By Kaze_NG
Rina had a fairly normal childhood. However, it changed when she entered puberty, as she suddenly felt somewhat attracted to her twin sister. Unfortunately, her feelings towards her grew each day until they reached the state, where Rina feared tha
It's fine if this is a draft but..
I think my biggest issue is just.. Everything is so on-the-nose. The shrine in a foreign world is "Japanese style", katanas and kimono kitsune.
Also the characters we've met so far are just complete yes-men. "My young daughter brings home a barely dressed stranger who claims amnesia through a poorly rehearsed story? Well, no matter, you're basically my daughter now and you can stay in my guest chambers! Here, we'll even keep this legend making secret for you and let you run off with our young daughter, no questions asked!"
The story is, at least, not just filler for smut. Wishing the author luck on the rest of the story.
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Overall decent story so far. Though, the pacing is a bit too fast in my opinion... Otherwise, I recommend giving it a shot.
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