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Hi, I posted this on patreon and I forgot to post it here, tehee :P.
So the artist is now working on the final step, this is the 'beta' of the cover.
The style isn't like the one in the anime but I think it isn't bad.
What do you think?
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It's nice but, i think Alex's hair should be whiter, as described by you.
i think the same, the hair should be white or a platinum white
When I made the commission, I copied the paragraph describing the mc and sent it to the artist but at that time there was a mistake and I wrote silver hair for that line instead of white, sooo yea, I f*c*ed it. I told the artist to make the change and apologized.
His hair needs to be whiter and maybe shorter too... with spiked short hair on his head... that hair cht dosnt really fits in my opinion
the art is good, i like it :p congrats for the evolution of your history, it's even proud to remember that I have been following since the first chapter ♥
Thank you!
hinata, it's you!?
hahaha XD
namis position seems off. haar of mc a little whiter and maybe give nami more personality in her pose than a simple "i lean on the big strong man pose". right now it feels like she is just a trophy.
Overall it's fine I agree with the other comments that said his hair should be whiter. Personalg I always pictured his hair being longer not sephiroth levels but longer none the less. it will take some time to adjust
I'm glad you didn't have the artist draw this in the original style since most girls in one piece have a very extreme hourglass figure.
nice but was hurt as this wasn't a chapter
It's getting really good, just some touches here and there and it would be quite the good cover, but as you said it's the beta, so it will get very nice.
yeahhh moarrr harem...
thanks author reaaally like it