“Ko-chan! Breakfast is ready!”
The melodious voice came from a dark-haired woman carefully preparing a rice-based breakfast while humming to herself. She was lightly dressed, in nothing more than a vest and shorts, and her long hair that came down to her knees. Framed by short bangs was her pale face which held a gentle smile. Her eyes were white with a violet tinge and pupil-less. The Byakugan.
Suddenly, when the door was slid open, a young boy emerged, no older than five with messy black hair, yawning into his hands and rubbing the sleep from his eyes.
“Mornin’ Obasan.”
Sleepily, he ambled over to her, where she was engrossed in arranging the food on the plates, and wrapped his arms around her waist from behind. She twisted around and lightly chopped his head with the side of her hand.
“It’s onee-chan, not obasan!”
“But you are my auntie, even if you’re not old?”
“Doesn’t matter. I’d like you to call me onee-chan so that’s what you’ll call me. Understood, Kojirō?”
The young boy nodded in response.
“Brilliant! Now, go sit down at the table. I’ll bring over breakfast now.”
Kojirō reluctantly released his embrace from around his ‘onee-chan’. He strolled over to the other side of the wide room and kneeled down next to the low table. The aroma of the freshly cooked breakfast wafted throughout the space and entered his nose.
After yawning once again, his eyes wandered upwards stopped when he gazed at the back of his ‘onee-chan’
Nanami Hyūga.
A member of the esteemed Hyūga clan as well as his caretaker. A chūnin-level kunoichi and the youngest daughter of the previous clan head.
After Kojirō’s mother, Nanami’s only sister, was found dead while cradling him in the forests outside of Konoha she had been the one tasked with his upbringing. The circumstances of his mother’s passing were unknown even to higher members of the Hyūga clan. Although, it was no secret she had been secretly meeting a man, an immigrant no less, in the later hours of the night.
It was presumed that he was the product of the regular trysts that they partook in. However, being the grandson of the ex-clan head, as well as the nephew of the current one, he was still accepted into the clan.
This was regardless of the fact that he had a mutated Byakugan that was tinted gold instead of violet. After he was found the clan was dumbfounded by his eyes and some even questioned whether they were even still the Hyūga’s signature dōjutsu. That opinion was subverted, however, when Kojirō managed to awaken his Byakugan at abnormally early age.
The golden eyed boy was pulled from his trance when his bowl was placed in front of him.
“Eat up Ko-chan.”
He replied with a grateful smile and placed his hands together in a prayer. Using his chopsticks, he ate the rice leisurely while Nanami peered at him from across the table with her head in her hands.
The young boy was mature for his age. He had long since awoken his Byakugan and was quickly advancing in his Jūken1*Gentle Fist training. The distinct seriousness and discipline that was present within him was unmistakably a veteran’s, yet it came from a five-year-old child. He was nowhere short of a prodigy.
And he’s pretty cute.
“What’s the matter Nanami-nee-chan?”
The sudden question startled the chūnin as she realised she had been caught staring and slightly blushed. With a cough, she began eating her breakfast.
The light breakfast was slowly eaten by the pair with sparse conversation in between. Together, they washed the dishes and Kojirō readied for the Ninja Academy.
He had already gone for a year and in that time skipped his first year and was now in the middle of his third. At this rate, he was bound to become a genin in the next year or two.
After a quick shower, he dressed himself in a black long-sleeve turtleneck overlaid with a baggy light grey t-shirt that bore the Hyūga insignia on the back. He wore dark grey shorts and the standard open-toed ninja sandals in blue.
Quickly, he gazed into the mirror, checking his appearance. He was pale-skinned and had a small mole underneath his right eye. His forehead was covered by his messy, black hair and he had long eyelashes.
Was Nanami staring at me earlier?
He swiftly checked his status.
- Makes any target the user might be interested in be interested in the user in return.
- Grants the skill Seduction [LVL 10].
- Grants the skill Sexual Prowess [LVL MAX]
It might have been this skill? Its a shame I've not had a chance to use the bonus skills that came with it though.
He sighed and closed the status screen. He headed to the gate of the Hyūga Compound through the open sliding door in his bedroom. Unsurprisingly, Nanami managed to catch up with him and forcibly thrusted out a moderately sized black box.
"Bentō. For lunch." She leaned down and kissed his forehead, "Have fun and be safe!"
Kojirō enthusiastically nodded his head in affirmation. Briskly, he turned around and leapt at the opposing wall landing on the ledge at the top. Giving one final wave to Nanami he sped off in the direction of the academy.
Mei terumi, tsunade, Konan, kurenai ,Shizune , Yugito Nii, Yūgao Uzuki ,karui ,fuka (she was short-lived though) and maybe even kaguya lol ? those are some badass women who can be made haremites
Btw orochimaru can be gender bend too as even in anime he posed himself as woman and man both on many occasions ?
We’ll see
I hope konan will be part of harem.
And i hope MC can save and rescue pakura.
Possibly
Also I'm not sure if Anko will work because she is like half his age probably? Mei is a good choice, maybe an uzumaki since the clan should still exist atm.
Good shout actually
This is pretty good so far. As for Harem candidates it depends on what kind are you going for. Are you going for one that is as big as possible? Or one with a select few individuals? Since he is close in age with the Sannin Tsunade is an obvious choice, not only is she beautiful but her medical skill is extremely impressive.
Also I would consider positing this story on fanfiction.net because I think it will quickly gain many more reviewers and followers there. This website is kinda obscure.
Yeah, she’s a definite. In terms of size, probably about 5, 10 max.
Thanks for the advice. :)
incest wincest
Please keep it strictly sibling love, not in the harem pls.
For the harem I have always liked Kurenai Yuhi and Anko in Naruto. I have always found that they are underrated for the females in the anime.
For summons I'm not sure on your ideas for combat wise. I do not think birds and owls are strong for combat and the mc being a ninja I think fighting ability would be a big issue. Now if he just had this deal with one side animal, like the third with the monkey king or Kakashi with his dogs, then sure a bird would be nice to go with for travel but I think you are going with something more large scale like the toads, snakes, and slugs.
If we are using current Naruto animals I would think snakes or lizards would be best. Both are scaled and poisonous and could go somewhat with his boiling water move. If my memory is right some ninjas could tweak that move to make it more like an acid mist or acid water attacks. On the other hand I do not think birds would go with this. Most birds can not fly as well if they get wet. If he is fighting in an acid mist would his summons be able to help at all? Would they be able to see in the mist? Would the acid burn their feathers and make them lose the ability to fly?
If I was the Mc and was thinking of the perfect animal to pick I would choose scorpions. Think about how effective they would be in battle. Multiple sharp legs, armored body, two sharp claws, and a tail stinger. They are poisonous as well and could probably dig themselves underground to do sneak attacks. With our knowledge of the toads we know that they can be in all shapes and sizes. Giant freaking scorpions!!!
Yeah, those are some good suggestions to consider.
I’ll probably do a poll in one of the coming chapters to see more people’s opinions :)
@CrystallineSphinx
Thats just me personally though. I always imagine myself in these situations and think what I would do or how to build my power. For example I always thought I would choose lightening, water, and wind and try to find a way to combine them. Make a thunderstorm in the middle of a battle with heavy rainfall and strong winds. Fight my enemies inside of it where they can't see because of the rain. The strong wind would confuse them from the wind blades I fire and at some points the random lightening going off wouldn't be random.
One of the main things I like about your story is the unique combinations you currently have. The Byakugan and the boiling water I think would make a good combo if you could find a way for the mc to resist the acid mist. Find a way for him to resist or just take very little damage from it and fight enemies inside of it. With his byakugan he might be able to see inside of it, if his eyes can be opened in the mist, and he would have a high advantage in it. Throw in a scorpion hidden underground waiting to use claws to grab an enemies' legs and then stab them with its tail and you have a dangerous ninja.
For other summon ideas I usually think small and poisonous since that is kind of a theme in the main four so maybe spiders or wasps as well. Could do a pack animal like wolves as well but they don't really fit into the theme mentioned above. Anyway its your novel so do what you like and what fits your mc. The mc is a military man with knowledge of the upcoming wars.
Pakura and Yugito Nii
Good work with the novel
Maybe.
And thanks :)
Not sure how ages will come into play but mabui, samui, actress from the first movie, and priestess from the demon country movie.
Personally I'd say keep away from incest unless your going to really flesh out the characters, personalities, and reasons for such relationships.
Keep up the good work :)
Good suggestions, thanks for the advice
maybe karin, yugito as jinchuuriki,yugao uzuki :)
could work