By Erios909
In space, isolation is a slow killer. Company quickens the pace
Waking up adrift in an ancient battleground, Alex is left dazed and confused with no clue how she ended up trapped aboard a failing vessel. With only a mysterious voice in her
Didn't read all of it but I guess 38 chapters is enough to a half decent review maybe (I'm not good with reviews)
I really liked it the plot is unique in a way she's not all powerful but intelligent and uses it well but you have this one problem where you don't really give us a description of the MC or things around her, this would've been kinda fine if it's 1st person POV but it isn't, I mean it's kinda throw there and there at how she looks like but you'll forget it eventually I think.
Overall 4/5 and maybe when I read the rest I'll update my review lol.
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One of the best online novels I've ever read. Really enjoyable and for once I actually like all the side characters and their interactions in the world.
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After reading and reading things got more and more boring.
The main character, Jean only true strong point is her slightly above average IQ and computer-like mind. Feels like reading about iphone's "Siri" try to fix the star craft univers, where other character act stupid and illogical to make the MC seems smarter, even of all she does is taking the logical choice.
The true sadness here is that it could have been a very good book. The athour clearly knows how to writhe, but in the end chapters are stuffed with over-explenation of simple things, like; using a full chapter to inner monologe about whe 400 vs. 100000 is a bad idea.
The MC is so weak she ONLY relly on others to do all the fighting, action and heroic stuff, to the end only makes thing boring in the end.
With every fun way to build an MC in the star craft univers, you ONLY make her slightly smart and good with computers, so in the end someone Else always have to come and save the day.
The 1st arc makes the MC pointless and about the same or an Even better outcome would had happend without her Interference.
Sorry for sh*tting so much om the story, but have read over 100chapters in hope of seeing the MC progress in anyway, but ONLY left in dissepointment
The writhing in it self is good, the idea behind the story May have been brilliant, but the execution of the MC and overexplaining makes thing tidius boring to read.
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