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Due to the vast majority of readers lacking engagement, unless they have something to complain about. As well as the lack of honest reviews. This will be on hiatus. Once, some honest reviews come in I'll post more. Thanks for nothing.
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Dude! That sucks. I feel ya though. I've posted a few things, and unless they were complaining about content not matching their own morals, most people don't comment at all. I really enjoyed what you've posted so far, and genuinely wanted to see more. I get it though, it's hard to stay motivated to write if nobody bothers to engage. I admit I don't comment on every chapter, but I read them all, and truly enjoyed them. That's why I always tell the Authors I like, such as yourself, to HAVE FUN, you should be writing for yourself, and not us. Genuine fan bases take time to grow as well. I know my newest story has over a hundred views per chapter, but hardly any engagement. One person seems super supportive, but that's it.
And there is more. 49 chapters to be exact. I'm just not going to post them at all unless the readers actually bother to write a review. I can't grow my skills if I can't find faults in my stories. I need actual feedback and engagement. Royal road does it much better, when it gains traction.
Bruh that sucks! Unhelpful reviews must really be shit. Anyway thank you for the chapter. I myself have nothing to complain about as far as it goes. Sorry if this doesnt help in improving your writing skills. It is an interesting dungeon story with a touch of arifureta. I am really hyped as a loved the beginning and will be happy if the mc will stay in the dungeon as long as possible. (I find it sad that arifureta drifts off to Mc kun collecting a harem with minimal real plot or adventure and i just hope that this doesnt happen here or at least not to soon)
I dont usually comment on older chapter when i binge but i will try to write more reviews. About grammer hater i dont really notice anymore. I have read translations so bad that you have to pray to understand what happens in the next chapter. But your gramma is pretty good. The one comment from that one chapter was pretty annoying about one mistake. I personally cant understand why people comment just to hate on something like that. The best i can tell you is to ignore them but i can also understand that that can be difficult when its the onl review. Anyway i genuslly like all your works. Though i havent read the dragon ball one bc i never watched dragon ball but maybe i will give it a try.
Honestly you've just posted 5 chapters so I can't really comment much on the story. I'll only say the smut is kinda meh but I see potential in the story. Scribblehub is more for casual readers with a lot of overlap with NU so they have low standards after all the garbage they've read compared to RoyalRoad where they jack off to le numbers go up generic litrpgs. Or smut. I find gems here sometimes but they get buried quickly.
This is only tagged that so I had room for it later. If you want real smut read, "Not a Hero". But hell you could have commented before.. or you know wrote a review and updated it later? There are three reviews and all are illegitimate. 2 are 5 starts which means perfect, and there is no such thing, and a third is just a personal attack evidently. I thought it was the grammar Nazi but it still stands as illegitimate.
@Chaddts i literally review off of enjoyment in this site. If I'm going to find good written stories I'd be at Royal Road. Sorry dude but RoyalRoad just have more critics than here so you won't find much criticism here unless you wrote pure garbage.
well what you wrote here so far was genuinely good. and your view on trans people wouldn't have shown up, if you hadn't said anything about it other places.
a bit like JKR. just without the money.
well, humans can learn and grow as persons. maybe take some time off and see where you stand after. have a nice vacation.
Ahh so review bombing for opinions and not content of the story I see. You can't seperate art from the artists? Or are you just stalking me that much? Glad to know my opinions got to you enough. But sorry, it wasn't you who I was referring to at all, lol. It was the grammar Nazi.
@Chaddts well, i told you your story so far was good didn't i? and seeing this after yesterday I assumed a connection between the two. I don't have the time to track down every transphobe. is it so unexpected that someone would read multiple smut stories?
i wasn't being sarcastic when I wished you a good vacation, I genuinely hope you can let go of your disgust about people different from you. And taking some time off might do that.
But just in case any of the trans activists need something to do while living in their mother's ( actual woman) basement, I'll say it again here so all my readers know. MEN cannot be WOMEN and WOMEN cannot be MEN You can cut your d!ck off and put on a dress and makeup, and you'll just be a dude living a delusion. You can be on hormones from the day you were born and it doesn't change a thing. I'm not going to be bullied into silence on this topic that's for certain. Neither will I participate in the delusion.
oh look, someone left on fox news.
@Mortuos the disgusting aspect is the idea of f*cking a dude who claims to be a women I made that exceedingly clear. I never attacked the actually story either. The author and I had a debate, and your tolerance led to you tracking me down in petty revenge like. A. Little. B.. I guess you do show some qualities of a woman.
@Mortuos typical. You think my everyone who disagrees with you is some sort of religious nut don't you? Such tolerance.
@Mortuos ohh look someone is off their meds. How many do you need to live in a fantasy of men being women just because they "Feel" like it?
And you inspired me. I'm gonna write a murder hobo story about a guy murdering trannies now and not the drag queens who don't try to pretend they are women but, hmm how about a young boy whose mother took them away from their father and forced them on hormones, he will grow up and gain freedom, then go on a murder spree taking care of all the adults who failed him as a child and let him become chemically castrated. it'll be a story about a man accepting who they are and not trying to become what society tried to brainwash him into. It'll go into all the dirty secrets of the trans groups grooming of children for their perverted desires.
@Chaddts dude I'm not the one getting all emotional right now xD
i also don't really care if you believe me when I say I read your story independently from the other one, and that it was good so far.
as for believing you to be a religious nut job? well lets see, strong unreflected opinions about stuff that doesn't impact yourself, random capslock, and getting righteous anger when confronted.
i don't see why i would think that.
@Chaddts isn't that literally just silence of the lambs
@Mortuos I think you are projecting tone a bit much. Caps is there to emphasis I mean an actual woman..you know how nut jobs like to change definitions all the time as it suits them so I had to be clear about it. Beside that, nothing, absolutely nothing I have said has any religious connotation to it. I dare you to find anything that does in any of my comments.
@BigBadBoi I was too young, can't say I remember it.
@Mortuos and yes the trans stuff does effect me. I live in this world and have women in my family. I won't stand aside and be silent while men try to co-opt their rights because they woke up feeling like a woman.
@Chaddts that's the point though. what right do ciswomen loose by letting transwomen live the way they want to?
safety in the bathroom? as if anyone willing to break a law would bother with the sign outside.
competitive sports? the world class is a doping fest anyways, and in an amateur setting the differences are within the margin of error of normal human variance.
it's not like there's a lot of difference anyways.
the whole discussion about trans people is the US conservatives dragging a minority out to vilify, so you average joe don't start thinking about actual problems. cause then they'd have to go do something about it, and that'd change the status quo they and their donors profit from.
there's nothing real about the stuff you're outraged about. transpeople just got a little more accepted and a little more comfortable to tell people how they feel and would like to be addressed. same way lefthanded people did a hundred years ago. now lefthandedness is at a natural plateau of roughly 20.
trans people too are going to find theirs and then they'll be as normal as anyone else.
and just to tack that on:
religious fervor can be displayed by everyone with strongly held beliefs, regardless if it's societally called religion, sect, cult, or ideology.
@Mortuos there are dozens of instances of men winning in not just college sports but all sorts of competitions. There are also multiple verified reports of young boys sexually assaulting and raping girl in bathrooms, after they just "decide" they were girls. Not only that, but this is a mental health issue. I will not oartake in the delusions that men are women, period. And these examples you so helpfully listed are exact example of how it does effect other people, namely women. In running, swimming, cycling. Lifting, etc.. the pendulum will swing back, and it's going to be nasty. College sports have a women's division for a reason, you degrade real women everytime you say men can be one. Its a goddamn mental health crisis. And the mental gymnastics to even think it's ok is insane.
@Mortuos I can't believe you said there isn't much of a difference... f*cking idiot..