School is boring, it is what the young man thought he did not like to attend, because he did not have much to learn because his memory was perfect, he does not forget even if he wanted to.
His name was Ryuu. He was very antisocial and handsome although he didn't care about his eyes and hair were obsidian blacks who seemed to absorb the light, which with his personality gave him a gloomy atmosphere. He didn't like interacting with others. He thought it was a waste of time.
but the girl who is her neighbor didn't care, he stayed with him quite often, the young man simply ignored her.
One day, Ryuu found the math class so boring that he fell asleep.
When he woke up, he noticed that he was in a different place perched on an altar, noticed the bodies of his unconscious companions around him like puppets thrown, decided to wait at the altar pretending to be unconscious.
Soon people came dressed in pure white with a hood covering their faces, in a few seconds their companions began to wake up in panic when they saw they were at an altar.
"WELCOME"
A deep and calm voice echoed in the altar chamber, which led the students to look, where that voice rose and they saw an old man in his 60s with a white robe embroidered in pure gold, his aura was solemn, That silenced the agitation.
(That old man at first sight looks like someone important)
Ryuu thought he watched the place closely while the old man continued his speech.
"Heroes, please calm their minds, we have called you because our world is threatened by the Demon King, I ask the brave heroes to help us defeat him so that peace in our kingdom."
(That's very cliché hahahaha)
Ryuu thought he was a big fan of the light novels of fantasy themed video games, which he thought was funny.
"Wait a moment please"
The voice that sounded belonged to a handsome young man named Hibiki, quite the opposite of Ryuu.
If Ryuu was dark, Hibiki was light, he was very sociable and participated in a class that led him to be very popular, and it always bothered Ryuu to participate and be sociable, so Ryuu detested him.
"We have nothing to do with this world, please return us to our world. We have families waiting for us."
The other students agreed with his words and exploded in words of approval, but Ryuu didn't care 10 years after his 16 years, he lost his parents in a fire that caused a scar on his back, his uncles adopted him, Although they did. They did not give him love, they did not get into his affairs that led him to have a certain degree of freedom.
"Sorry, young heroes, but that's impossible since there is no way to return them"
The old man's words made the faces of the students pale, so he continued speaking.
"First let me introduce myself, my name is Salomon and I am the POPE of the sacred kingdom Aura, one of the 5 kingdoms led by 5 of the 6 races"
(5 of the 6 races? What are they? And why is one of them missing?)
Ryuu thought at all times, what seemed strange was the last race excluded
"So I promise you that when you defeat the demon king, you will raise the glory and treasures that surpass your imagination"
The silent students suddenly shouted with happiness upon hearing the rewards, Hibiki was no exception, his eyes were full of longing since he could not return, it would be better to make a profit.
The moment someone raised his hand, that someone was none other than Ryuu.
"Sorry, I don't want to help with your homework"
Those simple words left everyone in shock. No one believed anyone said those words.
Old Salomon was no exception
"W-Why young hero?
His words were shaking I didn't believe what he heard
"I have no interest in risking my life for people I don't even know, so excuse me, I'm leaving here"
Everyone in the room who looked at him with surprise, there was a different look when he found the root saw that it was his neighbor Himari did not know how to describe his look was something strange.
"Since this hero does not want to participate, he will not be forced, however, since we brought him here it would be rude not to give him any compensation."
Salomon said smiling in a pure way, but Ryuu could feel a bit of malice in her.
"Give him 100 gold coins !!"
Salomon shouted when a more secure servant of the church approached and handed him a bag with Ryuu coins when he received it, he turned around without looking at anyone and left the temple being led by the servants.
Reads like it's either a machine translation or written by someone who hates the English language
sorry for my limited english
@ISBETER you could try using the free version of grammarly. It is by no means perfect but it helps
Especially
I don't want to help with your homework
I'm too not English but it burn my eyes
The problem is that in Spanish the verbs usually appear without subject pronouns. If you are doing machine translations I suggest you you always use the pronouns in Spanish, so instead of habla, él habla, or ella habla. if you just do habla, you might get he or she speaks. Another problem is going to be for example "su coche" either her car or his car, it would be better to write el coche de él or de ella if you want to use machine translation. The best thing still is to just check what comes out, using the wrong word does not hinder too much the understanding, however wrong pronouns are extremely confusing.
Hello, I'm sorry, I wanted to do the prologue of a publication chapter since I wanted it to be fast hehehe, by the way, this is reincarnation, so the RPG elements come maybe in part 2 or in chapter 1 goodbye In case of doubt I will upload 2 per week
Me in this situation : "Oh Pope. I don't care about your shitty cliché story. In our world there is a lots of books about human who get summoned. But in a lot of them, the summoner have either a shitty personality, lie to the summoned to manipulate them."
Pope : "Its only in a book, this is reality"
Me : "Maybe not. Maybe its not "reality" but a book too. We will maybe never know that. But I prefer being wary of you. And this world is a world where I can do my dream. You can think of this as blasphemy but I want to be a God. Especially a non-human god. So I don't want to waste my life to save this country inhabitants. Except if it can make me stronger. But it will create an extreme mess for the demon race so even then, I refuse."
Pope " what ?!"
Me : "And I would give an advice if this world is like these books world. Human are, in almost every world, the worst race. Bye."
Class : "Wtf was that ?"
rule #1 of isekai- don't blindly believe the words of the first person you meet, especially if said person is the one who kidnapped you in the first place
Or you can make that to your advantage. You take their money and do training and after that, you leave.
Arriba España!!
Here you go, I wrote this and it might help you with your pronouns:
Pronombres de español a íngles
yo = I
tú = you
él = he
ella = she
Usted = you (gente dice "you" por el singular y el plural en íngles, pero muchas personas dicen "you guys" o "you all" también por el plural, pero "you guys" y "you all" son muy informal)
nosotros = we
vosotros (España) = "you guys" (muy informal, pero la gente dice esta frase mucho) o simplemente "you"
ellos / ellas = they
Ustedes = "you guys" o "you all" (muy informal, no hay muchos pronombres formales en íngles) o simplemente "you"
Thanks
Don't feel too bad about your English skills. I didn't know how difficult it was for a non-native speaker of English to learn it until I started to learn other languages. English spelling and pronunciation is pretty inconsistent (it's not a phonetic language, where the way that you write it is not the way that you pronounce it). You can thank the Normans for that lol, since they conquered England in 1066 and made everybody to speak French which mixed with the proto-English back then and eventually developed into the English that we know today. French is also not phonetic, you tend to not pronounce the ending of words. Sometimes, some of the tenses for certain English don't even exist, that's why you have to subsitute it with a different verb. For example, the past tense of the modal verb "must", it doesn't exist, therefore one has to substitute "had to", have to" and "have had to" for it. In German, the past tense for the modal verb müssen (must) is musste (preterite), hat gemusst (perfect past) and hatte gemusst (plusquamperfect), but they all have spelling similarities to the base verb.
Anyways, you could always try to immerse yourself in the language to try to practice your skills. Some ways to do it are to look for music, songs, stories, or shows that are in the language and use them to practice your skills. That's what I did when I was learning German. Just don't pick something that uses a lot of archaic or elevated language when you're first starting out.
Anyways, I'll use this as an opportunity to practice my bad Spanish skills and give you some English-language suggestions to practice your English in Spanish lol. They're in the box because I don't wish to clutter up the comment section. Sorry for any mistakes with my Spanish, my German is way better than my Spanish to be honest.
Here are some songs to help you practice your English, but I wrote it in Spanish to try to avoid misunderstandings:
La primera recomendación es una banda musical de Suecia. Se llama Sabaton. Ellos cantan en inglés y la mayoría de sus canciones es sobre la historia del mundo. La gente puede aprender acerca de historia de sus canciones. Música épica y historia = Sabaton básicamente. Quién son algunas canciones de esta banda musical.
"Carolus Rex" es una canción sobre el monarca sueco Karl XII. Él subió al trono a la edad de 15 años. El fue el monarca de Suecia de 1697 a 1718. Porque él era muy joven unos pocos naciones como Rusia y Dinamarca tomó parte en una guerra con Karl XII, pero Karl XII defendió Suecia con éxito. Pero él era además un fanático religioso y era un poco loco probablemente, porque él creyó que Dios lo eligió para gobernar. Él era un general exitoso en el campo de batalla pero Karl XII subrió una derrota del Zar Peter (el monarca de Rusia) en la batalla de Poltava.
El enlace a la canción "Carolus Rex" en íngles:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Us2ylGAwBnk
Hay una versión de la canción "Carolus Rex" en sueco también (con subtítulos en íngles):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHeRnaWMtDk
Esta video tiene la letra de la canción "Carolus Rex" en íngles y en español. No sé si la traducción es buena:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QCcsZQFrF6Y
"Poltava" es una canción sobre la derrota del monarca de Suecia Karl XII en la batalla de Poltava.
El enlace a la canción "Poltava" en íngles:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rt2g5hoUzHI
La canción "Poltava" en sueco (con subtítulos en íngles) :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dcfIoDDk2SA
Esta video tiene la letra de la canción "Poltava" en íngles y en español:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uSps3F58Jo4
"The Price of a Mile" (El precio de una milla) es una canción sobre la Primera Guerra Mundial. Esta canción es triste, pero ella describe la desesperanza de la guerra.
El enlace a la canción "The Price of a Mile":
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BEY7Ton1gO4
"Great War" (Gran Guerra) es una otra canción sobre la Primera Guerra Mundial.
El enlace a la canción "Great War":
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5mt4B5Z8uLA
Una otra banda musical que canta acerca de la historia del mundo. La banda musical se llama Serenity. Quién son algunas canciones.
"Iniquity" (Iniquidad) es una canción sobre Leonardo da Vinci que era un artista y científico muy importante de Italia.
El enlace a la canción "Iniquity":
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BSxoNrjt7Us
"Sprouts of Terror" es una otra canción sobre Leonardo da Vinci.
El enlace a la canción "Sprouts of Terror":
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j42Sel4TC0g
Quién son otras cancionen pero no quiero escribir demasiado pero mi español es malo.
"The Maid of Orleans" (La Doncella de Orleans" de Dark Moor. Esta canción es acerca de Juana de Arc (Jeanne d' Arc en francés). Esta video de la canción tiene la letra en íngles y en español.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T4TKMAPxRgE
"Destiny" (El destino) de Stratovarius. Esta video de la canción tiene la letra en íngles y en español.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3d7HW4Z7qvg
"The Mystic Prophecy of the Demonknight" de Rhapsody of Fire. Rhapsody of Fire es una banda musical que canta sobre la literatura fantástica.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JUmtBwrJYXY
So, how's my Spanish? Pretty bad, right? Sorry for my bad Spanish, but I just wanted to explain things clearly without being misunderstood. Anyways, try listening to those songs and see if your English skills get better for you to write your story better.
His Spanish is quite good in reality, however, it should cost me less to learn English since Spanish is the second most difficult, I am very grateful with your help
I wanted to upload it to a Spanish-speaking page, but there wasn't a good one like this
I killed myself to make it sound more or less with so many words that mean the same thing
I can't wait for more!