The sound produced by the clash between weapon and scream of human, the sign of battle. It should be a sign of battle, yet. The only word that fits for the scene is “Massacre”. Blood and corpse lay anywhere in this fort, a bandit fort. The sole culprit of this massacre is this guy with white armor from his head to his toe. There also wing behind him glimmering with a bluish feather. In front of him a man standing, his leather armor is tattering. He is the bandit king.
“Who are you? There is no way you are B rank Adventure” the man said weakly
“Me, I am just passing through B rank adventure. Kamen Rider Ryusei” the man in white armor answer with a childish and excited voice. It’s like he waiting for this exact question. No, he really waits for this question.
“Well, it’s not like you must remember it” after he said that he toke something from his waist and place on the right side of his waist, after he places it. There was voice comes from his waist, to be exact from his belt.
[Albion Maximum Drive!!] He launches himself to bandit king and holds his head. [Divide! Divide! Divide! Divide! Divide! Divide!] Unlike the former, the voice comes from the blue jewel in his armor. The bandit king starts to scream until he faints as Ryu released him.
“Ah my job is over, time to take this guy to adventure guild, Aurora curtain!”
[Aurora Curtain] Something like curtain appear, show a receptionist and room inside adventure guild at another side of the curtain. Crow is dragging bandit king then walk to aurora curtain and vanish.
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sign of battle
Loud sounds of weapons clashing and men shouting emerged from the dilapidated wooden fort - a sure sign of battle.
corpse
... blood and corpses lay everywhere ...
There also wing behind him glimmering with bluish feather.
A pair of lumininscent wings unfolded from his back.
Hope this following list of the most glaring mistakes helps.
In front of him a man standing, his leather armor is tattering.
Correction: In front of him stood a man dressed in tattered armour.
passing through B rank adventure. Kamen Rider Crow”
I guess you were trying to say : Me? I am just a passing B-rank adventurer. Name's Kamen Rider Crow by the way. (Flashes copyrighted Kamen Rider Pose.)
toke
took
it. There voice comes from his waist, to be exact from his belt.
A mechanically belted out from his belt. [Albion Drive activated, maximum output.]
[Aurora Curtain] Something like curtain appear, show a receptionist and room inside adventure guild at another side of curtain.
A screen of light flashed into existence next to Crow. [Aurora Curtain] - A portal that connects two separate locations by bending the laws of physics itself..
Crow is dragging bandit king then walk to aurora curtain and vanish.
"Ahahaha. All in a day's work." Crow then proceeds to manhandle the unconscious man through the Curtain.
Thanks
Np
Oh btw, [Albion! Maximum drive] is correct since it based on kamen rider double.
@Nakakure cool im not as well-versed in kamen rider stuff.
@Nakakure I loved the idea, but seriously man, you need to work a bit on the grammar. Good luck with your story!?