'll try
@HeartPiercingSpear "with a hight around" -> height