Dale Mitchell, your average guy in a below-average job. But, what happens to him is anything but average. After hitting someone in his truck, his world was turned upside down, inside out, and more than fifty shades of grey.
Now, he seems to be something called a World Keeper, and must create and manage his own world. Is this his afterlife, or something else entirely?
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The whole keeper system is wonderfully designed and a well thought out idea. I find it quite enjoyable to read as things are developing for the characters. It does slow down a lot in the later chapters, but the quality of the writing is still remarkable. I will only assume that the current slow parts are all build up for a big event. I am hoping it happens soon though.
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Bravo! A very good start to a very good story! Needs ∞ more catgirls though.
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Story was good, entertaining, different, and a fun read. But all good things must come to an end and this happened at chapter 44 (for me at least). Let me start out by saying this,
the MC gets whipped.... HARD. This guy is the biggest pu$$y and just lets his girl boss him around. Heres some context, so he gets a companion off the bat and they have s*x right away after some minor explanations from her. Over the course of him progressing, Terra (the companion) continues to tell him to not have any girl other than her and always warns him and bullies him. Then he gives Ryone (elf goddess) conscience and she just takes Terra and she allows it to happen and the MC does f**king NOTHING about it. Also, the goddess of War and Peace (sh*t combo btw, MC chose this with 0 thought) Behilda or something like that just steps on the MC and he allows it like he wasnt the one that created her.
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Liked the premise, but the quality started to drop quite fast for me. The biggest problem for me is the MC, which makes it kind of hard to ignore. It's kind of the whole package I dont like about him, but I guess the most glaring issue I have is the way he interacts with his "creations". He just doesn't seem to think ahead and makes one blunder after the other, not learning from them. That he seems submissive to his own gods doens'r really help either in making him likeable...
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At first, I thought it would be a typical harem story, that exists more to satisfy the author's fantasy than the readers. I can't really point one exact thing, but the whole beginning just wasn't that great.
Fortunately, it got better. I think it's just the author getting better with each passing chapter, and it gets really good.
I usually hate it when the story takes the viewpoint of one character for just a chapter or two because you won't see them long enough to get attached so I'd rather follow more the characters I already know and love. But somehow, in this story, it is very well done.
Be warned though, the genre section says it's "Action" but there really isn't a lot of that. It's more fantasy slice of life where you get to see a world and its gods evolve through time.
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The premise is very interesting but is bogged down due to its mediocre execution. The main character and gods are nothing but simple tropes with very little thought, and my main gripe is that the main character never seems to really change or learn anything. He doesn't go all too much out of his way to learn what keepers can do, he doesn't really train all that much and is quite spineless. Also, despite learning multiple methods on how to build a world and win in these keeper game things (haven't read far enough), he doesnt give them any thought and stays with his, IMO - horrible world which functions very disorderly
Also the way he makes all the gods love him on the pretext of safety is ret*rded as he is an absolute power within his world and why would the gods disobey him anyway if the worlds destruction means more or less their own destruction.
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I've read 50 chapters... the making of this novel even seems to me at the Advanced level... actually I expect something like the Goddesses to have "POV parts" each that tell the point of view and what they think about Dale... I don't want forcing my advice to the Author I just gave my idea ?
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The story has an interesting concept but does nothing whit it and the MC is just plain boring. He is just plain dumb and does nothing to better himself and his world. The worst part is probably when the netorare comes in from when his companion basically cheats on him whit another of his companions.
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The premise was incredible but nothing was great was done with it. The MC does not interact with anyone except when he needs something for the world or he meets other keepers (and the conversations are just about how he can improve his world). Some of the ideas are just incredible but again the execution are terrible.
He made a world that has these layers and the people start in the middle and they work themselves outwards. The problem is he just doesn't do anything with it, it just becomes a side story basically
But the worst part are the Keeper Games, they are just plain boring, they get hyped up for more than a 100 chapters but after the first one, the whole novel just becomes this extremely boring preperation for the next invasion and that gets boring fast.
The only good invasion was when this game keeper invaded because his world/worlds was actually interesting and had an actually good system.
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Super Cliche with a douchebag mary sue MC.
There was a TON of potenial in this story, but it was all wasted.
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