The next morning, the first thing that Victor did was see his status:
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[Hp: 450/450]|[Mp: 500/500]
[Status: Victor]|[Age: 18]|[Gender: Masculine]|[Lvl: 15]|[Job: Mage (lvl 7)]|[Second Job: Apprentice Alchemist( (lvl 7)]|[Third Job: Herbalist (lvl 4)]
[Job Title: Herbalist (On)]|[Core Creator (Off)]
[Title: Magical Herb Collector]|[Magical Medic]|[Apprentice Quad-Mage]
[Skills:|[Fire Shoot (Lvl 9)]|[Water Shoot (lvl 9)]|[Tiny Heal (lvl 9)]|[Wind Shoot (lvl 9)]|[Stone Shoot (lvl 8)]|[Electric Shoot (lvl 5)]|[Plant Apprisal (lvl 4)]|[Create Poison (lvl 4)]|[Tiny Hurricane (lvl 5)]|[Sleeping Song (lvl 4)]|[Tiny Bind (lvl 4)]|[Magical Herb Analyze (lvl 3)]|[Tiny Core Creation (lvl 2)]|[Core Purify (lvl 1){Locked}]|[Crop Growth Accelerator (lvl 2)]|[Tiny Bind (lvl 4)]|
[Passive Skills:|[Aiming (lvl 9)]|[Tiny Mana Enlargement (lvl 7)]|[Mana Control (lvl 8)]|[Mana Circuit Drawn (lvl 7)]|[Herb Collect (lvl 2)]|[Herb Mix (lvl 2)]|[Tiny Mana Recovery Rate (lvl 2)]|[Elementary Circuit Draw (lvl 3)]|[Magic Rune Draw (lvl 3)]
[Resistances:|[Fear Resistance (lvl 9)]|[Bleed Resistance (lvl 5)]|[Impact Resistance (lvl 6)]|[Poison Resistance (lvl 6)]
[Unique Skill:|[Magic Learning]|[Magical Diagnostic]
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With a smile on his face, he looked at his flower pots, inside them, tiny blue flowers and yellow flowers were growing up. Victor was happy to see the progress of his babies! Then he got up and left the house to talk... Try to talk to Jack. When he arrived at Jack's group room, he knocked on the door and Samuel opened it, with a smile he said to Victor: "Thank you for helping me." and looking back he said: "Jack is inside, want me to call him?" Victor slowly nodded and Samuel shouted: "JACK! Victor-kun is here! Come talk to him!"
After a few seconds, the first thing that he heard was Myriana and Gorge shouting at the same time: "Ehh!?? Master?? Here??" then in the door, Myriana and George pushed Samuel pushed and started to talk to Victor, Myriana was saying about how she learned how to use her [Unique Skill] and Gorge was saying about his [Unique Skill]: "Master, my [Unique Skill] is the [Extreme Speed Calculator], I can calculate several parallels and find results in seconds! My brain turned into a supercomputer!" Victor nodded and then looked at Samuel, who said: "My [Unique Skill is [Clairvoyance], I can see everything around me in a ray of one kilometer, I think it is very Op!"
Jack looked at Victor and asked: "So... Victor, why are you here?" Victor's body froze when Jack's voice entered his ear. With an embarrassed expression, he said: "I-i came here t-to show m-my w-work..." then he showed the flower pot that the [Mana Flowers] and [Hit Point Flowers] were. Myriana smiled and asked: "This is the [Mana Flower] and [Hit Point Flower] that you made, Master?" Victor slowly nodded, Yoko jumped from Victor's shadow and meowed.
Victor understood the meaning of that meow and gave her three mana crystals, she ate it happily and entered the shadow again. Then, Gorge said: "Oh! I got the [Fear Resistance] skill!" Myriana looked at her screen and said: "Me too..." Victor slowly said: "I-it's because of Y-yoko... Her s-skill, [Fear Aura]..." Samuel nodded and said: "I'm sorry but I want to ask you something, Victor-kun." Victor looked at Samuel, who smiled and said: "I need you to make me a weapon." Victor looked at Samuel and asked: "W-what kind o-of weapon...?"
Samuel smiled and handed him a paper, in the paper, a bow was drawn. With some details and one thing written in it: [Veraky], Victor looked at Samuel and Samuel said: "I want you to make this bow, well, obviously I will pay for it. How many mana crystals you want? Or what do you want? I will get it for you." Victor shook his head and said: "I just need seeds..." Myriana nodded and asked: "Master... What are you going to do today?" Victor gave her a wry smile and said: "T-today? I w-will teach you a-about r-runes..."
Gorge and Myriana nodded at the same time, Victor gets up quickly and left the room, behind him, Myriana and Gorge following him with happy expressions. Mark looked at Samuel and grabbed the sword of the [General Orc] that Victor defeated and smiling, he said: "You asked for a bow because you wanted to cover me? So sweet of you~" Samuel pushed him and kissed, then he said: "Obviously." the poor single door that ate dog food, Jack, left the room and let the two have 'fun' with each other.
He was going to see Victor's class with Gorge and Myriana. When he arrived, he saw Victor drawing a mana circuit and saying: "This is the most basic mana circuit, the mana circuit of [Mana Control]. With this mana circuit, you can learn the [Mana Control] skill easily." when Victor enters in [Teacher Mode] he forget his shyness and starts to talk normally. Myriana and Gorge nodded and Victor said: "You two will use this circuit every day to train your [Mana Control]. Starting today." Gorge and Myriana nodded again and started to train mana control.
Victor started to drew another circuit, but now he drew inside it [Wind Runes] when Samuel gave him the drawing of the bow, Victor had an idea. First, he made an elemental circuit of [Wind], that is different from a normal mana circuit. First, the mana circuit lives the mana itself, but the elementary circuit moves the element itself. So the circuit that Victor made will move the wind around him with the mana, not move the mana. Then he drew a [Wind] rune to attract the [Wind Element Mana] to the center of the circuit, making the wind mana and normal mana collide and fuse inside the magic crystal that he placed inside the elementary circuit. That way, he can make a [Wind Crystal] easily!
Then he started to test it. Myriana looked surprised at the circuit and shouted: "Master! It's dangerous!" but it was too late, the mana exploded and Victor flew toward a tree. Jack jumped quickly and grabbed him mid-air, and with a princess hold, he said to Victor: "Be careful with your experiments." Victor, with his red face, slowly and while nodded his head. Then he walked toward the elementary circuit to try again.
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Jack: "I need a wife..."
*Victor starts falling from the sky*
Jack: *grabs Victor and gives him a princess hold* It's raining wives! Halleluiah!
The most difficult part is to write the status.
I think i forget something in the status... Please help me if something if off~, please.
With the accumulation of skills, it is getting hard to see. I think you should change it so that each skill is in a new paragraph or categorize it base of the related job.
Meanwhile, is the setting Japan? Because call someone who has an English name with kun, san etc. is a bit weird. You can ignore me on this since its your work and I'm not really troubled just finding it out of place.
PS: If you need an editor, I can help for the low low price of being able to read ahead.
Thanks for writing this author.
It is not Japan setting...
I use it to demonstrate the intimacy with the other party. And because I like it too.
And answering your question about an editor...
I don't have money to pay my debts. I work and write.
Yesterday i didn't post any chapter because of my job... So... No thanks. I don't want to be rude with you that offered your help to me, but i think i don't need it for now.
I will wait and see.
I see, well I guess I can see why you use it.
That's alright, I hope everything works out for you.
@Lost_Happiness T
Thanks
Honestly, the story has a lot of promis but these interactions are frustrating me, all the side characters and even the male lead keep pushing and pushing the mc, like they dont realize he doesnt wanna be bothered but, not only that they keep asking and asking for him to do stuff for them, they are prcatically taking advantage of him and he lets it happen. Dont even get me started on that girl who calls him master ughhh i cant stand her
This is too much for me. I mean the novel is fcking nice and have a lot of interesting things but this MC just make feel very anxious and put me in a bad mood so... Bye and Gambate Author! Although the story may not be for me it may be for someone else
No, it's raining wifey*