Strength is not representative of a creatures muscle strength, rather it increases muscle performance. Which strength is a measure of. It is not a linear boost, rather a formula y = 2x^2 +10. Y is the current stat. if the stat is below ten, then the correct formula is y = 2x+10. X is the current strength scale, at 1 you are one hundred percent stronger, at 2 two hundred percent stronger. These equations can be changed by feats or other ability's. Note however a creature that trains it's strength will not see a boost in the stat rather it will get more bang for the buck.
Jack's First User. She is a fiery red head who has dreams of being a Mage. Her brother was lost on a job for the Mission Guild. She has a Fire element connection. She is quick to get into relationships. Her mother's name is Christie, and step father is John.
Her Current Status is in the Spoiler.
User Name: |
Alexia |
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Race |
Stage 1 Magically Enhanced Human |
Bloodline |
Fire Elemental/Hidden Bloodline |
Age: 18 |
Lvl 8 |
HP 280/280 |
MP 340/340 |
Class |
Mage Lvl. 8 |
Exp 40/100 |
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Title: |
Trailblazer |
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Feats |
Heart of Fire Inferno |
Background |
Child of Fire. |
Attributes |
Strength 22 Constitution 28 Dexterity 24 Intelligence 34 Wisdom 26 Charisma 27 Luck 13 |
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Skills |
Basic Sword Fighting |
Lvl. 1 35/100 |
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Basic Tumbling |
Lvl. 2 35/100 |
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Flameshot |
Lvl.5 75/100 |
BD 25 + 22 |
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Flame Shield |
Lvl.4 10/100 |
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Examination |
Lvl 4.75 /100 |
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Lesser Renewal Flames |
Lvl 3 0/100 |
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Storm of Flames |
Lvl 4 20/100 |
BD 35 + 22 |
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Magical tattoos |
Lvl 1 0/100 |
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A Mercenary raised Orc. She was raised by humans and knows little of her Orc Heritage. She practices meditation. Currently she is in a relationship with Telvin.
If you can spot the easter-egg you get bonus points. Here is her current status.
User Name |
Riley Scarlet |
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Race |
Orc |
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Age 23 |
Level 13 |
HP 300/300 |
MP 150/150 |
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Feats |
Dancing Axe Presence Detection Tactical Advantage |
Background |
Mercenary Raised |
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Class |
Warrior LV. 13 |
Sub Class |
Manager of the Conflict |
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Title |
CalmBlade |
Exp 0/100 |
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Attributes |
Strength 40 Constitution 30 Dexterity 20 Intelligence 15 Wisdom 15 Charisma 15 Luck 14 |
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Skills |
Basic Axe Use |
LV 8 15/100 |
Crushing Blow |
LV 5 15/100 |
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Meditation |
LV 4 10/100 |
Charge |
LV 3 10/100 |
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Wardance |
LV 1 0/100 |
Aegis of Battle |
LV 1 -/- |
Jack is currently freaked out about Veronica and the sex act that happened. The relationship is on ice until Jack discovers what happened.
This is her current status.
User Name |
Veronica |
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Race |
Human |
Bloodline |
Spirit Sensitive |
Age 19 |
Level 7 |
HP 160/160 |
MP 120/120 |
Class |
Paladin (Deity Jack) |
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Title |
SystemDefender |
Exp 0/100 |
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Feats |
Zealous Follower Order of the System |
Background |
Obsessive Tendencies |
Attributes |
Strength 20 Constitution 16 Dexterity 14 Intelligence 14 Wisdom 14 Charisma 14 Luck 11 |
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Skills |
Basic Praying |
Lv.1 20/100 |
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Basic Sword Fighting |
Lv.5 0/100 |
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Turn Unsystem. |
Lv.2 0/100 |
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Monster capture |
Lv.5. 0/100 |
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Oral techniques |
Lv.4 0/100 |
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This... isn't good. It isn't well written. There are numerous grammar errors. There is inconsistent writing. While the initial promise is good -- the first few chapters have leveling, stats, quests, etc. -- after that there's none of that. It's just some powerless avatar wandering around confused, doing nothing, having badly written uninteresting s*x occasionally. It makes no sense -- the System is quite powerful at first, and nearly omniscient. However, as it "levels up", it actually gets much much less powerful and much less knowledgeable. Some of the characters the System empowers are interesting, but Jack himself as a character is completely uninteresting. I think the author just lost track of what he was doing with this story, and doesn't know what to do with the basic premise. It's too bad, because the story had some potential in the first few chapters.
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Initially good, but after a while I feel lilke everything in this world is for s*x or about s*x, everyone is doing s*x, all days, for the whole day, it's what looks like.
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This novel is a very solid implementation of the LITRPG theme. It's got the right balance between the stats and the story, the writing is transparent and easy to parse, while the story mostly flows along well. The only problem I have had with it, is multiplying points of view. Characters keep getting added as POV characters and it can and does break up what is otherwise a very good story flow.
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I don't know why it is getting his so hard by everyone the general quality of the story is a solid 4 stars.
It's a bit wierd in some places and it feels like it is pushing an agenda but It is a least easy enough to ignore the questionable parts.
Overall it is a decent enough read to keep me entertained for now.
It certainly has potential although I hope it doesn't get bogged down with all the drama too much there is room to do so much more with it after all.
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Not much for me to say that sable and Marcus said in their review it was good in the beginning but it seems like your to focused on s*x like so many novels on this site it was a good concept bad execution also to much filler used to pad out chapters getting back to the s*x thing to most of it seemed to be filler
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