Chen Wentian winced again and again as he let himself but subject to Wu Qianyu’s touch and her random whims. He gave detailed feedback on how he felt, how deeply the pain penetrated, and how much of it was blocked by spiritual energy. It was a painful teaching moment but he wouldn’t choose anyone else to do it in his place.
The bonus of the situation was that he was able to get her to touch him all over his half-naked body. She was usually a very passive lover. Even though she was loving and sincere, she was reserved in her conduct in public and even more shy in bed. It felt great to have her be the one to take the lead for once.
“Ouch…” He mumbled as her hands grazed his stomach.
“Are you alright?” She asked, rubbing the spot above his navel gently as if to make the pain go away faster.
She was concentrating on her task and she looked so delectable. His little dragon was already starting to awake and just need a little push.
“Try here…” He said and moved her hand lower.
She focused on her task with a serious expression, not noticing how close her hand was to the growing tent in his underwear. She summoned her powers once again and dragged her index finger across his skin.
He pretended to feel pain but his spiritual energy had returned. He grabbed her hand to stop her. He winked at her and moved her hand lower.
“This place needs a little attention.”
“This…” She blushed furiously as she finally realized.
She gripped his shaft and gave a firm handshake to his little dragon, which jerked up and roared with approval.
Both of them were thinking of the same thing, their training session was already forgotten. It was a natural act between lovers. Being in such close proximity for a few hours, it was a minor miracle they lasted this long.
“Master…” Wu Qianyu said uncertainly.
“That’s good, love.” Chen Wentian encouraged her with a smile.
She nodded and rubbed his erection with a little more certainty. Her hands were soft and yet firm at the same time.
He wondered briefly what would happen if she started using her pain energy on his stuff. He quickly swept the thought away and shuddered slightly. It sounded too crazy, even for him…
“Are you okay?” She asked, noticing it.
“Mmmm, good!” He rubbed her hips and removed her thin gown with his spiritual energy, revealing her full glory to his insatiable eyes.
He drank in the sight of her naked body, her hand clutching his cock, her thin black bush barely peeking out between her milky white thighs, her round globes that dropped down due to their weight and the reddish-pink nipples that were starting to harden.
He traced an invisible trail up her slender neck to her stunning smile and her bright brown eyes. She was so beautiful. She was his woman and she was going to love him all night long.
He slapped her thigh with a grin, “Come, you’re the one in charge tonight.”
“Me?” She asked, blushing again.
“You can do it.” He gripped his shaft and shook it teasingly, “Come here, ride me.”
“Okay…”
Her face became an adorable mask of concentration as she thought about how to properly go about the task. She finally decided on the strategy as she scooted up on her knees and then straddled his waist.
“Oh!” She gasped as his erection rubbed against her inner thigh.
“Do it, baby.” He whispered.
She listened to his words and lowered her hips. She gently tugged on him to get into position, to line up his cock head against the gate of her womanhood.
She sank down a centimeter and groaned softly. He felt the hint of warmth and jerked his hips upward to seek more.
She moaned some more as she found the right angle and finally let her weight fall down, sinking him into her depths.
“Ohhhhhh!” Wu Qianyu let out a relieved sigh as if she had accomplished a great task.
She was hot, she was wet, and she was very tight inside. His cock was enveloped in her velvety folds. Her weight pressed him deep inside.
Her thighs wrapped around his waist. Her hands were on his chest as she panted, trying to get her bearings. This caused her breasts to swing freely before his eyes and they were irresistible.
Chen Wentian reached up with both hands and found her nipples. He caught the two pink nubs with his fingers and tweaked them.
“Wentian!” She cried out in complaint.
He chuckled, “Ride me, fuck me.”
Those words sent a shudder of excitement through her body. Her skin flushed with desire and she finally started to move her hips.
Up and down, she gyrated her hips, dragging his cock in and out of her sopping wet pussy. Her tight folds clung to his shaft, unwilling to let him go, as she pulled up. When she came back down, his hardness parted her insides like a fiery spear, piercing her flesh and touching her core.
He encouraged her by pinching her nipples in sync with her thrusts. As he pinched harder, she rode him with even more desperation. He was thoroughly enjoying the moment, this rare moment where she was on top.
At some point or another, Wu Qianyu finally fell down on him. Her breasts pressed into his chest. Their lips connected as passion flowed through them. He missed her tender, shy kisses and he showed her as much love as he could with his tongue.
Simultaneously, he took over most of the work where they were still connected at the hips. He started thrusting upward, driving his cock at a new angle, fucking her hard and fast until he drove her senseless.
“Ahhhhh, Wentian… I’m coming… AhhhH!”
She clutched the pillows, the sheets, his shoulder, anything she could get a hold of as her orgasm arrived unexpectedly. Her pussy twitched uncontrollably around his dick while her whole body shook from the ordeal.
When she finally came to again, Chen Wentian had flipped them onto her back. He was on top again, nestled firmly between her legs and ramming his cock into her pussy energetically.
“Ohhh!” She moaned, still sensitive from the orgasm.
“You like that?” He asked, “You have to fuck me hard… like you want it!”
Her incoherent moans only urged him to go faster. She was beyond wet, she was overflowing. He slammed his hips against hers as a steady slapping noise filled the room.
He felt his own orgasm building and didn’t try to stop it.
“Qianyu… I’m going to come.”
She moaned in approval, wrapping her legs around his waist.
“You want me to come inside you?”
She clutched his neck and kissed him hard. He knew she wanted it and he wanted it too. He clutched her soft ass and plunged even deeper inside her.
His balls twitched and the muscles in his groin shook. His orgasm came like a tidal wave, sweeping over his body. His cock jerked inside her pussy, spraying copious amounts of white-hot essence until she was filled to the brim.
She felt all of it, including the searing heat that was spreading inside her, the evidence of his love. It was unbearably sexy and she quickly came again with her own orgasm to match his…
The pair hugged each other in the afterglow, their hips still connected. She didn’t want to lose his simmering heat. He was looking forward to another round and didn’t want to leave.
“I’m sorry for not being able to finish on top like you wanted.” She said softly, her head burrowed into the crook of his neck.
Her efforts at taking charge were adorable but she still lacked experience as well as stamina in that area. Compared to his more passionate lovers, she wasn’t quite there yet.
“You did great.” He praised her. “Don’t worry about it!”
He meant it. She was unique in her own way so it didn’t matter. He loved her all the same and her simply listening to his words and trying was enough.
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Thanks for the chapter!
Shouldn't the word supposed to be 'cum' instead of 'come'?
Anyways, thanks for the chapter.
that's dirty. LOL. jk. i dunno. That word also gets censored on webnovel and its 'obviously' smutty word.
No, both are fine.
I love the story, but we need a time skip / faster pacing.
hmmm. not really sure if that is possible. Which storyline are you interested in?
@Kirbyisgreen I'm more interested in the progression of the sect in general. The path of cultivation is long, I feel like too many chapters were spent on the tournament arc. We're at chapter 357, and how many years have passed in the story? Feels kinda slow. I've read a couple other stories, that by this time are 5 - 10 years in. There's actual time progression. We're 473.3k words in and there still soo sooo much more that is going to happen.
Love the story though.
@Technoblade
In terms of total time, it is around 2years + a few months since the first chap. For progression of the sect in general, I can see several matters, Chen Wentian's personal cultivation progress, each disciple's cultivation progress, and finding more disciples. In terms of 'general' progression, there is Ten Thousand Flower Valley's status in the subcontinent. Currently it is 1st among Spirit Lord sects but still cannot compete with Spirit King sects.
There are quite a few plot threads that are going on at the same time, hence a bit of a scattered focus in this most recent arc. There's Jasmine's revenge against Beast God Sanctum. There is Long Yifei's upcoming schooling at the Virtuous Order. There is the sword competition... as well as something new I have already added into this current arc.
I agree that all of it probably does feel a pretty slow.
I don't have a good solution... except to write more, which I am trying to do since I finished my second book and am focusing on this book for the moment.
But let me know if u have more ideas, like if one or more particular story line is uninteresting, I want to hear it. Critical feedback is important :P
@Kirbyisgreen thanks for taking the time to reply, I really appreciate it. I really like all the story lines, but i do hope that the sword tournament is not as long as the previous tournament arc. It sorta grew monotonous and could've been a lot shorter if you didn't go into as much detail for everything.
i think I remember reading that the Mc plans for his disciples to become immortals before 30. That's a long way for some of his younger disciples, probably quite a few years left for some of them. For the sect to grow stronger, and the story to not get extremely long, the disciples need power boosts, which is sorta forced and not the best option. Hence why i suggest time skips since the story is only 2ish years in and a few more years at this pace will be millions of words. Time skips are important because the current subcontinent is the tip of the iceberg in terms of power lvl and there's so much to explore.
I think you could describe what happens between main arcs, over 1 - 6 months of world time, in a few chapters. This way, you keep the story lines and have time progression. The story lines will allow you to write what you want and the time skips will allow you to progress with the world as a whole. This way, we won't have to wait for another half a million words for his some of his disciples to become immortals. The lvls of his disciples will rise a little every time skip.
I also really hope you add some sorta of time stamp for in world time for every chapter, it'll help keep track of how long it's been. I've been reading this novel on and off for quite a while now and it'd be helpful to know how much time has passed since the story started.
Again, thanks for writing this story, you are doing a great job. ❤
No we don't need any time skips or faster pacing. One very nice arc was slaughtered because some readers wanted faster and didn't want any characterization of the harem. It is very nice that author is building characters other than MC. There are lot of chineses novels where side characters or even MC are so shallow that they are not 2 dimesional but 1 dimesional. @Technoblade if you want something like this go look for other work and not make the author destroy this nice pacing of this story.
Thanks for chapter
Edit: Also it is nice to see how the sect is building up. In mamy novels IT is like: "MC build or ordered others to build the sect. The end of arc".
@Mikss
Hmmm. are you referring to the golden feather hunt? in the previous arc.
Yeah, that was also partly my fault. Sometimes feedback can reinforce some things I am already feeling and I wasn't really feeling it with the golden feather hunt... it was a little bit too scattered for me.
@Technoblade
But in terms of the growth of each disciple. I don't think I can pull of something like 'and then they became immortals' kind of major timeskip.
But smaller timeskips are possible. I think after Jasmine gets her revenge and Chen Wentian becomes a Spirit King, we can have a smaller timeskip so that I don't have to cover every minute detail of the disciples cultivation. We'll see.
As for the immortal before age of 30 thing, that was just a hope and a dream, but since his disciples are so OP, it probably will happen LOL.
@Kirbyisgreen Your pacing is just fine. Personally imreally enjoying that we get to follow ong with the character growth of all of the characters. The 0 to uber may work for some but it's boring. I especially enjoy how even though there's always a bigger fish they get through it with guile and planning.