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World Keeper
World Keeper
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Dale Mitchell, your average guy in a below-average job. But, what happens to him is anything but average. After hitting someone in his truck, his world was turned upside down, inside out, and more than fifty shades of grey.

Now, he seems to be something called a World Keeper, and must create and manage his own world. Is this his afterlife, or something else entirely?

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ActionAdventureComedyFantasyIsekaiLitRPGRomanceSlice of LifeSupernatural
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Alternate World Character Growth Dungeons Fantasy World Game Elements God Protagonist Goddesses Godly Powers Heaven Hiding True Abilities Hiding True Identity Jack of All Trades Kingdom Building Level System Magic Magic Formations Magical Technology Male Protagonist Monsters Multiple POV Overpowered Protagonist Parallel Worlds Second Chance Sword And Magic World Invasion
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      hullabaloo
      Status: c72
      Nov 6, 2019

      When I saw the description of the story, I immediately felt that this was right up my alley. Nation building, world building, guiding the planet to survive in a multiverse designed for conflict, all interesting things. However, 72 chapters in and it's devolved into a slice-of-life where the protagonist with power over the world just messes around, before slowly taking care of things that should have been resolved ages ago. For him to actually take action, it always has to become a problem for him to take care of it.

      The other issue that I have, is that his life is literally on the line since once the planet hits a certain point of development, other planets will begin to invade with the express intention of killing him. Given that bit of information, you would think that at least some of his time is spent attempting to figure out ways to strengthen people without raising their levels so that they punch above their weight class, but none of that happens. The last bit that I read through, he decided not to buy an additional planet because he didn't want to be overwhelmed, despite the fact that he barely does anything, and that he can completely halt the progression of time whenever he feels like it. Given that most of his time is spent staring at them and then skipping hundreds of years into the future, it doesn't make sense why he wouldn't want another planet to toss at the inevitable threat.

      Overall, the story starts with an interesting premise and the writing is solid with little in the way of errors, but it starts to fall flat the longer it goes on. The characters don't grow (half the gods don't get personalities until 70 chapters in) and little happens to break up the endless chats between the MC and the goddesses, and most frustrating for me, he doesn't actually do anything to build the world, outside of purchasing the occasional system addition. All that said, these are problems that are solvable, but I had hoped for more from that #1 all time most popular.

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      Shade7
      Status: chapter 364: i’m back
      Jul 22, 2019

      It's good. Worldbuilding is fun. (Big friend of world-building)

      However, I am now going to attack the weakest part of the story. The romance.

      The male lead is Dale, while the female lead is terra. Side female leads seem to be Ryona and Irena.

      And these characters do have chemistry, that is to be certain. Problem.

      Where is the intimacy? You have put a romance tag, but there is barely anything. It's a problem when this over 360 chapters long story has only one proper moment of intimacy between male lead and female lead.

      And there is also the fact that characters in this novel have s*x, but it's practically speaking non-existant. You barely even know that the male lead has even had s*x. That's in big part due to lack of intimacy. I mean hell when he conceived his daughter with Ryona's incarnation there was barely mention of any physical intimacy. At best we got the joke out of it.

      Can I get actual flirting, actual intimacy physical or emotional? Like I don't need you to write smut, but just enough so I can consider their relationship legit.

      Because right now I can only remember two intimate scenes. One is the date with Irene (if you f**ked that up, I'd swear to god), the other one is when Udona's fake memories are getting dealt with and Terra comes to Dale afterward and share a heartbreaking scene.

      So yeah, not a good sign when male lead and female lead have one intimate scene together.

      But thankfully that is fixable. Afterall those characters have romantic chemistry.  You just need the execution to actually happen.

      Honestly, this story is good just on worldbuilding and I am a guy who likes worldbuilding. Thus even if you never get to fixing this flaw, I would still continue reading it.

      Hopefully you keep the steady updates coming.

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