Why I am taking a break?
Well, I just want to begin by saying that my grammar is trash(as some of you may have noticed) and I've been seeing quite an improvement to it these past few months, so I wanted some time off to proofread all the next chapters and fix some weird wordings or two so I can give you all a better read.
I feel bad to leave you all hanging for a week like this so I am going to attach a preview of the Vol 2 cover here in this post! Can anybody guess who is the character in the cover? Let me know what you think about it! Also please leave me a comment or two about your thoughts on the story so far!
PS: For those of you who really can't wait for a week, the next two chapters are already on my Patreon together with the full CG image of the cover. But please don't force yourself or anything.
Harbin?! She looks so kyuute!!
Oh! It's a fangirl. I mean a Harbin.
I like the story so far but there is just one little detail that I don't personally like and it is Klauna's alcoholism. I know fiction is not reality but sometimes I just wish it wasn't played for laughs.
Well its not really all for laughs its an escape for Klauna, she joined the army wishing to die but she became an officer and got her own subordinates, she didn't wish for her death to kill them so she tries her best to keep them alive, without them she would have let herself be killed by some more powerfull then avarege human
Klauna suffers from some form of depresion and she is suicidal, drinking and making sure her subordinates are safe is how she kept going for a while, now with the others taking all the alcohol she finds she focuses most of the time planing for the safty of the 7th army
(Apologies for my lacking english, and if i got some things wrong that how mostly i see and understand how Klauna works)
So that's how Blackmask truly looks like...
Been loving the story by the way! Especially Klauna and all the friendship in the Seventh Army.
Thanks for the heads up! Take your time, and relax a little as well.
Thanks for the cover!
Oh god Harbin is too cute!! I imagined her with black hair caugth in a ponytail and with glasses but she looks way better like this
Did you HAVE to make Harbin look so adorable?! CUTE
tfta