It's a good story overall, but in my opinion, there are like really big sections where Dale's just watching the world and/or adding new stuff to it. But in my opinion, the chapters with most influence till chapter 535 are probably the ones where he himself descended. As It's just my opinion, it may be totally different for other people though.

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rbuwsbebd

Status: 44

Jun 20, 2020

Great book, great writing and superb character development.

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FishEater

Status: c490

Apr 20, 2020

What can I say? It's just good. The MC just feels like a real person, despite now being a literal creation god. He makes mistakes, he learns from those mistakes.

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A great example is Bihenna (probably spelled wrong, but whatever) Up until he gave her a personality, he was utilizing love in order to keep his gods loyal, something that is pretty reasonable from the standpoint of both an average Joe and a self-proclaimed pervert. However, she realizes that her emotions are fake and gets pissed off at him, after all, who wouldn't get pissed realizing that they had love towards someone shoved into their head? However, she does eventually seem to truly love him, having deemed him worthy.

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All of that is just one example of many of just how great this story is. I would HIGHLY recommend it to anyone and everyone, especially those who (like me) enjoy game novels. There are some parts that I ended up skipping altogether though, as they just weren't super enjoyable for me.

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An example is the VR arc, it was just kinda boring for me, I see why it was needed in the overall story, and it being there honestly improves upon Dale's character even more, but I just didn't like it.

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However, at least with the arcs I did not enjoy, I was able to skip them and didn't feel like I had missed anything, I could easily piece together what happened, and how it effects the story.

Regardless, if I had one complaint about this novel, it would be that there aren't thousands of chapters. I really wish that I wasn't broke as sh*t and could donate to the author, the novels are just good.

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Vividly

Status: c41

Mar 14, 2020

I really like the premise of this story. It had great potential, and could have had creative, unique world building. The author ignored that in favor of a cliche harem. This novel exemplifies everything people don’t like about harems. There is little to no character development, everyone is a pushover, and the story quickly loses any sort of interesting plot. To sum it up, this story is a huge disappointment, and not at all what I was expecting.

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Shade7

Status: chapter 364: i’m back

Jul 22, 2019

It's good. Worldbuilding is fun. (Big friend of world-building)

However, I am now going to attack the weakest part of the story. The romance.

The male lead is Dale, while the female lead is terra. Side female leads seem to be Ryona and Irena.

And these characters do have chemistry, that is to be certain. Problem.

Where is the intimacy? You have put a romance tag, but there is barely anything. It's a problem when this over 360 chapters long story has only one proper moment of intimacy between male lead and female lead.

And there is also the fact that characters in this novel have s*x, but it's practically speaking non-existant. You barely even know that the male lead has even had s*x. That's in big part due to lack of intimacy. I mean hell when he conceived his daughter with Ryona's incarnation there was barely mention of any physical intimacy. At best we got the joke out of it.

Can I get actual flirting, actual intimacy physical or emotional? Like I don't need you to write smut, but just enough so I can consider their relationship legit.

Because right now I can only remember two intimate scenes. One is the date with Irene (if you f**ked that up, I'd swear to god), the other one is when Udona's fake memories are getting dealt with and Terra comes to Dale afterward and share a heartbreaking scene.

So yeah, not a good sign when male lead and female lead have one intimate scene together.

But thankfully that is fixable. Afterall those characters have romantic chemistry. You just need the execution to actually happen.

Honestly, this story is good just on worldbuilding and I am a guy who likes worldbuilding. Thus even if you never get to fixing this flaw, I would still continue reading it.

Hopefully you keep the steady updates coming.

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I_Read_I_Happy

Status: chapter 950

Apr 11, 2024

I am writing this to counter someone else's post. To be clear don't rate a story until you have read a decent portion. Yes, the first 200 chapters are focused on character development rather than the plot, however every good story does a similar thing. If you haven't noticed, most of the people who have read 200+ chapters rate this book over 4 stars.

Even better is the something that other authors don't do and it is explained in the spoiler section below although it doesn't reveal anything about the plot :

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Karami92 does something called FANMAIL. This is pretty much you send your questions about the books and it gets answered in a time called fanmail by the characters of the stories. I love this concept and although I haven't caught up yet to ask some of my own questions I do enjoy reading other people's questions because I often find myself reading questions I would have asked or didn't realise but wanted to ask. Sorry if this doesn't make sense I am not a good writer. I still hope you understood the concept though.

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Next I will be giving my review however there isn't much spoilers and I will do my best to put whatever will give away some of the story in the spoiler brackets.

First off, let's talk about the characters. They're so vivid and relatable; it feels like they're right there with you, going through their adventures. I found myself rooting for them, laughing with them, and even shedding a tear or two at some emotional moments. The character development throughout the story is top-notch, making you truly invest in their journeys. The main character is character is called

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Dale Mitchel

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The world-building is another highlight. From the intricate details of magical realms to the bustling cities filled with diverse cultures, every setting feels alive and captivating. It's like stepping into a whole new universe with each page turn. And let's not forget about the plot twists! Just when you think you've got it all figured out, bam! The author throws in a curveball that keeps you hooked and eager for more. The writing style is smooth and engaging, making it easy to get lost in the story for hours on end. Whether you're a fantasy fanatic or just looking for a thrilling read, "World Keeper" is a must-have in your bookshelf. In summary, 5 out of 5 stars without a doubt. Highly recommend diving into this enchanting world and experiencing the magic for yourself!

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I often find myself frustrated at people's reviews when they barely read any of the book. I am especially frustrated at @Celeste. This person uses mean language and doesn't pay any attention to the author's hard work. How would you feel mate if you spent sooo much time writing a book (1000+ chapters) only for some person to read the first 2 most recent reviews and who harshly criticised the book by writing a careless review saying that the book sucks when you haven't read it. I only ask of people to give this author some respect and have respectful and meaningful reviews whether good or bad.

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Sorry if this review was biased I just wanted to give my honest opinion on the book and give my respects to the author. Keep up @karami92 I love your work!

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cloud-H1

Status: c356

Apr 27, 2023

This story has an interesting concept, at the beginning of the story we will be tested by MC's stupidity and his mistakes over and over again. MC has no leadership or decisive qualities, he is like an employee. The longer it gets boring because we will see the passive MC in doing something. I really hope the author will make another story with a different MC and a firm character And reliable, not some kind of employee.

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Baconbread

Status: c100+

Feb 23, 2023

The pacing is bad, really really bad.

The story just feels bad in general. I don't know how to describe it, But I'll try. It feels stale And dry, Lacking in creativity In general, I dislike the plot For how much it's lacking.

I found more enjoyment eating bread.

The main character, Doesn't have any good character traits. Personality None, Has a habit of making really bad decisions Constantly, He makes his own problems for himself.

Doesn't think things through, I can go on But I'll stop there. The story is just bad in general, If you read it you know what I'm talking about.

I hope you found this helpful.

I stopped reading this a while back I was on chapter 100 and something I can't remember.

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aristocrat

Status: chapter 827: under the sea

Aug 3, 2022

I really enjoy the worldbuilding on display in the novel. There are a lot of moving parts in the background, and only a few things are dumbed down in the beginning. The MC is a Joe Shmo, not a creative genius, so don't expect brilliant out of the box moves from him. Still the solid steady growth is satisfying, I actually identify a lot with the characters in the created worlds in the side stories, and this series is well written and worth sparking your imagination with.

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