Message To: [Akasha's Archiver] Hello! I'd just like to thank you, once again, for all the support you've given me these past years. Anyways, with regards to the concept you offered, I really like it! I feel very complicated about how the new MC being a fictional version of myself. Just a few concerns. That was mostly just Grant getting tortured and experimented on. Second, I have a concern with my mentality, if I were put in the world of my novel. I would without a doubt kill myself on the spot. No cap. I don't know why I'm sharing this with you. Maybe I also feel close to you, after the years of support you've given me. I didn't have a good childhood. I'm sorry if that was too heavy. Don't worry though, I'm okay now. Now, back to the story. I was wondering what you thought of this? There is also the option of reincarnating my self from when I was thirteen. However, naturally, I haven't written anything at the time... so it would create conflicts with the proposed premise. Those are my thoughts. Again. Cheers! |
"Uh, maybe I shouldn't be so personal...?" Zayne bit his lip in hesitation as his finger hovered over the part where he wrote about his troubled past. "Fuck it."
In the end, he clicked send. That time of his life was behind him. He wasn't bothered by it anymore, so what was the harm in talking about it?
If Archiver got uncomfortable from that, he'd just apologize.
Not even a minute passed, and Zayne already got a reply.
'What the... isn't that a bit too fast?'
Message From: [Akasha's Archiver] Wow, you're actually agreeing!? About your first concern, I also agree with you. As for your second concern... The thing about your fiancée getting sent into your novel's world with you... I like it! A lot, in fact! (Btw, you proposed to her at some point? GJ GJ. Congratulations~! Banzai Banzai!) Just a request... I mean, vampires, amiright? No pressure, though. Vampires tend to be different across novels. I'm so hyped for this, you have no idea. Cheers! PS - I'll be sending you something soon! It'll probably arrive later! |
"Well, guess he wasn't put off by it." Zayne smiled as he read through the reply. Then his eyes paused on a part he found strange. "Slightly more work...? What does that mean? Aren't I the one writing the novel?"
Although he found it weird, Zayne just brushed it off.
As for Archiver's thoughts on vampires, he was open to them. He'd gotten subtle hints in the past about including vampires in the story. A lot of hints.
Unfortunately, he hadn't been well-read about vampires at that point in his life. Eventually, he just forgot about adding them.
"Sending something...? Is he going to send money again...? Even though I haven't even written anything yet?" he felt more exasperation than amazement at this point. He wondered whether Archiver was secretly some oil prince from the middle east.
"Zayne. You awake?"
He looked up to see Luna staring at him from the doorway, wearing an oversized white hoodie and yoga pants.
Basically, her home clothes.
"Hey. Done streaming?" Zayne closed his laptop and shifted to sit at the edge of the bed.
"Mm." Luna nodded meekly then sat down beside Zayne without a word. She leaned her head on his shoulder as she asked, "Sorry about your back..."
"Oh." Partly due to the million-dollar donation, as well as conceptualizing his new story, Zayne had forgotten that his girlfriend was in 'apology-mode' at the moment. "It's fine. I'm used to it."
"That doesn't make me feel any better at all." Luna pouted then nuzzled her face on Zayne's arm.
"Hey stop that." he tried to push her off because it tickled, but she wouldn't get off. Zayne sighed in defeat. "I said it's fine."
"But still..." Luna let her body fall sideways, resting her head on Zayne's lap. She then looked up with an apologetic expression.
"You're so annoying..." Zayne couldn't help but chuckle at her antics. He smirked as he puckered his lips and tapped them with his finger.
Luna, understanding what Zayne wanted, sat up and kissed him.
"Again," Zayne whispered.
"Okay." Luna closed her eyes and brought her lips to meet with Zayne's.
"Again."
"Mm."
"... again."
"Yes.♥" Luna kissed him again, letting her tongue do some work this time.
"Alright..." Zayne pushed Luna down on the bed. The light-brown-haired beauty's eyes widened in surprise for a moment, but they were soon filled with anticipation. As her breathing became a bit rougher, Zayne whispered into her ear, "Do you want to make it up to me...?"
Luna wordlessly nodded.
"And you'll do anything, right?" he asked.
"Yes..." she said, breathless, as Zayne's breath tickled her ears.
Zayne kissed her on the cheek and then quickly stood up. "Then please do my share of chores this weekend."
"Okay...-- wait, what?" Luna looked at Zayne's back with a blank expression. After processing what he'd just said, she sprung up and hugged his waist from behind. "Hey, wait. This is the part where we get naked and have lovey-dovey sex, y'know? Follow the recipe!"
"Stop trying to squeeze culinary puns into our conversation. 'Script' would have been a better word there." Zayne chuckled in exasperation. His lips formed an impish grin as he looked at his beloved. "This is payback for forcing me to do it last night."
"Wha--" Luna spluttered as she looked at Zayne with an indignant expression. "You're so petty! And you liked it too!"
"That last part doesn't matter." Zayne shook his head. He had to take revenge for small slights like those. It was his creed that couples should get some payback for small grievances like that, so frustration doesn't build up.
At the very least, the two of them have been doing that for years, and their relationship was still doing well. So it had to have some sense to it.
"Hey, let go." Zayne tried to pry Luna off of him, but her grip was too firm. "No, why the hell are you so strong...? Let go!"
"No!" Luna screwed her eyes shut as she strained to use all her power to get Zayne in bed.
"Whoa!" he exclaimed, just barely maintaining balance. "You fucking gorilla woman!"
"Get back in here! Don't you dare edge me! I don't have that fetish!"
Zayne bit his lip, trying his best to escape but he just couldn't do it. An introvert like him — who only worked out once a week — couldn't compare to someone who regularly exercised and could even bench 1.5 times their body weight when he couldn't even get some proper footing. Since that was the case, he decided to just pull out his trump card.
"Ack! It hurts! My back — which was bloodied up by my girlfriend — hurts~!" Zayne voiced in monotone.
Luna's grip eased up as she looked at him with a gaze filled with utter disgust.
"You're a shitty person."
"Y'know that if our genders were reversed, you forcing me to have so much sex would be a problem in society's eyes, right?"
"I don't mind using double standards to my advantage."
"You're a shitty person." Zayne retorted, walking toward the door. "Thank you for volunteering to do my chores~!"
"Grrr..." Luna gnashed her teeth. Zayne's ploy really annoyed her since she got a bit hot and bothered. She decided to hurl some abuse at him to get some payback. "Get a real job!"
"Wow. Real nice. You know I pay for seventy percent of our bills, yeah?" he scoffed. His creed obligated him to retaliate. "Get back to the kitchen and make me a sandwich!"
"That comeback sucks. I'm an aspiring chef so I'm supposed to be in a kitchen!"
"Oh right..." Zayne bit his lip in frustration. When he ran out of obscenities to hurl that didn't go too far, Zayne decided to beat a hasty retreat.
"Hey come back here!" Luna called out to him in an irritated voice as he ran away.
"Don't wanna!" Zayne flinched as a pillow hit his head and was about to go into his workroom, but stopped when he heard the doorbell ring. He called out towards the door. "Coming!"
He opened the door to find what looked like a delivery man.
'Huh? I didn't order anything... Luna tends to buy stuff in person too.'
"Uh, do you have the wrong place, maybe?" he asked probingly.
"Uh, I got the apartment number and building right, dude." After raising an eyebrow in perplexity, the delivery man hastily glanced down at a list. "I'm looking for a 'Zayne Morgan'. That you?"
"Yeah..."
"Thought so. Can you sign here please?" The delivery man held out a clipboard for Zayne to sign, which he did. The man inspected it for a bit, then smiled. "Thank you for your cooperation."
"Sure." Zayne frowned as he was handed a small package. It was shaped like a book and seemed about as heavy as a dictionary.
Perhaps it was a dictionary? Did one of his readers send him one as a jab, because they found a typo or something?
That couldn't be.
Setting aside the fact that he was sure there weren't any typos in what he released recently, none of his readers should know his address.
He even took the trouble to install a good VPN. He'd done it because some of his readers were creepy bastards and he didn't want those guys knowing where he lived.
As he chuckled over his absurd thoughts, his breath got caught in his throat when he saw who the package was from.
[From: Akasha's Archiver]
"What the fuck...?" Zayne frowned as he looked at the package, not even noticing that the delivery man had left long ago. "How the hell did Archiver know where I live?!"
Package in hand, Zayne ran back to his workroom, closed the door, and rushed back to the computer. He hastily sent a message to Archiver about the package and how the hell they got his address. But even after anxiously waiting for dozens of minutes, no reply came.
"Shit. They did say that they couldn't reply since they were doing something..." he brought up Archiver's last message. "Won't be able to reply till the project starts...? I mean, how would he even know when that is? Like, if I start now, can he reply now?"
Bewildered, Zayne reread Archiver's other messages, and noticed a few more peculiarities.
'I'm getting some strange vibes from these...'
Shaking off his thoughts, he tried to think about the implications of someone who shouldn't know where he lived, knowing where he lived.
'Well... Archiver's obviously filthy stinking rich. Maybe he hired some super hacker to track where my computer's location despite me using a VPN? Is that even possible though...?'
Zayne hastily brought up google-sensei, and looked up whether it was possible.
"Shit! It is! Why the hell did I even buy a VPN then!?" he slammed his fist on his lap. Even though it was apparently very hard to do so, it was still doable. A rich person like Archiver would definitely be able to hire someone to do it for them.
Zayne tapped his finger on the desktop impatiently, thinking about what he should do, but after a few moments, he managed to calm down.
'Well, let's think about it logically. Archiver doesn't seem to want to harm me. Otherwise, he could've sent guys to abduct me. Maybe throw a grenade through a window or something.' he bit his lip as he tried to steady his rapidly beating heart. 'And, I mean... this is just a feeling, but they don't seem like a bad person.'
Once he'd settled down, Zayne took the package into his hands and ripped off the paper wrapping.
As he'd initially expected, it was a thick book. Zayne hesitantly peeked inside and found that every page was completely blank.
"What the... does he want me to write the new story by hand!?" Zayne exclaimed in shock.
The fact that it was troublesome was the least of his worries.
Zayne was well aware of how messy his penmanship was.
'I mean, even if I can draw somewhat well, don't just expect me to have good penmanship!'
Last Edited: Jan 15, 2023
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See reading really solidified my theory i think zayne in this novel literally writes the plot of his "GMAG Spin off" as himself and the events happening in the plot is basically just his amazing and frightening imagination so its probably going to become an meta-narrative and im still believing my first theory hehe.
But if that won't happen then basically i think archiver here is a god
Welp lets forget the theories and stuff for a second and imma say this the characters in this novel is insanely good, they both literally act like human beings not just a robot being pushed around.
@BasicallyFreddy yeah Lire has really good writing style plot grammar i think top rier content if you havent check out her other work glimps of eternity
@BasicallyFreddy Thanks! I try to write them that way, so I'm glad that you think so!
It will slightly be more work... but that's fine.
"Slightly be more work...?
Shouldn't these be "be slightly more work"? Well, either I'm missing something or reading to much into things by assuming I'm missing something xD
Sorry to those people who love fast-paced stuff. I'm a writer that usually paces the story a bit slowly, especially at the start.
Man, compared to Glimpse of Eternity, we're off to a blazing fast start here! Honestly tho, I don't tend to like novels like these that get off to slow starts, but your stories have been EXTREMELY special in that regard so far.
Until I read Glimpse of Eternity, I had never actually experienced the impact of watching a character die, leaving behind family and friends that they loved, needing to accept the unfairness of their own death, and learn to adapt to a new world and love the family they had there. That was a hell of an experience, and an emotion I'm not sure I'll ever actually ever feel again.
How much I loved your other novel is actually why I'm reading this now. The synopsis didn't particularly appeal to me, but I had faith from past experience that it would at least be worth reading, and I must say I am far from disappointed so far. (Though I'm terrified to have my suspicious confirmed on what Luna's family did to her that left her with that bad PTSD )
Honestly though, in regards to slow starts, I feel like anyone who honestly believes that your stories have slow starts is drastically misunderstanding something. Your characters are the biggest part of what makes your story, so it doesn't make a difference whether they're on earth or in another world. In my opinion, the only way to make this story legitimately have a slow start would be to focus on an entirely different set of characters at the beginning.
Aw man, thank you for the kind words!
Just what I needed to see before sitting down and writing. Just got home from touching grass in different places!
I'm glad GoE made such an impression on you. And I apologize, since this particular story is on pause.
I've chosen to dedicate my limited writing time to GoE afterall. My past-self was a dumbass for thinking he could juggle two stories AND a job.
Naturally, I won't do that to my protagonists
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
What the... I thought this was in Glimpse of Eternity.
So you decided to read my other story? It's actually on Hiatus since I chose to focus on GoE...
@Lire I finished GoE (to the latest chapter) and decided to check if you had other stuff.
All the stuff on my reading list come from the same few authors, and now you're on that list too!
@GreenHexagon Oh, man. What an honor!
I actually have some other stuff on Royalroad which I didn't bother posting here in SH. I didn't want more unfinished novels on my list.
They were from when I was a 1-month-old writer so they're short, unpolished, and unedited.
@Lire Short, Unpolished and Unedited is basically the summary of my Author career thus far, so I might check those out too.
@GreenHexagon Oh, you write too? Neat!
You don't seem to have any stuff posted. So do you post them somewhere else or do you just enjoy them privately?
(Oh, and btw, I just finished writing the next chapter of GoE, and I've scheduled it to release in about 15 minutes)
@Lire I had stuff posted here, but I deleted them because it didn't feel right to post them, I'm writing some new ones, and rewriting others, but that takes a bit.
@GreenHexagon Ah... I know that feel.
I actually want to delete my other early works, but decided to keep them up in the end. Cuz I have some lingering affection for them.
I still get the urge to just wipe them from the face of the earth though. Even now.
@Lire Ah yes, I'm well acquainted that feeling. My one solace lies in the fact that my only works (apart from one I just started recently) are on a different site under an old name
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