'What...the...fuck?'
Alright, so you're telling me, that because of a slipup on your end, my personality will have a slight chance at changing?
A SLIGHT CHANCE!?
It's already begun to change, so how can that be a slight chance of a change in personality?
Either I'm just incredibly unlucky, or the old universe lied.
If it lied to me about the chances of change in personality, the excuse would be horrible; "As I said, I'm not all-knowing."
Something along those lines would probably be the best excuse that old sack of nothingness could come up with.
But, although I'm angry at the slipup made by the old universe, I can't really say it's unexpected either.
Everyone makes mistakes, even those with incredible power.
Some people just have more chances to fix that mistake, like me.
I have incredibly many chances to fix a mistake, as I can just start over with what caused the mistake. (A/N translation: I have incredibly many chances to destroy the mistake, and then start over once again.)
No one's perfect.
Being perfect is just boring.
You know why?
Because if you're perfect, nothing new will happen in life.
Nothing unexpected will happen, and no changes will sneak into your life.
You have everything already, so what else can you get?
What else can you do?
Alright, sidetracking again!
Change of personality.
Could there possibly be a temporary solution to this problem?
Something that could prevent my personality from changing too much?
I'd better check, just in case.
*Flipping through pages sound effects*
Ah, here it is.
Page 119: Temporary solutions, Change in personality
There are no temporary solutions to this problem.
Discover it at own risks.
Sometimes I'm beginning to believe that this is just one big joke.
How can a universe be this lazy, unproductive and carefree?!
Even when you made a slipup, you didn't even bother to try and find a temporary solution to the problem?!
You didn't even try to actually help me, except telling me to get more powerful?
It's like you want my personality to change!
You may or may not have noticed why I'm angry.
If my personality really is changing for the worse, and I get more and more powerful over time, then at one point, I'd perhaps become some psycho that enjoys watching billions, if not trillions of life forms being killed in front of my eyes!
That's something I'd rather not become.
That would basically spell the doom of the universe (me) if I wanted war, bloodshed and death everywhere!
No life forms would be able to live their actual lives...though the 4 galaxies won't be able to do that either way.
But, at least it won't be the entire population of the universe that's constantly forced to go to war because of my desires.
It's kind of sad really now that I think about it.
If possible I'd rather not become like that.
Which in turn means, I either have to try and suppress the urge to watch wars unfold, which is beginning to show, or find a temporary solution that will stop my personality from changing for the worse for enough time in order for me to become powerful enough to fix this problem entirely.
Chapter-ly "joke":
All the kids entered the helicopter, except Bella, she climbed into the spinning propella. (A/N: Propella = Propeller. Had to change it to make it fit the extremely gruesome "joke". Sorry, Bella. Again. Perhaps I'm too cruel to you.)
Also, if you guys like BNHA (Boku No Hero Academia) fanfics, you should check out Rotten Purity by @C.Sunlight, as it is extremely good: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/85689/rotten-purity/
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Could have all three honestly. Don't really need to limit yourself if you want.
Star devourer seems like it just wants to eat or otherwise destroy (sorta like the C'tan from Warhammer 40k?) considering stars are rather integral to life generally. Chaos worm wants chaos and birds of order want order. Would they be powerful individuals or species?
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Depends on the species. Star Devourers would probably be individually powerful, as there shouldn't be too many of them, as that would pretty much ruin the universe. Not really sure with the others though.
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@FlowerOfEternity No, I didn't see that coming.
Just to be clear guys, this friend is doing free advertising.
And also trying to embarrass me with high praise (and succeeding, darn it! It's not that good!)
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It is! It's an incredibly good and enjoyable read!
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Thanks for the chapter!
My friends and I have an injoke that worms don't exist.
The chapter was a bit rushed. Gonna edit it after coming back from a birthday party!
Honestly you could create a lot of spinoffs from this one, for example generic mc marries this mc. Another is the MC reincarnates but not as the universe she grows stronger and fights the universe, she wins so the universe gives her its power, that could be the prequel or she could remember it and a spinoff. You could also make it a split timeline with her fixing it and the change in personality is from her power, or other hers in different timelines. We could have something similar, but the universe fell in love with her, but being mad and insane for not having kidnaps her. Some hero saves the day and either reincarnates her as the universe the hero with or without memories. We could also have it so he becomes sane and builds a harme too with him always being sain or recovering. While we could also have her become insane and they either kill her, someone rescues her from insanity or goes back in time with her or without her fixing the mistakes, or making the mistakes for going insane. There is so many more, that is just the tip of the iceberg. While should could also make another universe or an intelligent galaxy like her but smaller scale. That could be evil, good, chaotic and so much more even a chunni galaxy! SInce the previous universe could create her she could now or in the the future and become the multiverse or even the omniverse! Looking forward to what you do author!
Ps. I had to type this twice I meant to hit shift w but hit ctrl w deleting the page, so I had to retype it. So there was a couple of changes to my ideas while some where the original ones I typed. Well these are as good as any so keep up the work author!
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I appreciate your feedback!
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You should kinda do like a multiverse, but instead a multigalaxy where it's space travel with advance technology. You could make a star devourer, but you should either make them/it be the strongest (besides the the MC). Though it is very lazy, or create one/them with an enemy of equal or greater level that either farms them, is but a bug similar to bugs to humans, or something of the sort. Since we already have two different species that fight each other, while also be of similar levels of powers, no need to make another.
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If it ends up being the Star Devourer that's chosen as a species to be implemented, then I'm am currently thinking of a counter to that race. Probably something like Glutton Beast or something, that simply eats what it finds, including Star Devourers. Not really sure though, as I'm still gonna think about what to counter what.
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@FlowerOfEternity You could also make another earth, then make them go through lets say 7 levels. Which are actual worlds, with other races being on each level/world and the 7th world you can do a competition to go to the library or something. Or on one of the flours a pass to go to the library. I want to see if anyone knows the book where this idea came from.
Hint: Ring
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Im playing stellaris and just killing everyone now i see a name for my Colossus
Thanks. I think someone perfect is just something that can do anything and be anything, but that doesn't mean it will be. Also it would be boring, furthermore "what is perfect". good luck for an headack. I still think being perfect is access to anything. that also means that there can only be one pefect being, because if something else is perfect than they aren't perfect compare to each other.
Btw, if universe Autumn-sama wants to be less bad(which we don't really care because no one is right, so if you want your opinion to be true, than you need to win against god, good luck) but for less "guilt" just create a force to enforce peace. But war that you can watch will continue to appear to entertain until peace happens and the law enforced. Everything is relative so universe think what you want, you can even be guilty, thats what is interesting. If you leav anything any time, bugs will appear, unless you are perfect.
Implement some vampires or undead races
All of them sound great but how about a giant turtle travelling in space randomly, just flying around and doing nothing, if someone attacks it's food time
Turtle of Creation..?
Dragon of Destruction..?
@FlowerOfEternity
tiger of order
vermilion bird of chaos
@StarEis
@FlowerOfEternity I think I heard something about big cosmic turtles that do divinations/future sight... Wise elder turtle
>Also she can create a race like watchers/titans (mech-like) to be her representatives and manage all kind of stuff (Like Akashic Library, Galaxy-level artifacts, etc)
>You can add Fate weavers & karmic concept into reincarnation system or so. It's not like you have to 'introduce' duality concept (their counterpart) every time you create a race or so.
>Affinities & some of basic fantasy races (ex. fire elementals, dragons, etc) also could be introduced.
>Cultivators & Heavenly Dao (That she is)
>Reincarnators/transmigrators from the past earth (new mcs?)
@nowayrage Everything from the past universe is gone
@FlowerOfEternity A turtle with a disc world on its back named Great A'Tuin.
You mean like the giant lion turtles from Avatar TLA.
That would be pretty dope
@FlowerOfEternity Yesssssss
@FlowerOfEternity World tortoise from terry pratchet with its own planet sitting atop four elephants standing on its shell