"I have to thank you girls for supporting me and helping in my research. Without any of you things would have been much harder. Now, to success and glory," I say as I lift my glass. We clink each other glasses and drink, the green whiskey burns my throat hard.
Roxanne and Hana slams their glasses on the table. "Ohohoh, we just grow higher and higher, a gentleman and now a scholar," Roxanne says with girly enthusiasm.
"Took you long enough, eh? But I guess it was worthy. Depending on who you talk a Scholar title has the same weight as a knight," Hana says.
"Has more weight when you see his age," Alissa says.
Lina discreetly pours more green whiskey.
"But even on that he was cheating," Ciel says with a wry smile.
We eat gourmet hamburgers, it's incredible how they made something so common in my previous life taste so refined.
We go back home and the moment we take our clothes off a tipsy Roxanne throws herself on me.
"Wash me," she says in a low, sexy tone and lays down on the floor. Her arms and legs flex, and her back arches, she looks like a model posing for a shoot.
I grab the sponge and wet it lightly, adding just a little soap at the tip. I grab her unnaturally white arms and gently glide it through her perfectly smooth skin. There's not a single hair on her limbs.
Hana grabs her feet and starts to massage them. Ciel quietly pulls Alissa by the hand and starts to fondle her. Lina hugs Alissa from behind and uses her body as a sponge.
I wash both her arms and hands, once done I [Conjure Water] on them and play with her hand. I suck on her long, thin fingers and fill them with kisses, moving down her arm until I reach her face. I slowly kiss her neck and cheeks until our mouths overlap, then pecks turn into kisses that increase in length until our tongues search for each other.
I tease her, I give her my tongue but take it away, then I let her search for me for a second before giving her my tongue again. She moans softly as I [Massage] a modest breast with one hand and her scalp with the other. Then she moans louder as Hana reaches her lady lips and nibbles on them.
She grabs my dick and strokes it softly, then she grabs the bar of soap and coats her hands with the slippery substance. Now her hands glide on my shaft with speed but low cadence, making me moan with every stroke.
I quickly finish all over her chest, she cleans her hands from the soap and spreads my semen all over her body. The smell attracts Hana, who comes up and licks her all over.
I untangle from Roxanne and see Alissa is being ferociously eaten by Ciel while lovingly kissing Lina.
I suddenly feel jealousy that they can be so tender with each other. It's that sharp pain that feels like a dagger on the heart, yet it fills me with energy. It fills me with the desire to rape everyone of them, of making them submit to my power, to make them choke on my cock and cum, to tie them and use them as cum-dumpsters. It's an electric feeling, and it's horribly addictive. It's the reason why I avoid looking at a certain hentai tag.
I see Hana progresses upwards and is now raping Roxanne's mouth with the tentacle she calls a tongue. Hana's legs are wrapped around Roxanne's waist, bringing my two cock-sleeves together on a very enticing sandwich.
I put scented oil on my member and shove it between the slits, they moan at the same time as my shaft rubs between their clits.
I fuck the middle, then I fuck Hana while I finger Roxanne, then I switch. I have ample choices in whose pussy to fuck at any time I want.
"AAH!" Alissa orgasms and yells. Lina stops kissing her and goes to kiss Ciel so they can both share the taste of Alissa. Ciel quickly breaks the kiss and mounts Alissa's face, undulating her waist so she rubs her lips wildly. With a hand she holds Lina in place and with the other shoves four fingers in Lina's pussy.
Lina freezes in place with her mouth open and gloomy eyes open wide. Her hand trembles at the stimulation but Ciel just increases speed, savagely fingering the little girl.
Hana and Roxanne both arch their backs so their pussies rub more on my shaft, I cum between them and don't even go limp. They spread my cum on their bodies like it is soap and soon I give them more.
I [Clean] Hana's ass and shove my fingers inside, then Hana aims on Roxanne. We both gang up on her, kissing and licking every part of her delicious body.
"NYAH!" Roxanne yells and convulses repeatedly, her orgasm is long and squeezes two shots out of me in quick succession.
"Holy shit," I say and collapse backwards.
"Hahah, I'm getting better at it," Roxanne says, her voice is weak and her body is limp.
Hana unmounts Roxanne and turns to Ciel, she's still hungry, hungry for pussy. She pulls Ciel out of Alissa and chomps down on her. I see Ciel convulse as Hana's tentacle makes a storm and her hand fingers Ciel's asshole without mercy.
Lina looks at them wide eyed, both in jealousy and excitement. Her little hand goes down towards her tight pussy and she starts to rub herself as she sees her lover being used by another.
Alissa pulls out Lina's hand and spreads her cute pussy lips apart. She delicately licks and kisses Lina's clit, making her shiver.
Hana stops eating Ciel out once she orgasms and moves to fingering her while her tongue now inades Ciel's mouth. Ciel looks surprised and disgusted, she tries to move away and break the kiss but Hana is holding her tight.
I move behind Ciel and aim myself on her other entrance, I grab her huge ass and shove my cock inside her. I see Ciel's resistance slowly reduces until she turns to knead Hana's breasts.
Ciel orgasms again and I finish inside her ass cheeks, my white semen is contrasted to her delicious dark color. Hana drops her like a used doll and moves towards Lina, she kisses her while Alissa eats Lina's pussy.
Hana's strong hands reach behind Lina and plunge a finger inside her super tight little buttocks. Lina opens her eyes wide and her whole body trembles as she instantly orgasms.
Hana immediately abandons Lina and comes to me.
"See, Wolfy, there's still two assholes for you to stretch and Lina is ready to be the next one," she says.
My dick twitches awake and Hana smiles ferociously. She grabs it, aims it, and slams her waist down my shaft.
She doesn't stop until I'm fully drained after two more shots. Then Alissa is used to clean everyone.
Aoi calmly stares at us from the tub, her eyes show interest and amusement. Gify sleeps in her back and uses her wings as a blanket.
This evening I cuddle with Alissa while she reads, I brush her fluffy tail until it's fluffy again and [Massage] her ears.
She's reading an epic about a jealous prince who kills his brother, the king, and his descent into madness. His men desert him, his people get slaughtered by monsters and heretics, then he turns into a cannibal to survive.
When the monsters barrel down on the doors to his castle he prepares for death and kills the rest of his family by his own hands. Now alone, when the monsters break down the doors he charges forward unto death, but the monsters don't attack and instead kneel. They identify the hate for humanoids in his heart and deem him one of them, they feel his power and deem him stronger than any one of them, so they chose him as a leader and king.
This is a fiction about how the Monster King came to be.
Meanwhile Roxanne and Ciel start class for the golems and Aoi.
"Remember, the first rule is always re-pea-ta-bi-li-ty," Roxanne says and adjusts the sexy oval glasses on her face.
"You don't have the system to measure your own mana usage so you have to learn first your limits," Ciel says.
Both of them look like the sexy teachers of my dreams. I need fake glasses for Ciel too.
"Try to first apply the least amount of mana on this," Roxanne says and pulls a small piece of cloth. "When you have succeeded in barely moving it you have found your lower limit," she tries to lift Hana's halters but fails, eliciting chuckles from the others. Ciel comes and easily lifts the halters while smiling at Roxanne.
"Then you have to apply a large amount of mana and carefully lift this one. The more delicate the movement the better," Ciel says and brings the halters close to the students.
Aoi and the golems nod silently and start practicing. Aoi has the most difficulty maintaining the spell while the golems have the most difficulty adjusting their power.
Lina is cuddling with Hana while they casually try to complete the soul map. She lays back and enjoys the breast pillows, she gets a flicker into her temple when her magic pen falls from her hand.
"Not supposed to sleep yet," Hana says.
"Sorry…" Lina mutters and continues to work.
"Repeats these movements until you master them, then we can proceed into the next phase. We will observe the internal workings of the spell and discover which parts of them govern the control of the spell," Roxanne says.
Maybe I should participate once they reach this part.
Today is the 1st of the 10th month, the month of Death.
Lina delicately awakens me with only licks to the head, she forcefully pulls Ciel over and have her drink it all.
She beams with a smile the whole breakfast and pampers Ciel with many kisses.
"Me too," I say, feeling the jealousy. She immediately comes to sit on my lap and drills her ass on my sore member. "Oof, not like that, I'm still sore."
She puckers her lips in thought then she grabs my fork and feeds me herself.
"Say 'aah'," she says while approaching the fork with my piece of fruit.
The other girls stop and observe, I feel the room get warmer while they burn with jealousy, but I'm not sure who they are envying.
I gained the titles "Scholar of Rabanara", and "Golemancer", kinda neat. If I write a letter I can use 3 titles to pompously introduce myself, though neither of them sounds as cool as "Enemy of Wyverns".
"Who wants to go to the university's library?" I ask.
Only Ciel, Hana, and Aoi don't lift their hands.
"We will stay here, I will take care of her," Hana says and sends a fearsome smile to Ciel, making her shrink her posture and look away.
"Make sure she yells a lot," I say and give Hana a goodbye kiss.
Ciel sends me a glare.
"You know I will. Give me the sex rope, I want to tr-..."
Hana is interrupted by a sneak attack from Aoi, she jumps towards me with her long tongue ready like a spear. [Battlefield Perception] triggers, like a kung-fu master I grab Aoi's tongue mid-air and she crashes in my arm. I see her excitement deflate and her eyes turn round and sad.
I smirk and release her tongue. I hold her in my arms and lean my head closer to hers. She immediately turns happy again and her tongue invades my mouth, her thin lips touch mine in an attempt of a kiss but it doesn't really work since hers aren't soft.
What does work is that her tongue rubbing on my teeth, palate, and wrapping on my own tongue is giving me lots of pleasure. There's something enticing about having such a long, thick, and dexterous tongue inside my mouth, no way I'm thinking about cocks, though.
"Please stop, this is too hot," Hana says and squeezes Ciel's hand, who looks down in fear while Lina smirks.
"How long until you can take him in?" Alissa asks with a wicked smile.
Aoi breaks the kiss and looks into her own body, I see a small slit open between the middle of her hind legs. A hint of the usual smell of pussy reaches my nose.
"Don't, know... not, yet," Aoi says.
Ciel escapes Hana's grasp and looks at Lina. "You okay with this?" She asks.
Lina shrugs and says, "She's family and I want her to be happy."
"You okay with this?" I ask Ciel.
"I don't know, the Gods never said anything about loving monsters. Aoi is barely a monster though, if she doesn't hate humanoids she's basically an animal," she says.
"And what do the Gods say about loving animals?"
"Just to not do it with the ones who can rip your genitals out," she says and smiles wryly. "You can't have children with animals and the temple frowns at cruelty so it's not normally accepted. Aoi is not only sapient and willing, she's also a breeder, if her broken soul is inheritable then we can have a new race of sapient dragons rise."
"Won't she be considered like a dryad?" Alissa asks.
"I guess so. But she won't reincarnate, the God of Destruction doesn't let monster souls be part of the cycle."
"How are the dryads treated by society?" I ask
"Warily, they are not bound by the Humanoid Gods so they can commit the Sins so people are mostly afraid of dryads and other Children of the Forest."
"Maybe if she converts..."
"Is that even possible?" Hana asks with anticipation.
"Not sure, there's the God of Animals that she can pray to but he's quite obscure," Ciel says.
"I, will, pray, to, live, with, Wolfy!" Aoi says and flaps her wings in excitement.
"Gih," Gify says with a confident nod.
Ciel sits down and laughs, "We might end up converting the first monster in the realm," she says.
Aoi crawls up my chest, her pointy claws tickling my skin, and curls on my neck, then she gives me a lick on the cheek. "I, will, convert. Wolfy, better, than, Destruc-tion!"
"What about me?" Hana asks, feeling a pang of jealousy.
"I, love, Mom, too!"
"Awnn~…" Hana gets teary-eyed.
Hana comes forth and kisses Aoi's little head repeatedly. She seems to enjoy it, though not in the same way as she enjoys kissing me.
We go to the university while we leave Ciel alone with the Predator.
The wereowl librarian eyes Aoi suspiciously.
"If she taints any book you will pay for the repair," he says sternly.
"I, will, behave," Aoi says making the wereowl almost jump in surprise.
"O-okay," he says while blinking blankly.
"We want to enter the restricted area," I say and the wereowl snaps from his stupor.
He pulls out an Inspection Crystal and says, "Only those with the Scholar title can enter, put your hand on the ball please."
He checks the crystal tablet and then my face repeatedly. More specifically, he checks my age and titles.
"T-this way, Grand Ryder," he says and leads us to the elevators.
We reach the top floor of the library, quite the view up here where we can see the little people moving about and the flickering the magical lights. I will miss the smell of old books, the moody atmosphere, and baroque-like architecture, reminds me a little of New York's Public Library.
The wereowl takes us to the end of the corridor, after a heavy door there's a small room where they see my titles again, then we are let into a completely dark room, it smells of mold and dust. The books are chained to the shelves and I can see at the end there's even more books behind a section that's separated by metal bars. The bars glow faintly, the tell-tale signs of something magical.
Beside the entrance there's a catalog of every book. We spend a long time perusing it while the bored librarian watches us, we casually converse about the topics of the books while hinting we are looking for old history books. Eventually the librarian excuses himself and leaves.
We immediately flicker to the beginning and find the section where [Cursing Magic] books are. Lina goes towards an interesting historical section about the undead while me, Alissa, and Roxanne look for the Cursing books.
Cursing magic is altering someone's soul in a very slow and imperceptible way. You can curse someone's body directly but it's much more difficult and the person will also feel it if they are awake.
Most common spells alter someone's stats, making them dumber, weaker, etc. Those spells have two modes of work, one is the imperceptible but slow way, generally you curse items and let the person touch the item; the other is through the eyes like [Illusion Magic] but it's quite perceptible when you cast it, both because the person can feel the mana and see your eyes turn weird, horror-movie-possession weird.
Curiously, it's a complete magic school, which means it's rather safe to use. It's also easier to use in comparison to [Illusion Magic] because the eye-cursing-thingie only works with one person so you don't run the risk of draining your mana in a second if you cast it while multiple people look at you.
The last spell of [Cursing Magic] is called [Shackle Soul], it forcefully creates a Blood Slave without the possibility of escaping the bond and without the supervision of the Gods. Now I know why they are unsure this is considered heretical, while the magic school is not forbidden magic this spell will get you executed if it becomes known you used it. The concept of Blood Slaves is sacred to the temple and this spell is considered sacrilege.
I'm not sure which one of us would be better to learn this. I already have a lot of spells so "debuffing" people would just strain my already strained mana, Alissa doesn't have a lot of mana to keep spreading curses, Ciel has to save hers for healing, Roxanne already uses a lot of mana with her high-damage spells. So perhaps Lina? She has a little more MP than Hana so it could work for her, she's good at defending but not so much at attacking. Maybe this can push her to become more aggressive when she can control the power of her enemies more closely.
Roxanne ends up gravitating to some books about forbidden experiments and even I get a little queasy at what's in those books. The heretics have no chill, they do anything for power so they might as well have been the nazis of this world. Fortunately their organization has been in shambles for the last generations so they don't have a proper foothold in the Bestiaram continent anymore.
Alissa and Gify end up teaching Aoi how to read since they can't really understand the harder parts of the book.
We manage to compile a lot of info that will take some time to process.
When we go back home we see a collapsed Ciel in the kitchen trying to resist a hungry Hana assaulting her lady parts.
"W-wait, ah! T-too muuuch! AAH! Slower, please!" Ciel pleads, Hana laughs while she violently stimulates Ciel.
Lina approaches both of them, pieces of her clothes dropping on the ground as she walks. She sits on Ciel's face and grabs Hana's, she kisses Hana, tongue first, surprising her. Hana continues fingering Ciel while she devours Lina with her mouth.
Ciel orgasms and collapses after Hana finally releases her. We start lunch while Hana drags Lina to the corner, she eats her up for a long time until Lina finally tires and collapses.
"I thought the strain on my body would decrease when they joined but I think that Hana has only grown hungrier," I say.
"Why would I contain myself when there's so many toys to play?" Hana asks with a fearsome smile.
"Are you trying to steal Wolfy's harem?" Alissa asks as she narrows her eyes in suspicion.
"Who's ever said about stealing? We have always been about sharing everything," Hana says.
"I tamed Hana, maybe you girls also need to do the same if you want to survive her," I say.
"I'm fine being her sex slave," Roxanne says and Alissa nods.
Lina and Ciel look at each other, Lina smiles like an imp and Ciel looks away in disbelief.
After lunch we go see the Black Parade.
Hall of Fame of Patrons.
The patrons who support Rupegia shall have their names sung by the bards for they deserve the glory and honor. Their names are:
Oracle Maximillian Hübner.
Lord Andrew Meyers.
Lord SenilePenile.
Lord Hope.
Lord Samuel Lim.
Noble Salty Panda.
"After lunch we'll* go see the Black Parade."
When I was.... a young boy.... my father... took me into the city... to see a marching band....
He said, "Son when... you grow up... would you be the savior of the broken
... the beaten, and the damned?"
He said, "Will you... defeat them, your demons... and all the non-believers, the plans that they have made?"
Because one day... I'll leave you... a phantom... to lead you in the summer... to join the Black Parade!
Gotta say hana + Roxanne was good but how everyone girl is now being dominated by hana is not entertaining as just having her with roxanne.
Why does every girl have to has her lesbian counterpart? Dont really get it at this point
They all have strong ties to each other. Instead of just them all being tied to Wolf, they also have ties to one another.
@Manasong strong ties don't really need to be sexual. They could just be good friends and comrades...
I agree, For me it is like Hana is taking over and I'm not that fond of beta males, she also seems to have become hyper-sexual (like wanting much more action than even a succubus) where as in earlier chapters it seemed like Roxanne was driving the action. But all of the ladies are coming across as have turned into nymphomaniacs and the constant s*x is starting to get in the way of the story - even just going to the university turns into a sexual event. I like they way the harem has developed to interact with each other but it has gotten to the point where every interaction is sexual in nature and with that Wolfy is now coming across as an extra not the focus and the ladies appear they would be fine without him. In addition he no longer is the one initiating it, a significant change from earlier as well.
@Fost These things are mostly just a lack of balance in my early writing. I want the others to have their own relationships and not have Wolf constantly as the sole focus of everyone. The balance gets better with time.
@Manasong thank you for replying. I am enjoying this story so happy to keep reading, but hope that the overtly s*x focus is tempered in the future, for me sooner rather than later, but will persist until I'm up to date even if it takes a number of chapters to tone down. The story itself is so intriguing that I want to know what is happening, and the many s*x scenes, many of them not doing/saying anything different than previous ones, I find to get in the way of the story. But as someone that has written a book I know how much you change from when you started, and your start is very good already.
I understand you want the ladies to have their own relationships but at the moment they only interact via a s*x scene - as with having fewer s*x scenes (and also quit telling us which orifice his d*ck ends up every morning, it's like a dad joke that has been repeated too often) - I hope you change to where they just just have a conversation while a) fully clothed and b) keeping hands, feet, mouths or tails to themselves - so act like adults rather than teenagers that have just discovered sex.
My two cents so far:
I have to say I really adore the moments when Hana turns tender and loving and adorable for Wolf. They're really rewarding signs of love! I feel like it wouldn't even be too much to have these moments every chapter, since her dominant behaviour more than offsets it in general.
On the other side not so much when she takes his women for herself. It has indeed not felt balanced or something like that, so rather than them sharing and loving each other, it just feels like NTR light to me, especially because Wolf is rarely involved and he's more of a switch when it comes to Hana and Roxanne (not bad imo when it's isolated). When he is involved, it does sometimes feel more like group sex, rather than her taking his women for her own. I guess it just feels off because he hasn't actually 'tamed' her other than in singular acts, she's still dominant over him plenty of times and therefore it's not 'his women with each other' but 'Hana with his women'. Her being most of the time being equally dominant works very well when it's just the two of them, but feels more negatively when she takes his place with his women. It's been getting better, but still sometimes evokes jarring feelings. Not sure if it's just due to how it's established when Hana takes them, or because they didn't want to until Hana just did so. Either way, it does get better and gets a more natural dynamic over time, so rather than 'unrealistic/wedontwantthis Hana fanfic' it feels more and more natural and earned.
I think showing their strong ties by Hana actually raping or just dominating them is... the worst kind of tie. Strong ties don't require s*x at all (though I won't wish for less sex), I don't recall Wolf bending over Nour at any time or the other way around. Did Kyros ever force himself upon Wolf? No, they just earned each other's respect. Developing the harem as sisters who live as sister wives doing normal things in life and occasionally have s*x in differing groups would create strong loving ties farrrr more than just "Hana kills the author, obtains the Feather of Writing and rapes everyone as she pleases", though that would be a funny end to the story.
Beyond the (initially) lacking Hana/Roxanne aspect of the story and Lina somehow still not being a romantic interest to Wolf worthy of marriage, which are my primary romantic 'complaints' and Wolf's stat points being nerfed (he rekts everything and everyone, grows a lot as reward, then a couple major arcs further he seems equally as weak and can't hold his own) and their money being nerfed (oh nooo they need more money... but they never spent all the rose coins) for plot progress reasons, I feel most of the story is really well-developed, especially the major arcs.
I also enjoy the length a lot, I agree that cutting everything in three parts was a good choice. They're still longer chapters than many other novels around. Of course, I'm binging everything, so my experience thus far is different from those who commented before.
Can't say I'd want even less sex, as I don't consider oneliners or just a few paragraphs as actual s*x plots, they're more like very short intermissions to show they have a healthy s*x life. The focus is already much more on actual plot, which is really good, so I hope it doesn't drastically decrease compared to now.
Thanks for the chapters so far!