Time poll (not a chapter)
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Announcement
I was going to make the last chapter end in a way that indicated more time had passed but didn't end up actually doing that at first so I've now edited the last chapter to have the following:
"... look, umm..." But she gets interrupted by Jenny right away.
"As interesting as whatever you're talking about seems we have a schedule to keep and I think by not interrupting you earlier I've been nice enough but that also means you're almost late for the next thing you're supposed to do so you need to get going right away." (Huh, that sounds like we sat here for longer than we needed to. Knowing that might have saved me from some awkwardness but I guess overall sitting here has been pretty nice so I shouldn't complain.)
Announcement
Also I'm trying to figure out how much time I should make it seem like that the next few chapters take for stuff like another meal and some people going home to seem reasonable so figuring out what the current time feels like would help with that thus the poll after this.
If the story now had a line saying it's X o'clock what time do you feel like it would be?
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7PM Votes: 4 16.7%
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6PM Votes: 5 20.8%
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5PM Votes: 2 8.3%
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4PM Votes: 2 8.3%
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3PM Votes: 3 12.5%
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2PM Votes: 4 16.7%
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1PM Votes: 1 4.2%
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12PM Votes: 0 0.0%
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11AM Votes: 3 12.5%
Total voters: 24
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Hi i kinda like your story, do you have anything to recomend that similar to this>?
Not exactly, but I do like recommending stuff so I'll say that reading both Upside Down and Morbid helped me decide to try writing this but I'm not sure how like them this story is or will be. Then there is the 1st page of a short doujin with a similar title from which I got the idea for the premise of the story but I'll probably talk about that more later(once I've made it clear how the course differs from the one in it).